期写作预测第二节课

：xiaochunjiedu(作业回复)•：雅思写作（阅读积累）可能涉及的题目1.在家工作的好和坏；2.是否应该征收拥堵费用；3.如何提高公众健康水平；主体段需要的逻辑和文字类型1.

单纯好坏分析(很常见，占相当大部分)；2.是否合理；3.深浅观点；4.原因分析；5.解决方案；议

题型大全1.

Discuss

both

views

and

give

your

opinion.2.

To

what

extent

do

you

agree

or

disagree?3.

Do

you

think

the

advantages

outweigh

the

disadvantages?4.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

What

solutions

do

yousuggest?5.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

Do

you

think

it

is

a

positive

ornegative

development?各自找到一个题目TOP

101.陶冶情操2.

开阔视野3.

增长见识4.

文化5.

增强国力6.

人类智慧的结晶7.

创建和谐社会8.

社会的变迁和发展9.

带来社会的不稳定10.方便！！！！！！！！催命论证－各种中枪！Some

people

think

that

living

in

big

cities

brings

abouta

number

of

benefits.

To

begin

with,

living

in

big

citiescan

give

people

a

convenient

life

in

many

ways.

In

addition,

living

in

large

cities

helps

people

to

find

agood

job.

Last

but

not

least,

if

people

live

in

big

cities,thenthey

can

be

well

entertained

and

amused.show

your al

knowledgedevelop

your

ideasdiscuss1.

引出争论的

问题，改写题目里的2.第一个观点和事实的结合(总分x2)3.第二个观点和事实的结合(总分x2)4.清晰的个人观点别在中间反驳，想要别打强烈个人观点的话，给我滚到最后一段去。第一种论证：总---分(最常见的论证)这种论证方式适合能够明确想到keysentence的话题。1.

ng……..means

that

………..2.

The

choice

to

....is

because

.....3. ng……allows

people

to

…….4.

The

reason

why

…….is

that

……..5.

A

will

be

followed

by

B.6.

If

nuclear

energy

is

widely

adopted,

there

will

be

great

improvements

in

environmental

conditions.What-将 句中某个有价值的名词展开•1).

Considering

the

strong

curiosity

of

young

children,

it

isnot

surprising

at

all

that

their

parents

give

many

rules

torestrict

their

behavior.

Childrenat

3

or

4

years

old

arealways

interested

in

playing

with

pets,

so

rules

from

parentshelp

them

keep

the

right

distance

from

dogs

or

cats.

Asthey

grow

older,

so

does/will

their

curiosity.

In

other

words,they

may

try

to

climb

high

trees o

swimming

somewhere

unguarded.

Without

their

parents’

restrictions,they

would

place

themselves

in

danger.

-83What-将

句中某个有价值的名词展开•2).

The

danger

and

wildness

of

some

places

set

up

abarrier

for

ordinary

people,

which

is

the

reason

why

TVprograms

like

Man

vs

Wild

enjoys

remarkable

popularity.There

are

some

places

where

tourists

may

be

kidnapped

orrobbed.

There

are

also

places

where

tourists

are

highlyvulnerable

to

diseases,

like

malaria

or

bird

flu.

All

thesefacts

well

explain

why

a

considerable

proportion

of

peopleprefer

to

watch

Discovery

or

National

Geographic

Channelrather

than

have

a

risky

adventure.-80What-将

句中某个有价值的名词展开3).

The

excessive

consumption

of

fast

food

is

amajor

cause

of

the

rise

in

obesity.

What

customersusually

buy

from

a

fast

food

restaurant

are

cheeseburgers,

fried

chicken,

ice

cream

and

sugarydrinks,

any

of

which

contains

far

more

caloriesthan

traditional

foods.

For

people

who

regularly

eatfast

food

meals,

the

possibility

of ingobeseis

naturally

higher.

-60What-将

句中某个有价值的名词展开4).

Advertising

is

a

big

industry

that

employs

a

widevariety

of

professionals.

