九年级写作-生动性.ppt

记叙文,根据中文内容和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的英文周记。所给英文提示词语供选用。 上周，你在你家小区(neighborhood)里看见了一只走失的狗(a stray dog)。请你写写你是怎么帮助它的，有何感受。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：come across, food and drinks, miss his owner, a Dog-Found-Notice, be happy,东城期末考题:,Sample 1： Last week, when I was walking on the street in my neighborhood, I saw a stray dog. It seemed so dirty and skinny that I felt sorry. I gave it some food and drinks, and it finished them immediately. And then I wrote a “Dog-Found-Notice” and handed them out. One hour later, a lady called me! She thanked me a lot and took the dog away.,句式简单 语言不生动,如何实现语言的生动性,Fortunately, his owner saw my notice and . Ultimately, the owner called me . Apparently, the stray dog was in desperate need of drinks and food. Seeing the deep sadness and loneliness in his eyes, I speculated that he was a stray dog. Seeing the back view of the dog and its owner, I felt really happy. Then I put up a on the wall, hoping his owner would be able to see it. The dog followed his owner, wagging his short tail happily.,形容词，副词的准确使用,现在分词和过去分词的使用,To help him find its owner, I decided to It was from this experience that I realize the importance of helping others. Something moving in the corner caught my sight. She thanked me a lot, which made me feel really pleasant. “Youre welcome!” I returned her a smile. This experience prove the truth of a saying, “Happiness lies in rendering help to others.”,强调句型的使用,非限定性定语从句的使用,摘抄积累句型的使用,动词不定式的使用,Good sample ： Although this winter was extremely cold, I felt very warm in my heart for I had given a helping hand to a little dog. Last Sunday, it was snowing heavily. Though covered with many clothes, I still couldnt help shivering walking in the neighborhood. Suddenly, I came across a little stray dog. He looked weak with his eyes closed. And I was afraid it would die in the bad condition. In order to save it,Good sample ： I held the dog gently, and then ran home as fast as I could and gave him some food and drinks. By chance, I noticed a ring on his neck, which showed he had his own home. In order to help him find it, I put up a “Dog-Found-Notice” and received a call full of gratitude from his owner three days later. Before leaving with his owner, he stopped and waved his tail. It seemed that he was very appreciative of my help. Happiness and warmth crowded me at that mo