读后续写人与自我类+雀斑女孩-2025届高三英语二轮复习

TheGirlwithFrecklesonHerFace原文：WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles.IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasunderwhelmed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawless

peaches-and-cream

complexion.Icouldn'thelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydayprecisely

atthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies,seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike,“I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.一、读Youcan'thavepoetryanddistanceatthesametime,justgodowntoearthandlive.

____具体时间或when人物或动物地点物品角色：时间线事件线地点线物品I，mom,mycousin--Elisabeth我有雀斑感觉失落发现祛斑霜广告去等快递包裹到了涂祛斑霜去锄地家人发现我很多斑哭了，躲起来快递箱房间地里家里浴室虎尾百合12岁照镜子的时候Then三周三周后第二天早上Then结束回家照镜子的时候二、思我对外貌不自信，除了雀斑，还有其他原因么？思路提示01思路提示03思路提示02续写的地点为什么会从浴室转到房间？妈妈的安慰起作用了么？思路提示04第二段续写敲门的人是谁？Elisabeth有什么作用？思路提示05思路提示06为什么提及虎尾百合？所属类别识别问题解决途径问题解决人与自我（成长篇）我因脸上有雀斑而沮丧，买祛斑霜，斑更多了发现自己的闪光点，不再因外貌沮丧所属类别识别问题问题解决解决途径Elisabeth的安慰确定主题para.1Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.阶段结果妈妈的安慰失败，我从浴室跑回房间para.2Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.确定故事大致走向阶段结果我发现自己的闪光点，不再为外貌沮丧确定每段具体情节Para.1发出者与上情节衔接动作情绪微情节1mom微情节2mom微情节3I微情节4mom微情节5I没有听到我的回应notreceivinganyresponsefromme来浴室查看我的情况checkingonme焦急（加快脚步）quickenherpaceanxiously看到我安然无恙inawholeskin询问发生的事情askmewhatwasgoingon松了口气breathedinrelief听到询问流泪streamingdown，告知uttered，涂applied,出现appeared更难过likeahammerblow,tossingmeintodeepersorrow安慰我

comfortedme说话听不进turnadeafto冲dashingtoward倒在床上throwingmyselfinthebed情绪低落downinspirit确定每段具体情节Para.2发出者与上情节衔接动作情绪微情节1I微情节2Elisabeth微情节3I微情节4I犹豫了一会儿hesitatingforamoment拖着步子去开shuffledacrosstheroom难过withtearfuleyesandstillwetcheeks在门后atthedoor拿着花，给我花，道歉withabunchoftigerliliesinherhand,handedtheflowerstome,apologized沉浸在悲伤中immersedmyselfinmydepressedemotions听安慰mydevotedeffortswhileshepayattentiontoherskin惊讶

surprisedme发现自己闪光点shiningpointsinme有斑点却芬芳dottedwithugly“freckles”,smellfragrant0102根据所给范文的中文进行翻译三、写没有得到我的回答，她焦急地加快脚步走向浴室，查看我的情况。看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。她的话就像一记重锤，把我扔进更深的悲伤中。我泪流满面，用受伤的语气说:我在脸上涂了去斑霜，脸上的雀斑越来越多了。了解我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多，这很正常，亲爱的，我在你这个年纪的时候也是如此!”情绪低落的我对妈妈的话充耳不闻，冲进卧室，一头倒在床上。Notreceivinganyresponsefromme,shequickenedherpaceanxiouslytothebathroom,checkingonme.Seeingmeinawholeskin,shebreathedinreliefandaskedmewhatwasgoingon.Herwordsseemedlikeahammerblow,tossingmeintodeepersorrow.Tearsstreamingdown,IutteredininjuredtonesthatIappliedthefreckle-removercreamonmyfaceandfrecklesappearedonmyfacemoreandmore.Knowingmysituation,shecomfortedme,“Itisnormalthatteengirlshavemorefrecklesontheirfacesthanusual,SodoIatyourtime,honey!”

Downinspirit,Iturnedadeafeartowhatmymomsaid,dashingtowardsmybedroomandthrowingmyself

intothebed.我犹豫了一会儿，泪眼婆娑，两颊湿漉漉地拖着步子去打开房门。美丽的伊丽莎白站在门口，手里拿着一束虎百合花。她发现我对她的到来漠不关心，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。正当我还沉浸在压抑的情绪中时，伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我大吃一惊。从她的话语中，我第一次知道她欣赏我在锄地上的努力，然而她竟然一直只注意自己的皮肤。这时，我终于发现自己身上也存在着一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样，那些点缀着丑陋“雀斑”的花，依然会散发出芬芳。Hesitatingforamoment,withtearfuleyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffledacross

theroomtoopenthedoor.AtthedoorstoodbeautifulElisabethwithabunchoftigerliliesinherhand.Findingmeindifferenttohercoming,shehandedtheliliestomeandapologizedformy“accident”.JustIstillimmersedmyselfinallmydepressedemotions,whatElisabethsaidnextsurprisedme.Inherwords,Ifirstknewthatsheadmiredme