Talented

writers

who

are

notinterested

in

living

like

starving

artists

can

pursuelucrative

copywriting

careers

in

advertising

by

writingprint,

radio

and

web

ads.

Also,

online

marketing

andadvertising

is

a

big

business,

and

advertising

agenciesemploy

online

marketing

managers

to

oversee

theirclients’

web

presences,

as

well

as

manage

onlinemarketing ns

and

efforts.How-将 句中的逻辑原理做出解释1).

Employing

robots

as

labor

force

means

thatfactories

can

bring

down

costs

on

production.

By

replacing

humanworkers

with

automation,employers

can

be

free

from

most

concerns

onspending,

like

rising

salaries,

insurances,pensionsand

etc.

For

example,

when

an

accident

happens,compensation

must

be

made

for

injured

humanemployees,

while

the

damaged

robots

simply

needrepairing

or

replacing.-59How-将

句中的逻辑原理做出解释2).

Studying

a llows

young

adults

togrowmature

and

independent

in

many

ways.

By

leaving

theircomfort

zone,

international

students

will

haveto

expose

themselves

to

various

challengesanddifficulties

that

they

have

never

encounteredbefore.

Despite

all

the

depression

and

frustrationthey

may

undergo

in

the

very

beginning,

they

willbe

eventually

able

to e

all

the

tests

ontheir

way

to

achieving

real

maturity

andindependence.

-68How-将

句中的逻辑原理做出解释3).

The

prevalence

of

digital

reading

contributessignificantly

to

improvementsin

environmentalconditions.

All

the

pollution

caused

by

printing

anddistribution

of

physical

books

and

magazines

can

betotally

avoided,

as

reading

an

e-book

requires

no

morethan

a

mobile

phone

or

computer.

Although

electricitymust

be

consumed

to

use

these

devices,

the

power

canbe

produced

in

more

environmentally-friendly

ways,including

solar

energy

and

hydro

power.-66How-将

句中的逻辑原理做出解释4).

Technology

can

make

lessons

mu

oreinteresting.

By

using

audio-visual

materials

in

class,

a

teacher

is

easily

able

to

draw

students'attention.

A

history

teacher,

for

example,

caninterestingly

explain

the

relationshipbetweenScotland

and

England

with

the

help

of

the

movieBrave

Heart.

In

comparison,

traditional

historytext

books

may

borestudents

with

too

manywords

and

limited

illustrations.Who-缩小你的 者范围，让论证更有针对性。1).

Eating

fast

food

as

regular

meals

helps

to

saveplenty

of

time

for

more

important

things.

For

people

who

are

most

concerned

about

theirworking

efficiency,

it

is

impossible

to

eat

at

atraditional

restaurant

or

coo eal

at

home.

Onthe

contrary,

buying

a

hotdog

or

a

hamburgertakes

no

more

than

10

minutes.-56Who-缩小你的 者范围，让论证更有针对性。2).

The

choice

to

read

in

a

libraryis

due

to

thefactthat

it

provides

readers

with

a

relatively

quietatmosphere.

This

is

particularlyimportant

to

thosewho

need

to

deal

with

some

sophisticatedmaterials.

University

students,

for

example,

can

bemuch

less

distracted

by

loud

conversations

orphone

rings

if

they

choose

to

work

on

their

essaysin

the

library.

－62Who-缩小你的 者范围，让论证更有针对性。3).

Talents

play

a

vitally

important

role

on

the

pathtowards

achieving

success.

This

is

especiallytruefor

athletes

who

dream

of

winning

Olympic

medalsor ing

continental

champions.

Whethertheyare

gifted

or

not

is

far

more

decisive

than

whetherthey

are

devoted

or

not.

Take

Jamaican

sprinterUsain

Bolt

for

example.

No

matter

how

hard

hisrivals

have

been

trained,

the

chanceto

beat

himishopelessly

slim.

This

is

because

he

is

incrediblygifted

in

his

fields.-79Who-缩小你的 者范围，让论证更有针对性。4).

