书面表达 (2).ppt

1、1.他身体很好。 学生常用法：He has a very good body. 英语习惯表达法1：He is in good health. 2: He is very good healthy.,避免汉语式英语,回目录页,下一页,避免汉语式英语,2.我的英语水平很低。 学生常用法：My English level is low. 英语习惯表达法: My English is very poor.,回目录页,下一页,避免汉语式英语,3.我选择当一名大夫有三个理由。 学生常用法：My choice to be a doctor has three reasons. 英语习惯表达法: There

2、are three reasons for my choice to be a doctor.,回目录页,下一页,避免汉语式英语,4.我希望我的英语水平能提高。 学生常用法：I hope my English level will be raised. 英语习惯表达法: I hope my English will improve.,回目录页,下一页,避免汉语式英语,5.如果方便请明天给我打电话。 学生常用法：If you are convenient, please call me tomorrow. 英语习惯表达法: If it is convenient for you, please

3、call me tomorrow.,回目录页,下一页,避免汉语式英语,6.七、八月放暑假。 We have summer vacation in July and August. 7.本剧院内禁止吸烟。 Smoking is not allowed in this theatre.,回目录页,教你如何选择句型,一、根据主语来决定句型 1.自从我到纽约以来，已经五年了. It is five years since I came to New York. Five years has passed since I came to New York. I have been in New York

4、 for five years.,回目录页,下一页,教你如何选 择句型,2.从我家步行到学校需30分钟。 It takes half an hour to walk from my house to our school. Our school is half an hours walk from my house.,回目录页,下一页,教你如何选择句型,二、根据动词来决定句型 1.那边人山人海。 There are a large number of people there.,回目录页,下一页,教你如何选择句型,2.等他也没有用。 It is no use waiting for him.

5、3.我将你借给我的那本书弄丢了，实在很抱歉。 I am very sorry to tell you that Ive lost the book you lent me.,回目录页,下一页,教你如何选择句型,三、根据句子成分决定句型 1.5 月 30日，星期二，下午二点，请全校师生到大教室听报告。 All teachers and students of the school are requested to meet in the Big CLASSROOM at 2:00 pm. on Tuesday (May 30) to hear a report.,回目录页,下一页,教你如何选择句

6、型,2.我现在是三年级的学生，再过半年，我就要中学毕业了。 I am now in Grade 3 and in half a year I will graduate from middle school.,回目录页,一、段落的统一性,一个段落应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面；应该只叙述一件事情， 或一件事情的某一个阶段。也就是说，一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想以外的句子都是不可取的。,一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细节都应支持主题句，不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题，要尽可能多地提供细节，但又要避免滥用细节。 下图是一

7、个有统一性的段落的结构图。 主题句(topic sentence） _Supporting Sentence 1 _ Supporting Sentence 2 _ Supporting Sentence 3 _ Supporting Sentence 4,二、段落的完整性,一个段落的主题思想靠发展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有发展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。,In my English study, I have many difficulties. My first difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large. The s

8、econd difficulty I have is that I can not write well. The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough. Now I have a plan to study English well.,主题句：I have many difficulties. 发展句：具体说明困难 My first difficulty; The second difficulty ; The third difficulty . 结尾句： Now I have a pl

9、an,篇章结构：,分析： 本段落看似完整，有头有尾。但由于缺少实质内容即对学英语的困难的原因的分析，文章显得空洞无物；此外，结尾句讲到了plan,具体内容有没有交待，给人留下话好像没说完的感觉。 修改如下：,In my English study, I have many difficulties. The following are some of them. My first difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large. As a result, I can not read fast and understand well. As I am

10、 coming to middle age, it is not so easy to keep many new words in mind quickly.,过渡句,分析词汇量小的害处,进一步分析问题的原因,The second difficulty I have is that I can not write well. As I have been very busy with my work which really doesnt need any foreign language, I seldom have a chance to write something in Engli

