上海2015年高考英语一模冲刺讲义(写作)

1、.精锐教育学科教师辅导讲义学 号：年 ：高三课 时 数： 3学 姓名： 科目：英 学科教 ：授 型c 表、 片作文学 c 用 作文学 t 作文能力提升授 日期及 段教学内容一. 专题知识梳理知识点 1：图表作文一 . 表作文考 形式：1. 是以 表格 形式 ,将 的数据或被 明的事物直接用表格形式体 出来,即 表。2. 是以 形 形式表示数据 化的曲 ；表示数据的大小或数量之 的差异的条形 ；表示 体内部 构 化的扇形 。二 . 表作文常用的写作模板参考模板一：as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the t

2、able(graph/picture/pie/chart), _ (作文 目的 ) has been on rise/ decrease (goes up /increases / drops / decreases),significantly /dramatically /steadily rising /decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _. from the sharp/marked decline/ rise inthe chart, it goes without saying that _.there are at least two good rea

3、sons accounting for _. on the one hand, _. on the other hand,_ is due to the fact that _. in addition, _ is参考模板二：accordingto the graph, _ ( 表 果 ). the _ amount rises from_ to_ while_ climbs from _ to _（数据）, both of which demand our prompt attention. as a citizen/student,my suggestions to _ ( 点出主 ） a

4、re listed as follows.to begin with, _ ( 建 一 ). _（ 点） . in addition, _ ( 建 二 ). _（ 点） . thirdly,_ ( 建 三 ). _ （ 点） .in a word, only if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to _(重申主题 ), can we make contributions to _.( 美好生活的向往 )三 . 表写作常用句型及短 .1.the data from the pie chart sho

5、ws that _ ranks firsthowever, the least proportion goes to_ at only 9%型）at 58% , whichis followedby_ at 33% .（ 表数据 文章第一段可能遇到的 典句2. the graph/chart/table above shows 3. from the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.4.as (正如 ) is shown in the graph, .5.it has been shown from the table thatfacts1.the

6、re was a great /slight increase /rise in2.there has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in3.the rate dropped slightly from 38%in to 31% in4.by comparison with, it decreased/increased/fell from to 5. statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year.6. the population ow

7、ning mobile phones increased by 10% in 1999.reasons:1.the reason why/for is that2.one may think of the change as a result of 3.the change in largely resultsfrom the fact that4.this brings out the important fact that5. . is the key factor (因素 ) in6.there are several causes for this significant growth

8、 in .first, .second, ：1. in a word ,/ in short, （ 而言之） / generally speaking（ 的来 ）2.in summary, it is important3.from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion(得出 ） that 4.obviously/apparently很明 地） , if we want to , it is necessary提出建 ：1.there is no doubt that(毫无疑 ) attentionmust be p

9、aid to2.i suggest (建 )the government take effective measures to3.personally , i think( 就我来看 ) the “ golden week” should remain, for 渡 ：常用 折， 比及比 的 ： while, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as as, the same as, be similar to, more than, less than常用描写 化的 ：表示上升的 increase, ris

10、e, go up,表示下降的 reduce, drop, go down, fall,表示平 及其他 remain, slowly, slightly, gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of 及,from比 ，to倍数句型等。知识点 2：图片作文一 . 片作文考 ：以一 或多 片（如 12年高考两 ）的形式考 ，常要求 要描述 片内容， 合生活 或自己的 就 片的主 或所反映的 象及 点 自己的感想。.二 . 片作文常用的写作思路一般采用三段式：第一段，描述 片， 系 片所反 的某种社会 象，亮出自己 点；as is vividly shown

11、in the picture, （描述 片内容） . it s a common phenomenon that（ 合 象） . as far as i m concerned,（亮i出自己 点） my reasons are listed as follows:第二段，分析自己的理由；to begin with, （理由 1）； what s more,（理由 2）； finally, （理由 3）。 it s high time for（就 片所反 象 行呼吁）。as for （ 而言），they ought to; andfor（ 其它人而言），it s essentialto。第三段，

12、得出 。in conclusion, it s sb s duty to do sth.三 . 片作文常用表达1. 描述 片：in the picture, ; as we can see in the picture, ; as is vividly shown in the picture,2. 引入 象when it comes to ; it is common that ; recentlyphenomenonthe has aroused wide concern that3. 呈 点in my opinion, ; in my view, ; as far as i m conc

13、erned, ; from my point of view, ; iview/opinion that ; my opinion is that ; i think/believe/consider thatollows;myreasons. are listed athe following are my reasons.二. 专题精讲1. 表作文最近学校在高中学生中做了一次”有 向 ” (to whom do you go when in trouble)的 活 ， 果如 所示。 你 要描述 果，并 合自己 的 ， 想法 和理由。参考范文a survey has been conduct

14、ed among senior high students on the topic “ towhom do you go when introuble.the” data from the pie chartshows that “ classmatesand friendsranks”firstat 58%, whichisfollowed by“ their own” at 33%. however,theleast proportion goes to“ parents and teachers” at only 9%.as far as i am concerned , i mnot

15、 among the majoritythat tends to ask friends for help. i am more.willing to go to parents and teachers and i thinkmy peers should also consider going to them when in trouble.firstly, parents and teachers may know more about you than yourselves. since theyhave a more objectiveand all-aroundperspectiv

16、eon you , they arebound togive you usefuladvice. what smore, parents andteachers are experienced adults who musthave sufferedmanyworriesand hardships . they must haveaccumulated much experiencewhich canbroaden your horizonswhen you deal with matters. last but notleast, by havingconstant communicatio

17、nswithyour parents and teachers, you are sure to strengthen therelationship with them despite the generation gap. in a word, to go to adults when in trouble may helpyoumore when you are in difficulty.for the reasons above, iwant to callonmypeersto communicatemore oftenwith their parents andteachers.