Frequent

exposure

to

mediaviewers

to

believe

thatleadsis

a

naturalsolution

to

problems.

This

is

especially

true

foryoung

children

and

teenagers

who

haveinstinctive

desires

and

basic

curiosity

to

copywhat

their

heroes n

a

movie.

This

is

the

veryreason

why

most

countries

adopt

the

ratingsystem

for

moviesand

games.每天坚持练习三个片段写作，半个月就有效果1.好坏-advantages

of

taking

a

gap

year2.

原因分析--In

the

past,divorce

wasunacceptable.3.

事实描述--Children

and

their

parents

seem

tobe

less

close

nowadays.题型1.

Discuss

both

views

and

give

your

opinion.2.

To

what

extentdo

you

agree

ordisagree?3.

Do

you

think

the

advantages

outweigh

thedisadvantages?4.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

Whatsolutions

do

you

suggest?5.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

Do

youthink

it

is

a

positive

or

negative

development?argument

essayTo

what

extentdoyou

agree

or

disagree?Do

you

think

the

advantages

outweighthedisadvantages?1.

一定两面都要写，一定要有跳出题目的结论：更全面，更合理；2.先写自己不偏爱的方向(只陈述，不评价)，然后再写自己偏向的一面，顺利结尾。balanced

essayDiscuss

both

views

and

give

your

opinion.1.基于事实；2.第三人称最好；3.结尾段决定高分与否；report

essayWhat

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

What

solutions

doyou

suggest?What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

Do

you

think

it

is

apositive

or

negative

development?1.仔细读题，不要抢跑；2.问什么答什么；3.过渡句很重要；4.

写作，不要局限

；带坑的题目There

are

more

children

and

teenagers

whocommit

crime.

What

do

you

think

are

thecauses?

How

should

they

be

punished?1.10

最可能的题型！discuss

>

agree/disagree>positive/negative1.高分结构班--介绍段合情合理，论证段有理有据；2.

词伙班--避免错误，稳定表达， 句和反驳观点的培养；别犯这些错误Therebe+名词(修饰)There

are

some

actionscan

be

done

to

reducecrimes.--错误There

are

some

actions

thatcan

be

done

to

reuce

crimes.--正确There

are

some

people

believe

money

iseverything.Thereare

some

people

that

believe

money

iseverything.due

to---要不别用，要不就用对due

to

the

increase

in

......because

of

the

increase

in

.....because

句子.....lead

to

后面只能跟上名词短语！This

willlead

to

many

people

lose

their

jobs.--错误This

will

leadto

serious

unemployment

of

manypeople.--正确1.with+名词短语with

the

development

of

technologywith

birth

rate

declining

in

manycountrieswith

crime

rate

soaring2.as+句子As

more

and

more

people

realize

theimportance

of

saving

the

earth,As

technology

has

been

advancing,第一类题目Discuss

both

views

and

give

your

opinion.在90%情况下，bothviews是各自被一部分人选择的做法。因此，不要轻易尝试去反驳任何一方，这只会增加你写作的难度和莫名其妙程度。二三段的任务是说明各自的道理就行。一般来说，这种情况下不需要在第一段给出个人观点。即使要给，也是一个居中的观点。Cam9Test3some

people

say

that

the

best

way

to

improvepublic

health

is

by

increasing

the

number

of

sportsfacilities.

Others,

however,

say

that

this

wouldhave

little

effect

on

public

health

and

that

othermeasures

are

required.Discuss

boththese

views

and

give

your

opinion.1).

A

problemof

modern

societiesis

the

declininglevel

of

health

in

t eral

population,

withing

views

on

how

to

tackle

this

worryingtrend.

One

possible

solution

is

to

provide

moresport

facilities

to

encourage

a

more

active

lifestyle.2).

Advocates

of

this

believe

that

today’ssedentary

lifestyle

and

stressfulworking

conditionsmean

that

physical

activity

is

no

longer

part

ofeither

our

work

or

our

leisure

time.