11、sh. The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough. This is because I had little training in listening while I was at college.,造成这一问题的原因,造成这一问题的原因,To get over these difficulties, I have worked out a plan. I plan to read one or two pages of English, such as China Daily, 21

12、st Century English or some easy novels, in order to memorize the words on the one hand and keep in touch with the current news on the other.,主题句,具体措施-1,表明目的,I will try to keep a diary in English and practice writing at least twice a week. And finally I will try to listen to English cassettes two or

13、three days. I believe that so long as I practice, I will be able to read, write, and understand better.,具体措施-2,具体措施-3,结尾句，表明态度,写作注意的几个问题：,尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。 把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。,注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become, Whats more;

14、What worse, not onlybut also, neithernor 等等。 再有学生语文水平的滑坡，使得英语老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的挖掘。,写作注意的几个问题：,选词：普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。,写作注意的几个问题：,措辞：能写出树的具体名称an apple tree, 就不要使用tree; 能说清具体数字时，就不要使用some;知道是某种专门的活动，就不要使用do去描述，词意越具体，越能给读者鲜明的印象。,写作注意的几个问题：,你如何写开头,1.开头常用词语： as far as

15、we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说,1.结尾常用词语： after all 毕竟at last 最后in a word 总而言之finally, 最后we hope that 我们希望,你如何写结尾,如何添加过度句、连接词,补充说明 for example, besides，In addition(此外）， Whats worse! Whats more! Worst of all. 转折 however, yet, but 原因 thanks to,

16、because of 结果 as a result , so ，sothat,范文2：I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First， some of us arent interested in English. They think studying English is such a boring thing to do. And then Its so difficult for us to remember all t

17、he words in the texts. So lots of us,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,dont have enough confidence to keep up English study . And we are always afraid to join in the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we hadnt meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant und

18、erstand the main idea, let alone,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us ? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. Yours Fang Hua

19、,近年中考写作的特色：描述+看法/感想,1.写这类作文要求同学们先审题，弄清图示情境中的故事梗概。审题的内涵较广，不仅只对作文题的审视，也包括审视写作提示词、主题句、图以及对作文字数的要求。审题一旦出现偏误，就会“差之毫厘，谬以千里”。大部分同学不会写作，主要原因是不会审题, 通过审题， 抓取有效信息。考题在描述上是有限定的， 发表看法及感想是自由发挥的。,范文1：,在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，

20、语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。,学生的优秀范文 （15分）,AS we all know, Its important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook the lunch . I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy.

21、 Besides,Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）,学生的优秀范文 （15分）,Watering th

22、e flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）,学生的优秀范文 （15分）,例如新标准英语九年级上Page 34有这样一句话： Im lo

23、oking forward to this. (仿写1) Im looking forward to hearing from you. (信尾使用） (仿写2) Im looking forward to your reply. (仿写3) I look forward to the summer holiday.,仿写,句式富于变化,例如；1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday. -Jack didnt came home until 7am yesterday. 2. We are good friends. We should help each other

24、. ( good) -We are good friends and we should help each other. (better) -As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( best),3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good ) -I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better) -I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best)

25、,句式富于变化,注： 大错误指： 句子结构，谓语构成，词序，语态，时态等方面； 小错误指： 名词单复数，第三人称单数，拼写，标点符号，大小写方面。,3.成文之后,. 一般语法项目的检查,人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English.,. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句),Jim

26、works very hard. So does Jack.(前后主语非一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主语为一人) He didnt know where the bookshop was. The boys want to know how they should do it.,. 符合习惯 My work is very busy.,I very much like it.,Im very busy with my work.,I like it very much.,卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,卷面不工整扣5分,

27、、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 语态、时态要准确无误。 主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 注意人称代词的宾格形式。 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的 an 不能写成 a。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 C. 顿号 、 无,、描写人物时，要生动具体 外表特征： （tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等） 服饰颜色： （red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等） 内心境界： （glad, happy, s