小作文经典真题串讲张祥银.ppt

小作文经典真题串讲 张祥银,经典真题,Previously: 动态：1. 单根曲线上下（三种写法） 2. 曲线的两段描述（前三种+后一种） 3. 曲线的三段描述 静态： 1. 单纯描述一个数值 2. 描述+对比 静态可供选择的写法： 1. 原始主语的表达 2. 原始主语的变句表达 3. 根据具体信息表达,经典真题,Previously: The consumption of beef was the largest (grams) Beef was consumed in the largest amount(grams) People relied mainly on beef( grams) The consumption of chicken was 148 grams. 148 grams of chicken was consumed Much less chicken was consumed.,经典真题,The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European Country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons Where possible.,考点分布： 1. 1979 四项的描述、对比 2. 2004四项终点描述 3. 1979-2004四项趋势描述 4. 相交点年份,经典真题,行文的结构： 第一段： 改写标题； 第二段： 1979 四项的描述和对比（静态）（紧凑） 第三+第四段： 动态+交点年份 结尾段落： 总结：A上升，B,C,D个下降。,经典真题,第一段： 略 第二段： 静态略 第三段： 动态：,经典真题,第三段： from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef declined dramatically from 220 grams to 100 grams .,经典真题,第三段： from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef declined dramatically from 220 grams to 100 grams . from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef and lamb declined dramatically from 220 grams in 1979 to 100 grams and 60 grams in 2004 respectively. ,经典真题,第三段： from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef declined dramatically from 220 grams to 100 grams . from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef and lamb declined dramatically from 220 grams in 1979 to 100 grams and 60 grams in 2004 respectively. from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef and lamb, despite some fluctuations, declined dramatically from 220 grams in 1979 to 100 grams and 60 grams in 2004 respectively.,经典真题,第三段： from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef declined dramatically from 220 grams to 100 grams . from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef and lamb declined dramatically from 220 grams in 1979 to 100 grams and 60 grams in 2004 respectively. from 1979 to 2004, the consumption of beef and lamb, despite some fluctuations, declined dramatically from 220 grams in 1979 to 100 grams and 60 grams in 2004 respectively. However, there was a slow drop in the consumption of fish to around 50 grams in 2004.,经典真题,第四段： On the other hand, the given period witnessed a sharp increase in the consumption of chicken to about 250 grams.,经典真题,第四段： On the other hand, the given period witnessed a sharp increase in the consumption of chicken to about 250 grams. It is worth mentioning that the consumption of chicken overtook that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.,经典真题,第五段： In general/overall, there were declines in the consumption of beef, lamb and fish, while the consumption of chicken grew sharply during all these years.,经典真题,句式的升级： 1. 先写终点年份，再写终点数值。,经典真题,句式的升级： 1. 先写终点年份，再写终点数值。 The consumption of fish declined to around 50 grams in 2004. the consumption of fish declined by 2004, when it was 50 grams/,经典真题,句式的升级： 1. 先写终点年份，再写终点数值。 The consumption of fish declined to around 50 grams in 2004. the consumption of fish declined by 2004, when it was 50 grams/when 50 grams were consumed.,经典真题,注意点 ： 1. 逻辑关系词： 2.精确度： 3.单位：4. 时态 表达： 静态描述+对比 尽量不要出现原始主语 动态： 一般来说原始主语结合上下的句型 这个图为什么写静态？ 考点多少决定,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%.,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys.,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys. 3. Boys constitute 41%. （represent/take up/account for）,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys. 3. Boys constitute 41%. （represent/take up/account for） 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%.,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys. 3. Boys constitute 41%. （represent/take up/account for） 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys. 3. Boys constitute 41%. （represent/take up/account for） 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal.,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：单纯描述 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 1. The proportion of boys is 41%. 2. 41% of students are boys. 3. Boys constitute 41%. （represent/take up/account for） 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes 41%.,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：描述+对比 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 根据具体信息表达 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. .,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：描述+对比 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 根据具体信息表达 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes 41%. .,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：描述+对比 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 根据具体信息表达 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes 41%. 