18、2. 图片作文简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。参考范文：as is vividly shown in the picture, when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all her family memberswere around, protecting herin case anything unexpected should happen, which did annoy the girl as she reallywanted to manage it herself.it s a common phenom

19、enon that parents care too much about their children.asfar as i m concerned, i don t think it wise for parents to overprotect their children. my reasons are listed asfollows :to begin with , too much love from parents will spoil a child andmakes it hard for children togetalong with others because a

20、spoilt child is usually self-centered and unconfident.what s more, if parents takepains to pave way for theirchildren. chances are that they will be at a loss as to how to deal with a toughproblem in future, which will cause them to be eliminated from the fierce competition. finally, overprotectionw

21、ill prevent children fromfurther developing theiroverall ability, thushaving a negative effect ontheirall-round development.it s high time for parents and children tothink over this situation.as for parents， they ought togive children more space to try, to succeed and even to face up to the failure.

22、 and for children,it s essential tobe independent of their parents.in conclusion , it s parents duty to show love for their children; however, they shouldfindthe balancebetween holding and letting-go.三专题过关检测 1：以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例。请简要描述该图，选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。简要写出文章提纲：检测 2:directions:write an en

23、glish composition in over 120 words according to the instructionsgiven below inchinese.请简要描述图片内容，并联想生活实际谈谈你的感想。简要写出文章提纲：四学法提炼图表作文写作：第一点：图表作文与平时所熟悉的夹叙夹议文差别不大，主要是在开头部分注意下就可以，中间依然是论证部分，可按照夹叙夹议文写作的格式进行。第二点：写作步骤：（1）注意审题（ 2）列提纲（可参考自己学过的作文结构模板）（3）进行句式运用，成文，注意长短句结合，多用所学短语（ 4）检查（注意时态和人称，句式表达是否出现连词错误）图片作文写作：在

24、描述图片内容时一定要注意分析图片所反应的社会现象，并用一定的过度语将图片内容与社会现象结合起来，注意挖掘图片背后所隐含的意思。.一. 专题知识梳理知识点 1：书信写作常用句型一 . 信件开头常用语1. 写信给他人im writing to tell you about the discussion (the lecture/ meeting/ activity) we (our class/ our school) held yesterday.im writing to ask if you can come next week.2. 回信给他人your letter came to me

25、this morning.i have received your letter of july 20th.thank you for your letter.二 . 信件常用结束语1. please remember me to your whole family.2. wish you a pleasant journey.3. wish you success. /wish you the best of health.4. looking forward to your next visit to china.5. looking forward to the pleasure of

26、meeting you.6. looking forward to your early reply.7. expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.8. hoping to hear from you soon.9. your early reply will be highly appreciated.10. with best regards to your family.11. with love and good wishes.12. best wishes/regards!知识点 2：申请信写作要求及妙语模板一 . 写作点拨：申请

27、信类型很多包括求职信（如申请做志愿者），报考申请信，留学申请信等；写申请信应注意语言言简意赅，语气诚恳礼貌，避免夸张。申请信一般包括：申请原因、具备条件 /阐述想法、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请，表示谢意，期盼回复。具体为：第一段引入事件，说明写信目的。第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。第三段提出请求，表示感谢盼复。二 . 词句模板：1. 好词集锦considerable，confident ， suitable， extremely ， pleased， grateful ， especially ，opportunity ， position ，.apply for ， be good at

28、，allow ， would like to ， offer ，o consideration.2. 说明应聘原因常用语a. i learned from sb./the newspaper that your company wanted to .b. i was told that .c. i have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a .d. i am writing to inquire opportunities for .e. i am writing to you to inquire if

29、there would be any position available for me to work as a.f. i am writing to apply for the job.g. i have learned from your advertisement that a .is wanted in your company.3. 介绍个人优势常用语a. now i would like to introduce myself to you.b. my name is tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.c. i graduated from

30、.in 2012.d. i like/am fond of swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.e. i work hard and i can get along /on well with others.f. i am good at english and especially my spoken english is fairly good.g. i master english and i talk to foreigners in english freely.h. i am currently studying .i. i

31、 would be interested in .j. my main specialization is.4. 表示感谢及请求常用语a. thank you for your consideration of my application.b. if you agree with me, ill work hard and try to be a.c. i am available for interview.d. i am looking forward to hearing from you.e. if you agree with me, please write to me or p