If

there

wereeasy-to-reach

local

sports

centres,

we

would

bemorelikely

to

make

exercise

a

regular

part

of

ourlives,

rather

than

just

collapsing

in

front

of

a

screenevery

evening.

The

variety

of

sports

that

could

beoffered

would

cater

for

all

ages,

levels

of

fitnessand

interests:

those

with

painful

memories

of

PE

atschool

might

be

happier

in

the

swimming

pool

thanon

thefootballpitch.3).

However,

there

may

be

better

ways

of

tackling

thisproblem.

Interest

in

sport

is

not

universal,

and

additionalfacilities

might

simply

attract

the

already

fit,

not

those

whomost

need

them.

Physical

activity

could

be

encouragedrelatively

cheaply,

for

example

by

installing

exerciseequipment

in

parks,

as

my

local

council

has

done.

This

hasthe

addedbenefit

that

parents

and

children

often

use

themtogether

justfor

fun,

which

develops

a

positive

attitude

toexerciseat

an

early

age.

As

well

as

physical

activity,

hightax

penalties

could

be

imposed

on

high-fat

food

products,tobacco

and

alcohol,

as

excessive

consumption

of

any

ofthese

contributes

to

poor

health.

Even

improving

publictransport

would

help:it

takes

longer

to

walk

to

the

bus

stopthan

to

the

car.4).

In

my

opinion,

focusing

on

sports

facilities

is

too

narrowan

approach

and

would

not

have

the

desired

results.People

should

be

encouraged

not

only

to

be

morephysically

active

but

also

to

adopt

a

healthier

lifestyle

ingeneral.Some

people

think

that

children

shouldlearnhow

to

compete,

but

others

think

thatchildrenshould

be

taught

to

cooperate.

Discuss

both

views

and

give

your

own

opinion.（7+写作 第225题）对于孩子是应该学习竞争还是合作从而成为社会的栋梁，人们的看法并不一致。在我看来，竞争和合作都是生活中必需的品德，孩子们两者应该学会。更重要的是要

他们何时竞争以及何时合作。竞争在生活中很重要。孩子们在准备考试或像运动员一样进行单项运动时能学会竞争。他们必须学习如何取得突出的成绩或者在跑步等体育比赛中获胜。这一品德在他们成年后也很有用。比如，不管做什么生意，他们都必须和其他商人竞争才能取得成功，而成功的商人

是对社会有用的人。另一方面，很多领域都需要合作。孩子们在体育场中进行板球和曲棍球等团队运动时会学习如何合作。他们在完成小组作业时也会学到合作。这一品德也能帮助他们在长大后获得成功，因为很多生活中很多领域都需要合作。比如，当他们成为科学家研究治疗和等疾病的治疗时，必须要协力而不能唱独角戏。工程师也要群策群力为如今广大的科技用户带来便利。也有很多情况同时需要竞争和合作。比如，当孩子们进行团队运动时，他们学会和自己小组成员合作但同时又和对手们竞争。类似的，成年后他们学会和同胞们合作而与其他国家的人竞争。众所周知，是一个极具竞争的时代，广袤的地球已经缩小为一个地球村。比如，的各汽车产业已相互合作从而来对抗德国和的汽车产业。因此，竞争和合作紧密相关。很明显，

应该同时教授孩子竞争和合作，更重要的是

他们什么时候要竞争，什么时候要合作。It

is

a

highly

debatable

issue

whether

childrenshould

learn

to

compete

or

co-operate

in

order

toe

productivecitizens

of

society.

In

myopinion,

both

competition

and

cooperation

arenecessary

virtues

of

life

and

children

should

learnboth.

What

is

more

importantis

to

teach

childrenwhere

they

need

to

compete

and

where

they

need

to

cooperate.背诵版：Competition

is

very

important

in

life.Children

can

be

taught

to

compete

when

theyprepare

for

the

exams

or

when

they

play

solosports

like

athletics.

