书面表达记叙文型书面表达.ppt

书面表达-记叙文型书面表达 专题一 记叙文型书面表达 专题一 专题一 记叙文型书面表达 记叙文型书面表达 专题一 专题导读 英语记叙文的书面表达一般要求考生根据所给的情景 组织语言材料。要想高分完卷， 必须注意： 1作文前要根据要求或暗示确定好用什么人称。一般 来说， 英语记叙文要以“第一人称(I /we)和第三人称(He/ She/ It/ They)”展开叙述。第一人称是从“参与者”的角度进 行叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述。要就事 论事， 不要画蛇添足， 节外生枝。 专题导读 专题一 专题导读 2交代清楚记叙文写作的基本要素：人物(who/whom) 、时间(when)、地点(where)、事由(what)、原因(why)。注 意从具体的材料中提炼中心， 并根据中心思想选择材料， 合理安排情节， 注意写作的顺序以及记叙的详略。 3注意选择合适的时态和叙述的方法。记叙文一般是 叙述已经发生过的事情， 因此其基本时态应该是一般过去 时。其记叙的顺序包括： 专题一 专题导读 (1)以时间为线索， 按时间的顺序展开。常用的话语 标志有：afterwards, at the same time, first, then, next, finally, soon, immediately, following等。 (2)以地点为线索， 以地点的转移为顺序。 (3)以事件的发展为线索， 或以人物的出现先后展开 。 4记叙事情时， 要注意主题鲜明突出， 内容感人深 刻。写人时， 要抓住典型事例、典型行动和表现。对中 心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方， 要详细叙述；次要 的东西就少写或不写。 专题一 真题典例 2011北京卷 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下 面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图 片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60 。 真题典例 专题一 真题典例 【解析】 One possible version： Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. 专题一 真题典例 Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher. 专题一 新题预测 (一) 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的李华， 上周六在颐和园 做了一件好事救了一名落水儿童。请根据以下四幅图的 先后顺序， 写一篇英文周记， 叙述事情发生的全过程并简 要谈谈自己的感受。 注意： 1.周记的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 2.词数：100左右。 新题预测 专题一 新题预测 It was sunny last Saturday. I went to the Summer Palace to spend my weekend as usual._ 专题一 新题预测 【解析】 (一) One possible version： It was sunny last Saturday. I went to the Summer Palace to spend my weekend as usual. At about noon，I was enjoying my reading in a pavilion near a lake when suddenly I heard someone crying for help. I jumped up to see what was happening and was shocked by the scene. In the distance a little kid was struggling in the water，while many 专题一 新题预测 people were standing by without doing anything. Believe it or not，I even heard some people say that it was none of their business and it was freezing cold after all. Without hesitation，I pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat，and jumped into the water quickly. Cold as the water was，I managed to reach him and held him back to the bank. To my great relief，the kid was saved in time. I was proud of what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. 专题一 新题预测 (二) 今年4月14号， 北京的部分高校开展了校园开放日活动 ， 你和你的父母前往一所你向往的大学参观咨询。请根据下 面四幅图的先后顺序， 写一篇英文日记， 叙述你们这一天 的活动及感受。 注意： 1日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2词数不少于100。 专题一 新题预测 April 14 Saturday Sunny Today some universities were open to the public._ _ 专题一 新题预测 【解析】 (二) One possible version： April 14 Saturday Sunday Today some universities were open to the public. Its a good chance for me to know more about my dream university. So, I，accompanied by my parents，went to Peking University. Early in the morning，we arrived there excitedly. To our surprise，many students had already been there. Directly we went to the stands where teachers and 专题一 新题预测 voluntary students of different departments made introduction and answered questions. Since I intend to choose English as my major，we spent lots of time asking the teachers for detailed information and advice. I was deeply impressed by the wonderful courses and learned professors. 专题一 新题预测 Then we were attracted by the stands of various clubs. It was really amazing that they have o