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1、图表类作文模板句型Ascanbeseenfrom/inthechart/diagram/table/graph.从表格/图形中我们可以看到Accordingto/AsisshownintheTable/Figure/Chart.如表格/图表中显示Itcanbeseenfromthechart/diagram/table/graph/figures/statisticsthat.从表格/图表/数据中我们可以看到Fromthetable/figures/data/results/informationabove,itcan/maybeseen/concluded/shown/estimated/c

2、alculated/inferredthat.从以上的表格/图表/数据/结果/信息中,我们可以看到/总结/预测/计算/得出Thetableshowsthechangesinthenumberof.overtheperiodfrom.to.该表格描述了在年之年间数量的变化。Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thetwocurvesshowthefluctuationof.如图所示,两条曲线描述了的波动情况。Thepiechartsshowthechangeson.insomeplacein2000.此饼形图显示了2000年一些地方的变化。Thetableshowsathreetim

3、esincreaseoverthatoflastyear.表格显示比去年上升了3倍。Thenumberis5timesasmuchasthatof.此数字是的5倍。Ithasincreasedbythreetimesascomparedwiththatof.同相比,增长了3倍。ThefigureofAisabouttwiceasmuchasthatofB.A的数字是B的两倍。Ahasthehighestsalesfigureinthethreedepartments,followedbyBandC.在3个部门中,A的销售额最高,其次是B和C。Theriselastedfortwoweeksan

4、dthenbegantoleveloffinAugust.上升两个星期后,8月份开始平稳。Itaccountsfor30%ofthetotalpopulation.占到总人口的30%。Thenumberofstudentshasreached500,indicatingariseof20%,comparedtolastsemester.学生人数达到500人,与上个学期相比上升了20%。Itpickedupspeedattheendofthismonth.这个月底加快了速度。fromthisyearon,therewasagradualdeclinedreductioninthe.,reachi

5、ngafigureof.从这年起,逐渐下降至Therearealotofsimilarities/differencesbetween.and.与之间有许多相似(不同)之处ItcanbedrawnfromthechartthattheproportionsofAandBaregoingdown,thoughthefallinglevelofthelatterisalotlower/higherthanthatoftheformer.尽管B的下降速度比A要慢/快,从表中我们可以看到A和B的比例都在下降。Theincrease/decreaseismorenoticeableduringthese

6、condhalfofthe5yearperiod.在5年期限的后半段,增长/降低比较明显。Itfallsfrom50%in2000to30%in2004,andthenthetrendreverse,finishingat58%in2005.从2000年的50%降到2004年的30%,然后形势逆转,2005年达到了58%。写作详细指导图表作文至少包含描述图表与解释原因两个部分,而当前的图表作文大多还有第三个段落。图表作文的规律性很强,不像图画式作文那样富于变化。1首段的写作图表作文有表格(table)、柱形图(barchart)、饼状图(piechart)和折线图(diagram)之分,后三种

7、都属于图表的范畴(chart)。不管是chart还是table,都需要进行描述,一般放在文章的第一部分,长度宜适中。描述数据我们要首先看看是几个变量(A),每个变量有几个数据(B),不妨以A*B表示。如果只有一个变量,有三个数据,可以描述如下:FromthechartwecanseeclearlythattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonInternetperweekhasincreasedfromlessthantwohoursin1998tonearlyfourhoursin2000,andthento20hoursin2004.如果是最常见的是

8、2*3的情形,可以描述如下:Fromthechart,wecanseeclearlythatinabigcityinChina,state-ownedhousesdeclinedfrom75%in1990to60%in1995andthento20%in2000,whileprivatehousesrosefrom25%to40%andthento80%duringthesameperiod.这里用了while引起从句来突显对比,是一种非常好的办法,如果用两句话来描述,也完全可以。如果是1*n(n3)的情形,将头与尾描述出来即可,比较好的方法就是在句中描述最后一个与第一个相比变化了多少。碰到多