Theyhave

to

learn

to

competeto

excel

in

studies

or

win

a

race

or

any

athleticevent.

This

virtue

comes

handy

in

adultlife.

Forexample,

when

they

do

any

business,

they

have

tocompete

with

other

businessmen

to

succeed

inbusiness.

Defini

y,

successful

businessmenareuseful

adults

in

society.临场版：Children

with

a

strong

senseofcompetition

are

more

likely

to

be

self-motivated

inboth

thinking

and

acting.

For

those

who

aim

tostand

out

from

acrowd,

it

is

a

mustthat

theydevote

more

than

others

to

their

goals.

No

matterhow

tempting gamesare,

they

have

to

resistallthe

temptation

and

gradually

their

ability

of

selfcontrolcan

be

enhanced.

-66背诵版：Onthe

other

hand,

there

are

many

fieldswhere

cooperation

is

needed.

Children

can

betaught

this

virtue

in

the

sports

field

when

they

playsoteam

sports

like

cricket

and

hockey.

They

cbe

taught

cooperation

when

teachers

give

themgroup

assignments

in

studies.

This

virtue

alsomakes

them

useful

adults

because

they

have

tocooperate

in

many

fields

of

life.

For

instance,when

they

work

as

scientists

to

research

thetreatment

of

diseases

like

cancers

and

AIDS

then

it

can

never

be

a

one-man

show.

It

has

to

beajoint

effort.

Software

developers

also

have

to

workas

a

teamto

bring

benefits

to

all

of

us

who

usetechnology

nowadays.临场版：On

the

other

hand,

being

able

to

team

upwith

others

helps

children

to

crack

problems

easily.There

are

occasions

when

the

mission

can

by

nomeans

be plished

with

individual

effort,

likewinning

a

football

game.

There

are

also

occasionswhen

a

combination

of

expertise

is

required,

likeholding

a

campus

talent

show.

In

this

sense,children

who

have

had

the

spirit

of

team

work

todeal

with

these

circumstances

will

be

greatlybenefited

in

later

life.-78There

are

also

situations

whereboth

competition

and

cooperation

are

needed

simultaneously.

For

example,

when

children

do

team

sports,

they

learn

to

cooperatewiththeir

team

members

and

at

the

same

time

they

learn

tocompete

with

the

opposite

team.

Similarly,

in

adult

life

theyhave

to

learn

to

cooperate

with

their

country-men

tocompete

with

those

of

other

countries.

We

all

know

that

today’s

era

is

highly

competitive

and

the

big

planetEarthhas

shrunk

to

a

global

village.

For

example,

n

autoindustries

have

merged

to

compete

with

the

German

andJapanese

industries.

So,

competition

and

cooperation

gohand

in

hand.It

is

clear

that

children

should

be

taught

to

compete

as

well

as

cooperate

and

more

importantly

where

in

life

theyhave

to

apply

these

attributes.Some

people

think

if

students

are

afraid

of

theteacher

it

isbetter.

Others

say

that

having

afriendlyrelation

is

better.

Discuss

both

views

andgive

your

own

opinion.

(7+写作 第355题)••小孩是施工中的建筑，而教师则是建筑师。人们对于教师是应该友好还是严厉各执一词。我认为，两种的方式都不好，优秀的教师应该知道何时亲切，何时严厉。严格的教师有很多优势。首先，教师只有作风严格，才能维持纪律。比如，如果学生畏惧老师，他们就会按时上课，也会按时完成作业。但是，如果老师太严格的话，学生就可能失去对其教授学科的，有问题可能也不敢去问。另一方面，亲切的老师则是良师益友，学生有问题也会向其吐露，学生也会对其所教授学科更感。在这种老师的带领下，学生会天天向上。然而，其缺点是对学生太多友好或者偏袒会分散他们的学习注意力。在我看来，好老师是朋友，也是哲人，还是学生的引导者。但是，他们也要时不时地一下学生，避免他们变成脱缰的野马。毕竟，他们塑造的祖国的未来。我建议应该由老师来把握何时亲切何时严厉，因为两种的方式都会都学生的未来造成损害，并最终损害国家的未来。•Young

children

are

buildings

under

construction

andteachersare

the

builders.

