2004高考英语满分作文

1、2004高考英语满分作文1. 【试题回放】假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛talent showDear Peter,I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreig

2、ners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you ll have to go to the TV sta

3、tion to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.Yours,Li Hua名师点评从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。2.【试题回放】假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要

4、点如下：1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrangeDear Andy,Im so glad that youll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. Im writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at sc

5、hool will be arranged. Youll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. Well take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And Ill act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look

6、. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what were interested in. Im sure youll enjoy yourself. Im looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua名师点评本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又

7、使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。3.【试题回放】假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.1. 英汉/汉英词典新华字典 2. 收词(字)18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语)10,0003.价格52元11元 4.特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典参考词汇: 推荐 recommend (V.) 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary

8、(ECCED)Dear Steve,Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of ex

9、amples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.Plea

10、se let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.Yours,Li Yue名师点评本文要完成的是书信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遗漏要点。本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅而连贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。4. 【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)注意：1. 词数：80120 2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与

11、邻居的交涉过程About 9 oclock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldnt go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.I knock

12、ed at his door and said, Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.“Oh, Im really sorry to have disturbed you. Well do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.“Thank you very much.” I said and went back to continue my study.名师点评这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟

13、题意的基础上，用平实的语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，让人有种身临其境的感觉。2005高考英语满分作文5. 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：牛津Oxford 费用feeDear Sir/Madame,Im writing for more information about the day

14、 tour to London.As a student at Oxford University, Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?How long will the tour

15、 last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, Id like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Yours,Li Hua名师点评本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值

16、得肯定的地方。全国卷(四川、云南、陕西等地区用)6. 【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞 2.郊区环境好 反对迁出： 1.建于1906年，中外闻名 2.搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇： 郊区suburbDear Editor , Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whet

17、her the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other stud

18、ents are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .Whats more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in B

19、eijing.Yours truly,Li Hua名师点评这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确，清楚展示了主题。先提出了文章的主题，进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后又给出了反面的观点，论据十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后连贯。7. 【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分)美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。Dear Jeff,Im Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im

20、 very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school togethe

21、r by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

22、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes,Yours truly,Li Hua名师点评这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。2006高考英语满分作文8. 【试题回放】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方

23、举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam,I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is

24、Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success

25、. Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully, Li Hua名师点评这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。9. 假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。注意：1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯 3、开头语已为你写好Dear Bob,Thank you for your last letter askin

26、g about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. Its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost e

27、very subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and Ill show y

28、ou around. Yours sincerely,Li hua名师点评本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?10. 【试题回放】假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：1.感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 2.一本英语词典忘记带回3.词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵4.词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 5

29、.邮资自己付注意：1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯3参考词汇：邮资-postageDear Mr. Brown,I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,Ill show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary

30、at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and Ill be very grateful if you show your warmness again.Im eager

31、 to receive your reply.Yours,Li hua名师点评本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。10. 【试题回放】加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：你怎样得知David的愿望 、你愿意成为他的朋友 、你打算如何帮助他 、你盼望他的回复注意：

32、1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好2、字数：100词左右 3、在答题卡上作答Dear David,Im a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe Im your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only

33、our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. Ill be looking forward to your reply. Ill show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ,Li hua名师点评本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时

34、连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。2007高考英语满分作文11. 【试题回放】一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处500米;2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain

35、 Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water b

36、ath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan

37、Mountain.【名师点评】本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。积累卡片英汉互译好词1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

38、12. 【试题回放】假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。 2出你喜欢的栏目。 3要说明理由。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 参考栏目：栏目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a maga

39、zine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its nec

40、essary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attrac

41、tive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能

42、写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。13. 【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生：1每天锻炼一小时 2康工作五十年 3幸福生活一辈子请你根据以上提示，用英

43、语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。注意： 1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program;教育部the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed

44、 at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work heal

45、thily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. S

46、o every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名师点评】本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。积累卡片好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthil

47、y for 50 years.教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。评析：虚拟语气。【江苏卷】14. 【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关

48、系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)注意：1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding

49、, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselv

50、es in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they f

51、inish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名师点评】这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅

52、地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。积累卡片英汉互译好词1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from eac

53、h other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。评析：复合句的使用。【湖北卷】【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换

54、;型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100左右;2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part;3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short me

55、ssages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare

56、parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi【名师点评】本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。积累卡片英汉互译好词1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅好句T