【中考写作指导】中考英语（人教）写作话题汇总复习：环境保护和学校生活（共33张PPT）.ppt

1、第三部分 高频话题写作指导,九年级（全）Units 13-14,环境保护 写作导图 分析湖南近3年42套中考真题可知湖南各地市对“环境保护”的话题考查较多，主要分为以下两个命题角度：,1. 记叙你参加过的一次环保活动。如2014邵阳为了响应“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，上周我和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动。 2. 我们能为创建“文明城市”或“国家卫生城市”做些什么？如：2014永州要求以“How to set up a national healthy city?”为题写一篇作文；2013娄底要求写出“我们能为创建文明城市做什么”。 下面以2014邵阳真题为例分析此话题：,Protect

2、 environ- ment: a voluntary activity,when and where,the progress,feelings about this activity,at 8 oclock on Saturday morning last week; train station,clean the benches; pick up the rubbish; advise others not to throw rubbish; sweep the ground,tired; happy; wish more people protect the environment,亮

3、点句型速成 常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful. 推荐句型：If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.,常用句型：We should plant more trees, and we can live better and more healthily. 推荐句型： We are su

4、pposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future. If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and more healthily in the future.,开头句： 1. Its important to protect our environment. 2. As the pollution is becoming worse and worse, we should pay more a

5、ttention to the environment protection.,中间句： 1. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 2. We should not spit in the public place / cut down the trees. 3. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees. 4. We must pick up the rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.,结尾句： 1. Its everyones duty to lo

6、ve and protect the environment. 2. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city. 3. If all of us can do a little thing to protect the environment, Im sure it will make a big difference.,（常用词汇见本书“28天词汇分类速记表”话题 （二十）世界与环境 ）,典例剖析（14邵阳） 假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提

7、出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息： 1. 文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中， 我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、 活动、感受）。 2. 本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其 他人用第三人称。,3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。 4. 词数应不少于80词，不得出

8、现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】 Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. We got to the train station at 8 oclock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and,tidier. First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised othe

9、rs not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.,We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city. Hope to write soon. Best wishes! Your

10、s, Wang Lei,【检测菜单】 1. 捡起，拾起 _ 2. 到处 _ 3. 对做出贡献 _,here and there,make a contribution to,pick up,学校生活 写作导图 分析湖南近3年42套中考真题可知湖南各地市对“学生生活“考查频率很高，主要从以下三个角度来考查： 1. 学生的学习与生活。如：2014张家界要求根据给出的邮件告知笔友自己的学校生活；2014常德中考要求描述初中生活中最值得感谢的人；2013益阳要求以“My middle school life”为题描述自己的中学生活；2013永州中考要求描述自己一天的生活和学习。,2. 描述学生学习和生

11、活的地点。如：2014株洲中考真题要求考生描述自己的教室，并谈论自己即将离开教室的感受。 下面以2014常德中考真题为例分析此话题：,School Days,Study Life,School Activities,School Life,Learning problems,Examination pressure,Boarding/Day school,School sports,Class activities,After-school activities,Things between you and classmates or friends,Things between you an

12、d your teachers,Study methods,亮点句型速成 常用句型：My school life is coming to an end in one month. 推荐句型：How time flies! It will be an ending of my school life in one month.,常用句型：The homework is very difficult, but we must finish it. 推荐句型： The homework is so difficult. But we must try to do it by ourselves a

13、nd finish it on time. No matter how difficult the homework is, we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time.,常用句型：I like playing football. 推荐句型: I like playing football on the playground. I like playing football on the playground with great interest.,开头句： 1. My favorite subject is physics

14、. 2. I will never forget such a knowledgeable teacher in my life. 3. Its always busy during the school days, but its also happy and interesting.,中间句： 1. She is a beautiful woman with long hair. 2. We arent allowed to run in the hallways. 3. I take the subway to school and it takes 25 minutes. 4. The

15、 early bus takes him to school. 5. Wed better take notes while listening to the teacher in class.,结尾句： 1. You have given me so much help that I will never forget you in my life. 2. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 3. Our teachers have taugh

16、t us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.,典例剖析 （2014常德） 初中生活即将圆满结束，至此，你一定有值得感恩的人，请以 “I Love You, My. !” 为题写一篇英文短文。 要求：1. 内容包括该人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘的事等； 2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 3. 词数80以上。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息： 1. 记叙三年的校园生活中值得感恩的人（建议学生先回忆印象深刻的那些点点滴

17、滴）。 2. 第一条要求写出人物的外貌、性格、爱好，这些可以略写，写那些难忘的记忆要详写，多列举实例。写作时用第二人称，时态为一般现在时。,3. 文章最后还要有个人的感受、体悟、观点等信息，避免单纯的记叙事件，没有个人感触。 4. 词数应不少于80个，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】 I Love You, My English Teacher! I love you, my English teacher. Youre a tall man with thick glasses. You like sports and often play football and basketball with us. Youre humorous and always make your classes lively and interesting. Youre kind but strict with us.,You often teach us that its no use