It

is

a

highly

debatable

issue

whether

teachers

should

be

friendly

or

strict.

In

my

opinion,

extremes

of

both

approaches

are

bad.

Agood

teacher

should

know

whento

be

friendly

and

when

to

bestrict.There

are

many

advantages

if

teachers

are

strict.

To

begin

with,

discipline

can

only

be

maintained

if

teachersare

strict.

For

example,

if

students

are

afraid

of

theteacher,

they

will

attend

classes

regularly

and

completetheir

work

in

time.

But,

if

the

teacher

is

too

strict,

then

thestudentsmay

lose

interest

in

the

subject

and

may

not

cometothe

teacher

withtheir

problems.On

the

other

hand,

a

friendly

teacher

is

like

a

good

mentorwith

whom

students

can

share

their

problems.

Studentsalso

take

more

interest

in

the

subject.

Students

bloomunder

the

guidance

of

such

a

teacher.

The

disadvantage,

however,

is

that

a

too

friendly

or

partial

attitude

resultsindiversion

from

studies.In

my

opinion,

a

good

teacher

should

be

like

a

friend,philosopher

and

guide

for

his

students.

But,

from

time

totime,

he

should

pull

the

reins

so

that

the

students

do

not

goout

of

hand.

After

all,

he

is

sha the

future

of

the

nation.I

suggest

that

it

should

be

decided

by

the

teacher

when

tobe

friendly

or

strict

because

extremes

of

both

approachesare

detrimental

for

the

future

of

a

studentand

ultima y

forthe

future

of

a

nation.Development

in

technology

causesenvironmental

problems.

Some

people

believethe

solution

in

these

problems

is

everyoneaccepts

a

simpler

way

of

life,

while

others

saythat

technology

can

solve

theseproblems.Discuss

both

views

and

give

your

own

opinion.•，科技进步导致环境问题。有人认为如果人们生活从简不使用高科技产品的话，这些问题就会得以解决，但其他人则认为解铃还须系铃人，只有科技才能解决这些问题。在下文中，我将对

进行

。•有人说如果人类停止使用科技、过简单的生活，那么就能拯救环境。他们认为大家使用的奢侈品正是环境的元凶。如果人们不使用空调、汽车和其他此类科技产品的话，污染就自然减少了，化石等自然资源也能得到保护，而这一切将能拯救环境。•然而，有人说只有科技才能拯救环境。他们认为如今科技已经如此发达，是不可能后退的。

不能让大家放弃飞机去做牛拉车。•有很多技术突破在帮助大幅改善环境。一个最好的例子就是在非洲等发展中地区寻找解决水资源问题的办法中，

可以通过对海水加压，使其产生蒸汽流，让其通过碳纳米管进行过滤，然后就能得到干净的饮用水，这几乎是无穷无尽的资源。此外，

正致力于建设一个空间

能动力系统，计划2030年前完成。通过利用

的巨大能量，它可以无限期地满足整个世界的电力需求，既不会产生核废料也不会排放温室气体。如果成功的话，它将会对世界产生深远的意义。它将可以为学校、医院和家庭提供电能，它将意味着有一次的工业革命。•简而言之，我认为只有科技才能解决世界的环境问题。

如今终于进入到了一个科技能把世界变得更加美好的时代，让人们接受从简的生活方式是非常不现实的。It

is

irrefutable

that

progress

in

technology

leads

toenvironmental

problems.

Some

individuals

are

of

the

opinion

that

if

people

live

a

simple

life

and

do

notuse

thethings

that

technology

has

brought

us

then

these

problemscan

be

solved,

whereas

others

opine

that

only

technologycan

solve

these

problems.

In

the

following

paragraphs,

I

intend

to

discuss

both

viewpoints.