雅思大作文之Report详解.ppt

雅思大作文之 Report 解题思路&步骤 审题判断文体（analyze ） 确定分论点 (brainstorm) 确定结构 (plan) 写作(write) 检查(check) Step1 审题&判断文体 Report基本题型： 现象+2问题(偶尔会出现1/3个问题) cause effect solution三元素的排列组合组合 Causes+solutions Causes+effects Effects+solutions Causes+solutions There are more problems with students behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions? Studies suggest that children spend more and more time on watching TV than they did in the past and spend less time on doing active or creative things. Why do you think this is the case? What measures can be used to solve the problem? Causes+effects As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the causes and what are the effects on society. Effects+solutions A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How does the problem affect the children, their families and the society? What measures can be taken to control it? 难点 仔细审题，分清楚到底是写cause还是effect Report和argument的混合题 In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions. 陷阱1：cause 实际：the problems caused by youth unemployment effect 陷阱2：reason 实际： youth unemployment 为何会导致这些 effects, 而非出现youth unemployment的原因 解题思路根据问题进行回答 Three sections Section1 引入话题 Section2 阐述原因（1 或2段） Section3 阐述建议，解决方法（1或2段） （选择性）总结段 Section 1 引入话题 开头段 1. 背景句，交代本文分析的话题改写题目 2. （选择性）说明本文的写作意图（争取用一句话说明你的观 点，全文的主题句） There are more problems with students behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions? Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. (考官满分范文) 保守型写法： Sentence 1 背景句，引入话题 Sentence 2 概括原因 Sentence 3 说明文章要讨论的内容 Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem. There are some factors contributing to this issue, (such as). The focus of this essay is to illustrate the causes and explore some relevant and feasible measures to combat this situation. 主体段 Section2 &Section3 第二段：原因 第三段：原因 第四段：解决方法 第五段：总结（可选） 第二段：原因（1-3个） 第三段：解决方法 第四段：解决方法 第五段：总结（可选） 第二段：原因 第三段：解决方法 第四段：总结段 In many countries, birth rate is decreasing, families are becoming smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents have no time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means children grow up without consideration for others and without understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school they have not learnt any self-control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refused to obey school rules in the way their parents ever did. Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat this situation. But I think the solution to this problem lies with the families and they need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate to others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community will benefit. Parenting classes may be needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools can be established to support families in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because it is no longer the problem for individual families, but for the society as a whole. reason solution solution In recent years, graduates are finding it increasingly difficult to find an ideal job after school or university, thus youth unemployment is becoming a relatively new issue for many countries in the world. This essay will look at the severe consequences it may lead to and put forward some moderate proposals. One of the most immediate effects is that However, this is far from a personal or private problem, I mean, it is also a problem for the society as a whole. The possible solutions are always under discussion at both personal and government level. Some people suggest thatSome others thinkBut I thinkOne point I would like to make isThis may work efficiently to reduce the current unemployment rates. 难点 Task response 如何写分支观点？ 学生缺乏观点，出现观点的重复 如何写分支观点的支持句？ 学生不能很好地支持自己的观点，内 容空洞（topic sentence+ supporting sentences） Coherence and cohesion 如何做到内容连贯、逻辑清晰 解决方案 如何写分支观点？ 平时的积累，训练 常见论点总结 常见话题论点的收集 如何支持自己的topic sentence Supporting sentences: extension+explanation+justification 写支持句的五种方法： 1. 延伸解释：对观点进一步解释，细化 That is to say That means To be more specific They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means children grow up without consideration for others and without understanding of where their standard of living comes from. 2. 因果关系法：分支观点中情况出现导致 的影响 When they get to school they have not learnt any self-control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refused to obey school rules in the way their parents ever did. 3. 数据法：可以适当地编撰，但要注明出 处 According to