毕业典礼考前预测英语作.ppt

Summary 阅读材料文体：说明文 说明文概括四个模板： 模板模板1. 1. “ “对象对象+ +性质功用性质功用+ +利好利好” ” 模板模板2. 2. “ “问题问题+ +解决方法解决方法” ” 模板模板3. 3. “ “现象现象+ +原因原因+ +结果结果” ” 模板模板4. 4. “ “现象现象+ +影响影响” ” Summary 要点： 现象：High school students in Western countries have a prom to mark their graduation 原因/意义：1. Its to mark the time kids turn into young men and women. 2. It means they are no longer dependent 过程：第二段 （由于本文不是记叙文，“ 过程”并不是最重要的，需要高度概括） summary: High school students in Western countries celebrate their graduation by having a prom where they dress up, have fun and say goodbye to each other. Proms help to mark their independence on parents and teachers. Summary In western countries, there is usually a prom held for high school students to mark their graduation and independence, where the graduates dress in formal clothes and have fun together. (30 words) 刘瑜 主体部分存在的主要问题 1. 审题不够仔细，漏写题目； 2. 审题不认真，不按题目要求，写了不该 写的，该写的又没写，离题； 3. 把“你理想的毕业庆祝活动”写成“你想 怎样庆祝你的毕业”； 4. 立意太“庸俗”，大部分作文的主题为“ 吃喝玩乐”； 5. “原因理由”不够充分。 1. 你理想的毕业庆祝活动是怎样的？ There are many ways to celebrate graduation including having photos taken with your classmates and teaches, or dining out together and exchange gifts. To mark the significance of graduation, I would call upon my fellow students to donate useful reference books to the school library. 2. 请详细叙述你的理由： The advantages of donating reference books are far-reaching, in the first place, it is the final contribution we can possible make to the school library which we owe a great debt of gratitude in the past three years. Moreover, the student participants learn and practice the ideas of “to give is better than to receive”. Last but not least, we can never fail to understand that resources are more efficiently recycled in the way that money is saved for those who need reference books. We couldnt grow up happily and healthily without their love, so its high time we should convey our gratitude to them.詹咏桐 As for me, I prefer to travel together as a celebration of our graduation. We can travel together to some place nearby with many places of interest. 陈陈嘉宇 When it comes to my idea of graduation celebration, I would like my school mates to do some voluntary work, which is meaningful to both the society and ourselves. 陈陈楚嫣 Apart from gaining knowledge from books, we should also learn from social activities like participating in voluntary work, which will help enrich our life and broaden our horizon. 陈陈楚嫣 After we graduate, we may rarely see our classmates and teachers. Therefore, I hope our graduation celebration will be most impressive and inspiring, which will never be forgotten by any of us. 陆陆欣 When it comes to my idea of a graduation celebration, so many ideas are flooding into my mind. 龙龙楚翘翘 Sharing the memories in the days we spend together will help us maintain sustainable friendship. 林晓晓玲 Only if we hold such a meaningful celebration can we have a long-lasting and nice memory of our campus life.林晓晓玲 Compared with the prom, traveling together with classmates may be a better choice to celebrate our graduation, as we can spend more time together and have fun before saying goodbye. 钟钟力奇 The passage fired my imagination of my own graduation celebration. 张锦张锦 well cherish the time we spend together and improve ourselves to face the challenge in the future. 腾腾小凤凤 With the purpose of impressing all the graduates, I think the following ideas may work out well. 李敏嘉 The reasons why this idea occurs to me can be listed as follow. 陈陈耀鹏鹏 Taking photos is necessary for us to record the track of our life. 叶佳丽丽 The graduation celebration not only aims to memorize our best time in the past, but also arouse our willingness to fight for our better future. 王泓棋 Although graduation is around the corner, I think its not a destination but another starting point. 李嘉玲 It means an ending for their high school life and a good star for their new life. 张张 雯雅 Im greatly convinced that having a trip as a graduation celebration can not only help us build up true friendship, but also help us develop a sense of independence. 叶博安 I will celebrate my graduation in this way for the reason that friendship is the most precious fortune which always encourages us with steadfast power. 刘瑜 Wherever we are, when we see the car, the wonderful memories will flood into our mind, giving us power to fight for our bright future. 刘瑜 One of my ideal graduatio