9、变量、每个变量多数据的情形,大家应首先进行分类,分成上升、下降两类,或者上升、下降、不变三类,这样问题就迎刃而解了。2第二段的写作第二段是解释原因的段落。我们谈谈两个问题。首先是过渡句这个问题。这里不大可能放在第一段,因为第一段不可能像某些命题作文那样简洁(如只有一句)例如提纲式作文中的批驳类文章中除第二段首句批驳之外还有首段末句批驳,效果很强烈。其次就是此段的主题句(topicsentence)的问题。此句或主观或客观,并无拘束,只要上下文风格统一即可。主观:Webelievethatthreereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Ibelievethatth

10、reereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Inmymind,thereasonswhytheoverseasstudentsareontheriseareasfollows.主观之变体(使用插入语,突显主语):Threereasons,webelieve,canaccountforthisphenomenon.Threereasons,Ibelieve,canaccountforthisphenomenon.Threereasons,Ifirmlybelieve,canaccountforthisphenomenon.注意:插入语的使用属于看似平淡却极富功力的

11、技巧,可以达到很好的效果。主观之变体(使用插入语):Threereasons,inmymind,canaccountforthisphenomenon.客观:Severalreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.在主题句之后,可以使用连接词分两个、三个或四个方面来写,其中分三个方面来写最为常见。这里就与普通的说明文与议论文一样了可以由最重要的到最不重要的,也可以由最不重要的到最重要的,也可能平行分布,依具体情况而定,不一而足。3第三段的写作第三段直接写结论的情况已基本没有了。如果这篇文章讲的是一个令人担忧的问题,那么这一段写解决办法的可能性最大。如果这篇文章讲的是

12、一个好的变化,那么这一段很可能是两种情况可能写负面的影响或存在的问题,或者写未来趋势或发展方向。注意事项写图表作文,并不是单纯的用语言文字把图表里的所有数字信息一一摊摆,逐条列出,而是利用这些数据,经常还得筛选,将该图表所要说明的主要问题阐述清楚。就这个意义上说,图表作文属于说明文。如果图表信息是用来论证某一观点,则图表作文属于议论文。因此,图表作文在结构处理和写法上与说明文或议论文是相同的。它通常必须1.用一个主题句或引言段,综述全图表的中心信息(也就是考生在审阅图表后形成的结论)。2.列举三组左右的相关数据来说明或证实主题句或引言段所提及的要点。分析产生这一图表结论的原因或联想推测可能引起

13、的后果。范文(一)Arecentsurveyanalyzedthechangeinnumberoffilm-goersandTVwatchersinXcity.Asisshownbythegraph,therehasbeenasharpdeclineinthenumberoffilm-goersduringtheperiodfrom1992to2002,addingupto20,000in2002.Ontheotherhand,thenumberofTVwatchershassteadilyincreaseinthelastdecade,reaching150,000in2002.Finall

14、y,itisinterestingtonotethattherewereasmanyfilm-goersasTVwatchersinyear1998.Theremightbetworeasons,Ithink,forthechange.Firstly,TVisnotonlyaconvenientsourceofentertainment,butacomparativelycheapone.Thereisnopointinarrangingtransport.Andoneneedntpayforexpensiveseatsatthecinema.Secondly,TVmakesitpossibl

15、eforonetokeeptrackofcurrenteventsandthelatestdevelopmentsinscienceandtechnology.Asaconsequence,mostpeopleprefertostayathome,watchingTV,ratherthangoouttothecinema,whichwastesbothtimeandmoney.Personally,therearestillalotofpeoplewhoenjoywatchingfilms.Theyarguethatthefilmisafascinatingformofart.Sittingc

16、omfortablyinthecinema,onecanappreciatethelatestmovies,whichwillusuallybeshownonTVfarlateron.Therefore,Itrustthenumberoffilm-goerswillbeontheriseinthefuture.范文(二):WhatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshavetakenplaceinthedailyexpensesinXianfrom1995to1999.Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby

