江苏高考英语专题五书面表达第二节分类突破三增加细节的5大策略优选习题.docx

三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能(一)列举具体的实例进行补充说明1我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single-use products，plant more trees and save water and energy.2我要花一些时间和父母呆在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework.3我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences.4我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。Im a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.题组过关1根据括号内提示完成句子1The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，but also get information，send emails and attend online schools.2Laura is a standard American style.She speaks perfect American English(她说一口完美的美式英语)，and thats why I am crazy about her.3However，it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.For example，many people begin to pay less attention to face-to-face communication(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流)4However，every coin has two sides，so does the Internet.For example，being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作)微技能(二)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1我有时去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染)Weather permitting，I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.(相关背景)2我发现了一些不良行为。I found some bad behavior.I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall；some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere.(相关行为描述)3晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。After supper，the man went to his bedroom.After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2根据括号内提示完成句子5Considering the activity is of great value/is meaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，we intend to design a uniform suited to our own class.6Ill try my best to make your uncle happy here.I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to our city(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观)7Many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health，especially during the holiday.They spend too much time watching TV(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playing games and chatting on the Internet all night.8Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt very happy and satisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意)9In the summer vacation，I am longing to get/have a part-time job(我渴望得到一份兼职工作)微技能(三)增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1我要和父母一起去超市购物。Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and wont be back until about 500 in the afternoon.(增加时间)2我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点)题组过关3根据括号内提示完成句子10Yao Ming，who was born in Shanghai on September 12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，started playing for the Shanghai Sharks as a teenager.11The Chinese Silk Road，which starts from todays Xian and finally finishes at the east coast of(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到的东海岸) the Mediterranean，is well-known to the world.12Today I paid a visit to one of the greatest cities in Asia，Beijing in China(在亚洲，中国的北京)13I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment/immediately/as soon as/directly(一就) I arrived here at 6 oclock in the morning by plane.微技能(四)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)I need a good rest.Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course，Ill do some reading for fun，and for knowledge as well.(因果关系)(2)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time，Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)If possible，Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)If possible，Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about the society.(结果状语)2Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something important to do.(原因状语)3帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.(增添结果)题组过关4根据括号内提示完成句子14Tomb Sweeping Day，one of the traditional Chinese festivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usually falls around April 5 every year to honor the dead and satisfy their ancestors.15With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，our earth is faced with great threat.16Situated/Located in northeast(坐落在东北部)，Beijing is well-known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history.17During this period，people will go to clean the graves and pay respect to their ancestors，carrying food and fruit(带上食物和水果)18Being a senior school student(作为一名高中生)，its everyones duty to do something to save our earth.19As is known to all/As everyone knows(众所周知)，Earth Hour is an activity which aims at saving energy.微技能(五)结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等1Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)2I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)3In a word，if she would like to learn Chinese，I hope she will do it well.(愿景)4As students，its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)题组过关5根据括号内提示完成句子20As a professional basketball player(作为一名专业的篮球运动员)，he is one of Chinas best-known athletes.21I think Beijing is well worth a second visit(非常值得再次参观)22In my view，no matter how/however attractive the Internet is(不管因特网多么吸引人)，it shouldnt separate us from our loved ones.23We drew a conclusion through the experiment(通过这个实验我们得出一个结论)：the temperature doesnt change when ice is melting into water.24Lets develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)25Therefore，we should spend time with our families，enjoying the time when we are together(享受我们在一起的时光).按要求对下列句子进行扩充1每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.If we are prepared，we will not feel worried.2复旦大学位于上海。(增加which引导的非限制性定语从句)Fudan University is located in Shanghai，which is an international city where I can get a lot of knowledge and experience.3不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)To realize my dream，whatever challenge I will face，I will never give in.4我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体信息说明)We should learn how to get along well with others.For example，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.5一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asleep at night.As a result，they feel sleepy in the day time an