英语人教版九年级全册uation of Writing.ppt

1、,A Letter of Invitation,- an Evaluation Lesson of Writing,Writing Task (the last period),假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7 月18日 报名时间：截止到6月30日 报名地点：北京电视台 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 才艺大赛-talent show,邀请信,邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信

2、，包含三个方面： 1. 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点； 2. 与该活动有关的注意事项； 3. 期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。,Dear _， How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(内容) at/in _(地点) on _(时间) We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at _(具体时间). This will be followed by a _(进一步的安排) At a

3、round _(时间)，_(另一个安排),邀请信模板一, Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is _. Looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Dear_ , Im writing to invite you to _(开门见山提出事件/活动) to be held/hosted by _(举办机构) on _（活动时间）at/in _（活动地点）. It w

4、ould be pleasant/honored to have you here. During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in. First, _(要举行的活动内容一). Second, _(要举行的活动内容二).,邀请信模板二,I know/believe that you will be very interested in_. First/For one thing, _ (受邀请人参加的理由一). Second/For another, _(受邀请人参加的

5、理由二).The conference/party would not be complete without you! The party/conference will begin at _（时间）and we do hope you can come. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Your Excellent Combined Letter,Dear Peter, Hi, Peter. How are you? I read in a newspaper today that “Learn Chinese Sing Chinese Songs” talent show

6、 will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18th. I know youre good at singing. I know that you are learning Chinese in one of universities in Beijing. So I think this show is a good chance for you to learn Chinese well./ I think it is a good chance to improve yourself if you take part in th

7、e talent show./,To be honest, I think it is a good chance./ I think you should try to take part in the show and that will improve your Chinese. If you join it, you will have more fun./ Why not have a try?/ I believe this is a good stage where you can show your singing talent, and how well youve lear

8、ned Chinese. No matter whether you go or not, I will support you. Of course, I think you can try to take part in this activity, which could be beneficial to you. If you are interested in taking part in the competition, I will cheer for you.,If you would like to try, youll have to go to the TV Statio

9、n to sign up before the end of July./ You can go to sign up in the Beijing Television Station before June 30th. If you want to try, there is no doubt that I could help you. / Last but not least, I will always help you, and I believe you can do it. You are the best./ If you need my help I would like

10、to help you./ At last, Im glad to give you a hand./ I will always help you, and I believe you can do it. Yours,/Sincerely yours, Li Hua,Some of you have done a really good job! Lets clap for ourselves.,If you face with these mistaken sentences, how will you feel?,I read the newspaper about “Learn Ch

11、inese Sing Chinese Songs” talent show will be held on Beijing Television Station. I saw in the newspaper that Beijing Television Station will hold foreigner “Learn Chinese Sing Chinese Song” talent show in July this year.,that,Talent Show,in,see,in a,我在今天的报纸上读到了一篇好文章。,I read a good article in todays

12、 paper.,I the airport was widely used during the war. 我获悉飞机场在那场战争中得到广泛使用。（宾从）,have read that,“高中学生的才艺秀”将于五月一日在广州 电视台举行.,A High School Students Talent show will be held in Guangzhou Television Station on May 1 .,时间地点&宾语从句,In my opinion, it is a good opportunity to take part in the talent show.,show y

13、our singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese,这份工作给她提供了出国旅行的机会。 The job gives her to .他获得上大学深造的机会。 He got to for further studies. 这是我练习讲英语的好机会。 This is a good chance for me to .,the opportunity,travel abroad,a chance,go to college,practice speaking English,语意矛盾,You must notice that the show

14、 has signing up before June 30th.,you,sign up,have to,need,Lucy decided to sign up for yoga classes. 露西决定报名上瑜珈课。 If you sign up, Id consider coming to the show. 如果你报名，我会考虑参加的。,主语和谓语,It is like that the winner will obtain the prize.,likely,be awarded/ gain,物价似乎有可能上涨 。 It is that prices will go up.,Th

15、ey obtained a loan from the government. He failed to obtain a scholarship. The champion team will win the cup and prize. He was awarded a prize for excellence in his studies. Her book gained several literary prizes.,likely,词汇用得不当,I think it will good for you, and you can use this opportunity to impr

16、ove your Chinese standard.,will be,take,You must grasp this opportunity. We should seize the opportunity to counterattack. Id like to take this opportunity to thank everyone for their hard work on the project.,我想提高我的英语水平。 I want to .,improve my English,improve living standard improve health improve

17、image improve intonation,谓语和宾语搭配不当,I think you will win the prize if you join in. If you like singing and want to participate in to sign up before June 30th. If you want to, must be sign up before June 30th. If you are interested, you can have a try. And if you need, I can help you.,the Show,it, you

18、ll,you can,in it,help,He is very interested in what are called popular songs. He needs a good nights sleep. They are going to join in the singing. He wanted to have an operation.,及物动词后无宾语,Application site in Beijing Television Station. The match is on July 18th. Registration deadline to June 30th./

19、The show time on July 18th. If you are interested in this activity, you can sign up before June 30 and the registration location is Beijing Television Station.,in,报名时间地点,Long time no see!,书面语和口语互混,Its been a long time sine we met last time. I havent seen you for a long time. Hows everything going? W

20、hat have you been up to?,1.You will have a better understand of Chinese and show your talent. 2. What I think that it is hard for you to learn Chinese, isnt it? 3. I know you are in favor of singing, so you could try to challenge yourself. 4. And I can help you what you need. 5. Show your speak Chin

21、ese ability. 6. You can consider then give me an answer. 7. It can exercise yourself. And check your study results. By the way to exchange the experience of studying Chinese.,8. See you in Beijing recently to learn Chinese. 9. Its will help you improve you Chinese. 10. I think it is a good opportunity for you to make your Chinese get a rise.,1. 时间地点&宾语从句 2. 语意有矛盾 3. 主语和谓语（语态错误） 4. 词汇用得