17、30%whilethoseonclothingandrecreationhaveincreasedrespectivelyby9%and7%.Therearetwofactorsaccountingforthesechanges.Inthefirstplace,therisenincomeresultingfromeconomicgrowthplaysavitalroleinthelessexpenseonfood.Inthesecondplace,whenfoodpresentsnoworrytotheaverage,peoplebegintofocusmoreoftheirinterest

18、onhandsomeappearanceandhappyleisuretime.Asaresultofsuchashift,spendingonclothingandrecreationincreasesyearbyyear.Fromtheanalysesmadeabove,withthefurthergrowthineconomyandmorechangesinlifestyle,thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetterdirection.高考英语书面表达练习图表作文(格式与范例)作文一假如你是李华,在最近的研究性学习当中,受

19、21世纪中学生英语报 (The 21st Century)之邀,你对你所在的班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给报社的编辑写一封信,报道此事,以引起舆论的关注,并提出你的观点和建议。注意:1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容,可适度发挥。 2、文章的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。3、词数: 150 4、参考词汇:调查: make a surveyDear editor,I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my CLASs about their purpose of ge

20、tting on the Internet. _思路点拨题材:书信; 说明+议论 时态:一般现在时人称:第三人称要点提示:()上网的目的;()读新闻;()发送邮件;()聊天;()学习;()玩游戏;()评语篇章结构:文章可分两段文采修饰连接词的选用:but, both, and, moreover, otherwise高级词汇的选用:keep in touch with, as for, use as , benefit from, pay attention to, altogether, in ones opinion.复杂句型的选用:whatmost 引导的主语从句;as 引导的让步状语从

21、句;倒装语序等。范文:Dear editor,I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my CLASs about their purpose of getting on the Internet. The girls favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to rea

22、d news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think its the most convenient way to get information from keeping in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.In my opinion, useful as

23、the Internet is, the students had better make better and wise use of it. Otherwise, its impossible for us to benefit from it. Moreover, I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time. Yours, Li Hua作文二下列表格为某市1996年与2006年人们度假方式的情况比较,请按表格内容写一篇1

24、50词左右的短文,并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。年度19962006原因境外旅游11%22%收入增加海边度假38%31%海水污染爬山野营11%34%回归自然The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 1996 to 2006. _ 思路点拨:1、体裁:比较对照类2、时态:一般过去时(发表评论时可用一般现在时)3、人称:第三人称4、篇章结构:分三段 范文: The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 1996 to 2006.The table shows th

25、at a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2006. The rate of 2006 (22%) doubled that of 1996 (11%). We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad.At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of peo

26、ple. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 1996 to 31% in 2006, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away.The year 2006 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The ra

27、te in 2006 (34%) was more than three times that in 1996 (11%). The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.高考英语书面表达技巧口头通知(要点、格式与范例)一、掌握口头通知特点口头通知即以口头的形式表达通知的内容,其特点是:用词较口语化,句子不会太复杂,通常只需用一段话讲清其内容即可。另外,口头通知的开头和结尾通常都有一定的固定套语,同学们也应特别注意。二、妥用口头通知呼语口头通知的开头称呼语通常需根据听众的具体情况来确定,有时还要

28、考虑其场合是否正式。如在比较正式且男女听众兼有的场合,通常用Ladies and gentlemen 来称呼听众,同时注意该表达的词序,不要想当然地将其倒过来,且一定要用复数。当然,若听众中只有男士,则只用Gentlemen;或者只有女士,则只用Ladies。但是,如果在非正式场合,则比较随便。对学生用的称呼语通常是Boys and girls。三、熟记口头通知套语(1) 在用口头下达通知时,发通知者通常要将听通知人的注意力吸引过来,这类表达常见的有:May I have your attention, please?Attention please, everyone. I have an

