人教版新课标 必修四Unit 1 Women of achievement Writing (共11张PPT).ppt

1、Women of achievement,Unit 1,【写作任务】 你接受了一项写作任务，要为校英语报写 一篇人物介绍。,【写作要求】,只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。,* 顶峰summit; * 人格魅力charisma,一、写作分析 1. 写作思路：这是一篇人物介绍类写作。写作时要围绕所写人物组织材料，包括：人物、时间、地点、主要事件以及对人物的简要评价等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。写作前，我们可根据题目提供的信息首先列出所需要的单词和短语；然后把这些词语扩充成句子；最后根据所给信息，使用适当的过渡词语把这些句子连成一篇短文。 2. 时态与人称分析：介绍人物

2、的事迹通常要用一般过去时，涉及到人物评价时可用一般现在时；人称用第三人称。,【写作分析与指导】,二、词句储备 1. 写作中可能使用的词语有： (1)探险家_ (2)鲜为人知的_ (3)独自_ (4)开设_ (5)网站_ (6)分享_ (7)冒险_ (8)设定目标_,least known,explorer,by oneself /alone,set up/start/create,website,share,adventure,set goals,二、词句储备 1. 写作中可能使用的词语有： (9)放弃_ (10)尊重_ (11)一生_ (12) 对产生深远影响 _ (13)此外_ (14)成

3、功地做某事_ (15)为了_ (16) 一代人 _,respect,give up,all ones life/through ones life,have a deep effect on.,in addition,succeed in doing sth.,in order to,generation,2.写作中可能使用的句子有： (1) 海伦塞娅于1938年出生在新西兰，是一位伟大的女探险家。,Helen Thayer, who was born in New Zealand in 1938, is a great woman explorer.,(2)她一生中登过世界上许多高山的顶峰，

4、去过很多鲜为人知的地方。,Through her life she managed to reach the summits of many highest mountains and many least known places on the earth.,(4)她开设了Adventure Classroom网站，在那里分享她的冒险经历，鼓励人们要树立远大目标，为成功做好计划，永不言弃。,(3)在她50岁时，成功地徒步到达北极，成为历史上第一位独身去北极旅行的女性。,When she was 50 years old, she walked to the North Pole by her

5、self, making her the first woman in history to travel alone to the North Pole.,She set up a website called Adventure Classroom, in which she shares her adventures in order to inspire people to set great goals, plan for success and never give up.,(5)海伦塞娅的冒险精神和人格魅力赢得了人们的尊重，对新一代探险家和科学家产生了深远的影响。,Helen T

6、hayers spirit of adventure and charisma not only win peoples respect, but also have a deep effect on a new generation of explorers and scientists.,三、下笔成文 Helen Thayer, born in New Zealand in 1938, is a great woman explorer. All her life she succeeded in reaching the summits of many highest mountains

7、 and many least known places on the earth. At the age of 50, she walked to the North Pole by herself, making her the first woman in history to travel alone to the North Pole. In addition, she started a website called Adventure Classroom, in which she shares her adventures in order to inspire people

8、to set great goals, plan for success and never give up. Not only do Helen Thayers spirit of adventure and charisma win peoples respect, but also have a deep effect on a new generation of explorers and scientists.,【点评】 本文要点齐全，重点突出，篇章结构清晰，语言流畅自然，使用了丰富的语法结构，如使用了过去分词作定语 (.called Adventure Classroom)，动词-ing形式作状语 (.makin