作文人物以及网上阅卷写作规范.ppt

高考作文 记叙文,如何介绍人物,好词好句,外貌特征 （整体评价、五官特征） 性格特点 出生年龄 兴趣爱好 教育背景 经历事迹 他人评价 人物写照、生平事迹,思路点拨,人称： 第一人称 I 时态： 1）自我介绍：一般现在时 2）提出请求：虚拟语气（表示委婉和礼貌） 细节的添加 信息的重组（凸显实力）,注意事项,人称 求职信、自荐信第一人称 I 推荐信 第三人称 he/ she 时态 自己观点，现在时&将来时 名人特点，现在时&过去时,部分作品展示：,必备词汇,Ordos No.1 High School students in Grade Three recommend be good at/do well in win/get the first prize in the speech contest be admitted by,文章结构,I want to have try. 主体: 1. introduce myself. 2.introduce my advantages. 3. show my hope and wishes,Im LiHua, an eighteen-year-old girl who studies in Ordos No.1 High School. Now, Im a Grade Three student. Though Im facing a lot of pressure, I manage to do well in my study, especially in English. I once got the first prize in 2010 Speech Contest in Ordos. In the meantime, I am good at playing basketball and computers, for I think health is of the same importance. As for me, computer is my favorite. So now, I want to recommend myself to your school. I want to major in Computer Science in your university. There is no doubt that I need further improvement. So I hope you can give me the chance. Thank you!,1,2,3,4,5,6,优美词句摘抄：,2008年湖南高考题,题目要求,写作（满分25分） 请从下列任务中选择你 最喜欢的一位，用英语谢一篇120词左右的短文。要求很具所给信息做适当发挥，且需包括一下三部分内容： 1. 对该人物的简单介绍； 2. 喜欢该人物的理由； 3. 从该人物身上得到的启示。,题型解读&审题要点,如何在身体过程中就有效地把规定的写作内容和图标材料融合起来是重点考察考生的能力之一。 要点： 一，注意人称，一人称描述理由；三人称描述特点。 二，注意时态 自己观点，现在时&将来时 名人特点，现在时&过去时,高分范文William Shakespeare,As an outstanding British writer, William Shakespeare has won respect and love worldwide. Most of his plays and poems, which described the social lives, politics and cultures in Europe, have enjoyed great popularity.,I admire him a lot. He received little education, but he was talented and able to teach himself how to write plays. He was an active person who kept pursuing what he really liked despite/in spite of the difficulties. Some of his famous works, most of which we are familiar with, have shown that he is a great patriot. Whats more, his famous comedies and tragedies, like The Merchant of Venice and Hamlet, are a valuable heritage for us to appreciate and study.,I love his words “Life is a stage”. He has set an excellent example for me, and I will strive to make my life valuable.,高分范文Helen Keller,Helen Keller, an ordinary but great woman, impresses the world with her special experience of success. Her moving statement “if I had the power of sight for three days” has touched many people.,Ms. Kellers optimistic attitudes towards life win my respect. As a 19-month-old baby, she became deaf and blind. As a result, she lived in a world of darkness and silence. Communication was obviously a challenge for her. Despite these obstacles, she rose to the challenge and never gave up. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Keller learned to read and write. She even went on to become a famous author! Given her disabilities and subsequent successes, she is truly admirable.,I believe that Helen Keller is a role model. She exemplifies the fact that no challenge or difficulty in life is too great.,第一次练习2011辽宁,假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1.年龄； 2.学习情况及英语水平； 3.兴趣和特长； 4.性格特点。,注意: 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,1st Draft,I am LiHua, a 19-year-old girl graduating from XinXing Foreign School. Knowing your requirement, I am more than happy since English is my favorite subject. Back at school, I did well in my schoolwork and I am especially skillful at English. I once got the first prize in the English Speech Contest. If I had the chance to join you, I would make full use of my advantages. My hobbies range from basketball to computers. I am skilled at computer system. Generally speaking, I am friendly and easy-going. I like commutating with people and can make friends with them easily.,2nd Draft,I am LiHua, a 19-year-old girl graduating from XinXing Foreign School. Knowing about your requirements, I am more than happy since English is my favorite subject. Back at school, I did well in my schoolwork and I am especially skillful at English, whether spoken or oral English. I once got the first prize in the English Speech Contest. I once got the first prize in the English Speech Contest. In the meantime, I at active in after-class sports, such as volleyball and basketball, which also contribute to