29、announcement to make.Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.I have something (important) to tell you.Im glad to tell you something important.(2) 其他用于口头通知的固定套语(如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某人参加某活动等):Everyone is asked to be there on time.Be sure not to be late.Please be present on time.Please take yo

30、ur notebooks with you and be sure on time.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.(3) 口头通知的结束套语主要有:Thats all. Thank you very much.四、牢记口头通知时态口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动,因此要以一般将来时为主。如:We will go to the Great Wall tomorrow.Well have a meeting about it after the sixth CLASs. There will be an English fil

31、m in our school tonight. The match will be put off to next week.We are going to hold a meeting to discuss the problem.五、口头通知实战演练假如你是班长,根据下面的内容和提示,写一篇100左右的口头通知,以便向同学们宣布。事由:欢迎澳大利亚学生来校参观。参观时间:6月15日上午9:00-12:00.参观人数:约60人。活动安排:1. 8:30在校门口。 2. 9:00带客人到会议室开联欢会。 3. 领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。 4. 11:00在操场进行篮球比赛。 5. 客人12

32、:00离校。注意事项:1. 对客人要友好。2. 要用英语交谈。写作示范:Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please? About sixty Australian students will come to visit our school on June 15. Well meet them at the school gate at 8:30. Well take them to the meeting-room, where a get-together will be held. After that, well show them

33、 around our botanical garden and the school-run factory. At11:00 there will be a basketball match on the playground. Theyll leave our school at 12:00.Please be friendly to them. We must talk with them in English.Thats all. Thank you. 高考英语书面表达技巧书面通知(要点、格式与范例)一、掌握书面通知特点书面头通知即以书面的形式表达通知的内容,其特点是:措辞较严谨,句

34、子结构相对口头通知会更复杂,尤其会使用一些非谓语动词短语(如用不定式表目的等)和从句(如if 从句、when从句、so that从句等)。二、熟记书面通知格式与口头通知不同,书面通知在用书面形式表达出来时,它有自己比较固定的格式:如通知开头要有标题(通常为Notice或Announcement),标题下面是正文,正文后通常还应有发通知的单位(通常写在右下角)和写发通知的日期(通常写在左下角)等。三、注意与口头通的区别口头通知一般有开头称呼语(Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls等),而书面通知通常不用这些开头称呼语;口头通知用来吸引听众注意力的句子(如May

35、 I have your attention, please? / Attention please, everyone. I have an announcement to make. / Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.等)在书面通知中通常不可以用;口头通知的结束套语(Thats all. Thank you very much.)在书面通知中也不会使用。 四、熟记书面通知套语尽管书面通知与口头通知有很多表达套语不一样,但有些表达(如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某人参加某活动等方面的套语)是可以通用的,不过有时可能

36、在措辞方面会有所不同(书面通知措辞可能会略正式些)。如:摘自高考英语网口头通知:Everyone should be there on time.Be sure not to be late.Please be present on time.书面通知:Everyone is required to be present on time.口头通知:Be sure to attend it on time.书面通知:Everybody is expected to attend it on time.另外,书面通知的以下套语也需注意:All teachers and students are r

37、equired to(全体师生务必要)Notice is hereby given that(兹通知)Our school / The Student Union will / is going to holdA lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in五、牢记书面语通知时态与口头通知一样,书面通知也以一般将来时为主。如:The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4.We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on

38、 the top of it.After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby.On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places a school or a hospital. We will be pided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.六、书面通知实战演练请根据提示写一份通知。(1) 高二(5)在本周五晚上要开个英语晚会。(2) 晚饭后6:30在教室集合,晚会7:00

39、开始。(3) 每个同学都要表演一个节目,内容不限。(4) 欢迎老师和全班同学参加。(5) 出通知的时间是2005年3月15日。NOTICEAn English evening party will be held on Friday Evening. Every one of our CLASs is requested to be in the CLASsroom at 6:30 after supper. The party will begin at 7:00 P.M. Each of the students should perform during the evening part

