艺考生课程――作文第七十讲

1、2015年学大教育艺考生课程作文第七十讲消灭字数困扰适用学科英语适用年级高三适用区域全国通用课时时长（分钟）1课时/60分钟知识点地点状语从句；非限定性定语从句教学目标知识：1、掌握地点状语从句的用法及非限定性定语从句的用法。方法：牢记地点状语从句及非限定性定语从句的用法，并能灵活运用。能力：根据作文要求精确选择合适的单词及汉语逻辑进行表达。教学重点1、地点状语从句及其变式，非限定性定语从句。教学难点1、从句陈述语序及扩展特点教学过程一、 课堂导入同样一道菜，东方和西方的厨师对待的方法非常不同：西方：盐5克，糖15克，加水500克东方：盐少许，糖适量，加水若干两种不同的文化造就了其非常不同的语

2、言特色。东方重个性化，西方重统一化。而在语言之中，更是如此。汉语的强调句靠重音，英语靠it is that结构，反映在作文中也是如此。故学习英语作文，更重要注重的先是结构。二、复习预习教师引导学生分析目前写作文中遇到的困境及试图的突围方案（提问、讨论），最后教师做一总结。 学生作文的困境：字数不够，语法错误过多，无话可写，耗时太长，深度不够。 引导学生寻找解决方案。如学生无方案则引入本节话题：消灭字数困扰注意：本节讲解的所有内容均建立在不讲述语法的情况下，故更多在讲解和训练中突出的就是无语法而写句子，并将该观点渗透在学习中，给学生带来新鲜的学习方式和学习效果。三、知识讲解知识点1：地点状语从句

3、的用法本节讲解的地点状语从句仅限于where引导的状语从句用法，且结构只有一个，其他结构均由此结构衍化而来。1. Where there is A, there is B. 翻译：有A的地方，就有B. （A/B名词、代词、Ving等） 如：Where there is a computer, there is convenience. 有电脑的地方就有便利。 Where there is convenience, there is easy life. 有便利的地方就有舒适的生活。2. 【考查点】如从句主语为代词，则不可倒装。如：Where there I am, there is happi

4、ness.3. 该句式还可衍化为：Where there is A, there is a chance for us to do sth 有A的地方就有机会做如：Where there is a computer, there is a chance for us to enjoy convenience有电脑的地方，就有机会让我们享受便利。Where there is A, there is no B. 有A的地方就没有B如：Where there is a policeman, there is no thief. 有警察的地方，就没有贼。Where there is a place w

5、here people do sth, there is B.有人们做.的地方就有B如：Where there is a place where people enjoy convenience, there is easy life. Where there is a place where people do not litter, there is clean life.Where there is a place where people do sth,there is a chance for us to do sth有人们能做的地方，我们就有机会做如：Where there is

6、a place where people drink wine, there is a chance for us to suffer accidents.人们喝酒的地方，就有可能发生事故。知识点2：非限定性定语从句的用法本节讲解的非限定性定语从句为： I.句子，from which we can see that+陈述句 II.句子，because of which we can see that+陈述句1.【易错点】前提：必须是某句之后，不可单独成句。如：Two heads are better than one，from which we can see that we should p

7、ut our heads together.He did not come back that night, because of which he was punished the next day.VS,from which we can see that+陈述句，because of which we can see that+陈述句 Where there is A, there is a chance for us to do sth Where there is A, there is no B. Where there is a place where people do sth

8、, there is B.Where there is a place where people do sth,there is a chance for us to do sthWhere there is A, there is B. 知识点3：两个句式结合的写法例1：（此处强调让学生看到字数的统计和写作时间的把控）Where there is a place where people do sth, there is a chance for us to do sth，from which we can see that+陈述句Where there is a place where p

9、eople help the old, there is a chance for us to enjoy happy life，from which we can see that it is our duty to help the old.例2：Where there is a place where people do sth, there is B, because of which we can see that+陈述句Where there is a place where people do their a bit for our environment, there is h

10、ealthy and happy life, from which we can see that it is our duty to refuse littering.例3Where there is A, there is B，from which we can see that Where there is water, there is life, from which we can see that we should save water as much as possible.四、例题精析【例题1】翻译：有他的地方，就没有忧愁，由此我们可以看到我们应该邀请他一起去出游。_【答案】

11、Where there he is, there is no worry, from which we can see that we should invite him to go out for a tour.【解析】本题考察的是当从句主语是代词的时候其语序问题及如何补充其他简单单词的过程，故此处为there he is，而不是there is he.【例题2】翻译：Where there is a Bole, there is a chance for us to see real Qianli horse, because of which we can see that findin

12、g a real Bole is your job now._【答案】有伯乐的地方，就有机会让我们来看到千里马，因此我们可以看到寻找真正的伯乐就是你现在的任务。【解析】本题考查对于本节结构的掌握和了解，并注意Ving作主语的翻译，均翻译为一件事情。【例题3】翻译：有人们抵制作弊的地方，就有好的学习风气，由此我们可以看到是该抵制作弊时候了。【答案】Where there is a place where people refuse cheating, there is a good atmosphere for study, from which we can see that it is ti