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is the largest(41%) 2. The largest proportion of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes the largest proportion(41%) .,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：描述+对比 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 根据具体信息表达 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes 41%. 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is the largest(41%) 2. The largest proportion of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes the largest proportion(41%) 4. XXX relies mainly on coal for electricity(41%)/coal was the main source of electricity (41%) .,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,静态：描述+对比 原始主语的表达 原始主语的变句 根据具体信息表达 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is 41%. 2. 41% of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes 41%. 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is the largest(41%) 2. The largest proportion of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes the largest proportion(41%) 4. XXX relies mainly on coal for electricity(41%)/coal was the main source of electricity (41%) （注意第二句，第三句的适用范围） .,带有百分号的静态对应的句式多变,（注意第二句，第三句的适用范围） 英国： A(煤炭) B （石油） C（风力） D （核能） 法国： A(煤炭) B （石油） C（风力） D （核能） 德国： A(煤炭) B （石油）C（风力）D （核能） .,判断饼、柱、表格图的静态动态,时间：3个或者3+ 动态 考点分布： 一直上升 一直下降 先上再下 先下再上,判断饼、柱、表格图的静态动态,时间：3个或者3+ 动态 考点分布： 一直上升 一直下降 先上再下 先下再上,判断饼、柱、表格图的静态动态,时间：2个 起点的静态+动态 考点分布： 1980静态 1980-1990 动态,纯动态图,The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.,纯动态图,考点分布： 五个选项的趋势 教师工资一直最大,The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.,纯动态图,行文结构： 第一段：改写表达+教师工资一直最大 第二段：一直上升 + 一直下降 第三段：先上再下 +先下再上 第四段：A,B,C 上下，D,E 下降,纯动态图,动态图对应的信息筛选：,纯动态图,动态图对应的信息筛选：,纯动态图,动态图对应的信息筛选：,纯动态图,动态图对应的信息筛选：,纯动态图,第二段： 如何找出原始主语：-知道任意数据对应的名词,纯动态图,第二段： 如何找出原始主语：-知道任意数据对应的名词 2%-the proportion of insurance? 2%-the proportion of spending on insurance,纯动态图,第二段： 如何找出原始主语：-知道任意数据对应的名词 2%-the proportion of insurance? 2%-the proportion of spending on insurance From 1981 to 2001 the proportion of spending on insurance rose from 2% to 8%,纯动态图,第二段： 如何找出原始主语：-知道任意数据对应的名词 3%-the proportion of insurance? 3%-the proportion of spending on insurance From 1981 to 2001 the proportion of spending on insurance rose from 2% to 8%, while the proportion of spending on other workers salaries experienced an opposite trend from 28% to 15%.,纯动态图,第三段： 原始主语： However, the proportion of spending on teachers salaries increased to 50 % in 1991, before declining to 45% in 2001.,纯动态图,第三段： 原始主语： However, the proportion of spending on teachers salaries increased to 50 % in 1991, before declining to 45% in 2001. The proportion of spending on resources showed an overall decline to 9% in 2001, despite an increase from 15% in 1981 to 20% in 2001.,纯动态图,第三段： 原始主语： However, the proportion of spending on teachers salaries increased to 50 % in 1991, before declining to 45% in 2001. The proportion of spending on resources showed an overall decline to 9% in 2001, despite an increase from 15% in 1981 to 20% in 2001. On the other hand, the proportion of spending on furniture and other equipment decreased to 5% in 1991, followed by a rise to 23% in 2001.,纯动态图,第三段： 原始主语： However, the proportion of spending on teachers salaries increased to 50 % in 1991, before declining to 45% in 2001. The proportion of spending on resources showed an overall decline to 9% in 2001, despite an increase from 15% in 1981 to 20% in 2001. On the other hand, the proportion of spending on furniture and other equipment decreased to 5% in 1991, followed by a rise to 23% in 2001. 第四段： In general, there were increases in the proportion of spending on A, B and C, while there were declines in the proportions of spending on E and F. (用词多变： percentage-spending-expenditure-budget),纯动态图,教师工资一直最大： 带有百分比的静态：,纯动态图,教师工资一直最大： 带有百分比的静态： 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is the largest(41%) 2. The largest proportion of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes the largest proportion(41%) 4. XXX relies mainly on coal for electricity(41%)/coal was the main source of electricity (41%),纯动态图,教师工资一直最大： 带有百分比的静态： 1. The proportion of electricity produced by coal is the largest(41%) 2. The largest proportion of electricity is produced by coal. 3. Electricity produced by coal constitutes the largest proportion(41%) 4. XXX relies mainly on coal for electricity(41%)/coal was the main source of electricit