40、y. You may tell a story, sing a song, make a speech or read a poem and so on. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend our English evening. Everybody is expected to attend it on time. Class 5, Grade Two March 15, 2005高考英语书面表达写作技巧日记(技巧与范例)一、写作技巧日记常用来记述自己一天生活中所发生的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的感受以及自己

41、将来的打算等。英文日记也是这样。不过,要写好英文日记,需要注意以下几点:摘自高考英语网(1) 格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同,都是在正文之前,先依次有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。(2) 表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记,看你能否用简洁明了的英语把所给的汉语提示准确无误地表达出来,以及自己的感想等。(3) 文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的,其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等,所以用第一人称写,文体也不必过分讲究,只需把该写的东西写清楚即可。二、实例与范文根据下面内容提示,写一篇日记4月15日,星期天,你和几位同学步行了半小时去参观动

42、物园。天气很好,游客很多。你们喜欢猴子。碰到几位外国朋友,聊了一会儿。中午回家。要求:摘自(1) 文章必须包括所给的要点;(2) 可适当增加细节;(3) 字数80100。April 15, Sunday FineToday I visited the zoo with several CLASsmates. We went on foot. It was half an hours walk. When we got there, the zoo was already full of people. There are many animals in the z

43、oo. They were very interesting, but we were especially interested in monkeys. They made all kinds of faces and we also talked with some foreign guests in English. It was time for lunch when we got home. I really had a wonderful time today.高考英语书面表达写作技巧便条(分析与范例)【概说】假条、便条、留言条以及借条等的英文写法都同英文的书信写法差不多,正文的右

44、上方写日期,之后是称呼语、正文,最后要有签名。【实例一】假设你是李华,你的美国老师Miss Catherine 要求你们明天上午去听一个关于美国音乐的讲座,你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向 Miss Catherine请假。【分析】内容要点:摘自高考英语网1. 表示歉意2. 理由:去机场接人3. 询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。4. 注意:字数100左右;可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【范文】Dear Miss Catherine,I am so sorry that I wont be able to attend the lecture on American m

45、usic tomorrow morning. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 10:00 tomorrow morning. I am very much interested in American music. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal

46、 to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【实例二】假如你叫李明,在你父亲工作的合资企业里的美方工作人员John Willian夫妇对京剧(Beijing opera)很感兴趣。你送给他们两张第二天晚上在梅兰芳剧院演出的戏票,那是一场由著名演员演出的京剧,很值得观看。恰巧John Willian夫妇外出。请你写个便条,并顺便告诉他们,你已经读过他们送给你的两本书,很有趣。你正忙于考试,不能一起去欣赏京剧了。注意:便条约100词左右;应包括以上要点,但不要逐

47、字翻译。摘自【范文】Mr and Mrs John Willian,Ive come to give you two tickets for tomorrow evenings Beijing Opera in Mei Lanfang Theater. I learn that you are interested in Beijing Opera,but its a pity that you happened to be out. I have to leave the tickets with this note. The opera will be put

48、 on by some famous players and it is well worth seeing.By the way, Ive read the two books you gave me. They are very interesting. This week, we are busy reviewing our lessons in order to pass the exams. So I cant go to the opera together with you.I hope you will have a good time.Yours,Li Ming【实例三】假如

49、你叫张华,你想借你同学Peter的词典,请根据下面的提示写张借条。1. 老师叫你写一篇英语作文,你要查几个词,因你把词典忘在家里了,故想借Peter的词典。2. 你保证小心爱护,第二天归还,并深表谢意,借词典时间是12月10日。【范文】December 10,2004Dear Peter,I was asked by the teacher to write a short English composition and I must look up some words in a dictionary. As my dictionary has been left at home, I wonder if you can lend me yours. I would, of course, take good care of it and Ill return it to you tomorrow. Many thanks.

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