13、me that we refused cheating.【解析】本题考查对本节句式的熟练掌握和单词的选择，并考察了“是该做时候了”这个虚拟语气句式的掌握，注意，该句式的谓语为过去式。五、课堂运用【基础】1.翻译：有太阳的地方，就有温暖，因此我们可以看到太阳对我们非常重要。_【答案】Where there is the sun, there is warmth, from which we can see that the sun is of great importance to us.【解析】考查句式的掌握和词汇的选用，并注意，将形容词替换成为“of+抽象名词”更利于句式的多样化变换。2翻译

14、：Where there is a place where people recite ancient Chinese, there is a chance for us to enjoy the beauty of ancient Chinese，from which we can see that it is time that we held the competition of reciting the ancient Chinese poems._【答案】有人们背诵古汉语的地方，就有机会让我们来领略古汉语之美，由此我们可以看到是我们该举办中国古诗背诵大赛时候了。【解析】考查对句式的理

15、解和翻译，同时考察学生对于虚拟语气句式的认识和翻译。3翻译有人反对吸烟的地方，就没有吸烟者。_有人崇尚勇敢的地方，就无惧死亡。_【答案】Where there is a place where people are against smoking, there is no smoker.Where there is a place where people admire bravery, there is no fear to death.【解析】题干中 “反对”，翻译为“be against”，而“就没有”翻译为：there is no。【巩固】4. 翻译有奋斗的地方就有机会让你看到成功，由

16、此我们可以看到是该努力奋斗时候了。_【答案】Where there is struggle, there is a chance for us to see success, from which we can see that it is time that we worked hard.【解析】本句后半句使用虚拟语气，注意使用时候的时态问题。5. 翻译：有人们认真工作的地方，就没有饥饿和寒冷，因此我们可以看到努力工作是非常重要的。_【答案】Where there is a place where people work hard, there is no hunger as well as

17、 coldness, because of which we can see that working hard is of great importance.【解析】注意本句后半句的“非常重要”可译为“of+抽象名词”结构。6.翻译：有他的地方，就有机会看到精彩的魔术表演，因此我们应该邀请他来参加我们班的活动。_【答案】Where there he is, there is a chance for us to see wonderful magic performance, because of which we should invite him to take part in the

18、activity of our class.【解析】本句中的主语为代词，代词在从句中是不倒装的，故注意此处的不倒装情况。【拔高】7.最近，有一批美国学生将要参观你校自行车俱乐部，校方要求你给他们介绍一下自行车俱乐部的情况。请按以下要点写一篇发言稿。 1是交友和锻炼的场所； 2每周两次训练课； 3提供免费专业骑车设备； 4可参加市里比赛； 5感兴趣的均可报名。 注意：1词数：100左右；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3开头结尾已为你写好(不计总数)。 参考词汇：自行车俱乐部 Cycling C1ub Good morning，dear friendsWelcome to our schoo1

19、_ 任务：请用本节的某个结构写出文中需要的关于地点状语从句使用的表达。_【答案】Where there is our club, there is a chance for you to make friends with others and get health, from which we can see that taking part in our club is of great use to you. (36 words) Where there is a place where people ride bikes, there is health, because of whi

20、ch we sincerely invite you to take part in our club. (25 words) 【解析】说出参加本俱乐部的优势为本文非常重要的一个步骤，故在写作时候一定考虑到文章的需要和目前具备句式的关系，寻找其契合点。8. 据高考不到六十天的时间了，很多高考生家长都为孩子请来高考保姆，学校挂高考倒计时牌，每天上午、下午第一节课前，由老师带领全班学生喊口号对于家长和学校的这些做法人们褒贬不一。请根据以上说明、写作要点和写作要求，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点：1赞成者观点；2反对者观点；3自己的观点。 任务：请用本节的某个结构写出文中需要的关于地点状语

21、从句使用的表达。_【答案】Where there is a place where parents help their children do everything, there is a chance for their children to devote all their time to studying, from which we can see that parents love is of great importance for their children, while other people do not think so. They believe that whe

22、re there is a place where people do so, there is few chance for children to be independent, so it is time that parents let children do what they should do.【解析】根据文章意思选择合适句式，文章中体现的就是父母帮助孩子的利与弊，故在选择句型的时候必须考虑文章的主题意思。9. 根据下图写出你的看法。_【答案】From the picture we can see that where there is a place where two par

23、tners do not share the same goal, there is no chance for them to get success, from which we can see that sharing the same goal is of great importance.【解析】图中所示的情况为目标不一致的情况，故在写句子的时候，一定突出“一致”“不一致”这样的主题，便于在写作的时候能找到好的思路。课程小结本节课主要围绕关于地点状语从句及非限定性定语从句在作文中的用法进行较为详实的展开讲解，并解决了学生困扰的几大问题，给学生提供动力和信心是本节课一个非常大的要求，并

24、且采用一种学生没有使用过的作文形式，更能大大增加学生参与写作的热情，并潜移默化将地点状语从句、非限定性定语从句、it is time that虚拟语气及 “of+抽象名词”形式融入其中，形成一定的语言习惯，给后面进行相关专题讲解时候带来一定便利。不强调语法而进行语法写作，这是本节课一个非常重要的课题，也是教学中的一种创新和应用，故在教学中多进行互动性的训练，给学生提供更多实战性场景，尽情展现结构在作文中的妙用，给下一节课的参与注入最大的动力。课后作业【基础】1.翻译：Where there is a place where some people gather, there is a chance for me to learn something useful from one of them._【答案】三人行，必有我师【解析】本题考查学生对于结构的掌握和应用，用学生对于词汇的感知及对于汉语的了解进行翻译，容易调动其参与