32、hone me. my telephone number is.f. i am writing to you in the hope that i may obtain an opportunity to .g. i would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.h. thank you for considering my application and i am looking forward to your early reply.j. i greatly appreciate any of your fa

33、vorable consideration of my application.k. i would be very grateful if you could consider my application and could send me about.l. apart from doing sth., i may as well work as .5. 参考模板model one:dear.,i am extremely pleased to see (报纸、广告）for the position （职位） . and im writing to apply for（职位） .i am

34、confident that i am suitable for （职位） . on one hand,（原因） . on the other hand,（原因） .i shall be much honored if you will offer me the opportunity to （尝试） . i am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.your sincerely,model two:dear.i write this letter to apply for the position that y

35、ou have advertised in (报纸） of 发布时间） .i am from. as a/an, i have been. besides, i won in. if you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at.i will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./thank you for considering my application andi am looking forward to meting you.yo

36、urs sincerely知 点 3：建 信一 . 建 信的格式：第一部分，自我介 ；第二部分，描述事情的状况和存在的 第三部分，提出你的建 第四部分，希望二 . 常用表达1. 常用于提出建 的句子a. i m writing to express my views on/concerning the topic ofb. you have asked for some advice concerning and i will try to give you my suggestions.c. i would like to suggestthatd. i am writing in repl

37、y toe. in my opinion, i would sayf. probably you should/ you d better / you might as well / you are supposed tog. i suggest that the present system under which marks are being given for reading be modified.h. i, therefo re, propose thati. i think/believe it would be better/very helpful / beneficial

38、if youj. it is desirable that 是可取的.k. i would like to suggest/ recommend that why notl. it would help to this wouldm. perhaps there could be2. 常用于建 信 尾的句子a. i hope that you may consider doingb. i would be ready to further discuss this decision.c. i trust you will take my suggestions into account.d.

39、i look forward to hearing from you about what you plan to do on this matter.e. i hope could take this suggestions into consideration.f. i d like to make this proposal, and trust that it will meet with your sympathetic consideration.3. 参考模板model one:dear _,you have asked me for my advice with regard

40、to （关于）_ , and i will try to make some practicalsuggestions here.in my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _（建 的内容）.i hope you will find these proposals （提 ） useful, and i would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.yours sincerely,li ming.model two:dear,i

41、 am writing to make some suggestions as to / i am writing to express my views concerningwithregard to , and i will try to make some constructive suggestions here.in my opinion, you would be wise to / i would like to suggest first that with the help ofbesides/in addition/what smore/ furthermore, if y

42、ou , you would be able tofinally/ last but not least/, you may consider this wayi sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration, and your prompt迅速的 attention tomy suggestions would be highly appreciated./ i hope you will find these proposals useful, and i would be readyto discu

43、ss this matter with you to further details.yours sincerely,li hua二. 专题精讲1. 申 信directions: write an english composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.假如你是启明中学（ming qi middle school）的李明，想申 成 “ 共 ”的暑期志愿者。根据以下启事，写一封申 信（信中不能提到真 姓名和学校）。志 愿 者 招 募 共 是由民 起的 心公益 ，主要致力

44、于 困地区儿童相关的援助 目。我 期待你的加入！ 位 1：网 （webpage editor） 位 2：影像制作（cameraman） 位 3： 管理 （forum administrator ） 位 4：活 （event organizer）有意者 来信告知：1) 你个人的基本情况；2) 你所申 的 位和申 的理由；参考范文：i am li ming from ming qi middle school. recently i have learned from your webpage that“ aigongxian”is a public organization whose majo

45、r work involved programs relevant to helping children in poverty-stricken areas. almost at the same time, word came to our school that you were recruiting some volunteers during thissummer vacation. i d like to join you without the slightest hesitation, and my reasons are as follows.to begin with, i

46、 prefer to apply for the post of a cameraman. not only am i fond of taking photos, but i alsohave professional skills. i believe that people willhave a clearer knowledge of the livingconditions of thechildren there through my photos.apart from what i have mentioned above, i believe that my photos wi

47、ll appeal to more people to realize thelack of education in remote areas as well as the increasingly large gap between urban cities and countries.consequently, there will be more kind people to join you to improve the children s living conditionsin a nutshell, i am eager to do my part as a volunteer

48、 of you. poverty has become a social phenomenon andno easy way is at hand to tackle it. however, it highs time that everyone volunteered to help poor children.combined effortswillmake a great difference.i hope that you willaccept me as a cameraman in theorganization. (232 words)2. 建议信假如你是一位大学毕业生，请以李

49、明的署名给报纸编辑写一封信。信中要包括以下内容：1） 目前大学毕业生就业中存在的问题；2） 你对这些问题的看法和建议。参考范文：dear editor,i m a college graduate. now i am writing to talk about the employment issue of college graduate. i think,besides the financial crisis, there are other reasons why college graduates find it hard to get a job.college students

50、aim too high. all they want are“ good ” jobs offering good salary, comfortable workingconditionsand high social status. consequently, most college graduates are unwillingto accept jobs theyconsider not“ good ” enough. another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study incollege and the demands of those vacant positions.solution to the problem requires efforts of both the society and the stud