Unit1作文练习一家乡变化类课件牛津译林版八年级英语下册

家乡变化类写作TopicManychangeshavetakenplaceinXuzhouinthepastfewyears.Pleasewriteanessaytoshowusthechangesfromdifferentaspects.smalloldhousesairpollutiongreenhillsandcleanriversnewflatsallkindsofshoppingmallsonlyafewshoppingmallsbyundergroundonfootorbybikehaveowncarswideandcleanstreetsnarrowanddirtyroadsFact1：Environmentpastpresentnarrowanddirtyroads;rubbisheverywhere;airpollution;largeopenspaces;wideandcleanstreets;greentreesonbothsides;cleanwatershopsandtallbuildings;Fact2：Lifepastpresentsmalloldhouses;listentotheradioor

watchTV;onlyafewshopsnewflats;alotofshoppingmallsFact3：Transportpastpresentonfootorbicycle;bybusortaxi;haveowncars；byunderground;Opinion...haschangedovertheyears.manychangeshastakenplacein....peopleenjoya...Lifetherewereonly...inthepast,butnow...peopleusedto...UsefulexpressionsPastPresentEnvironmentnarrowanddirtyroads…Livingconditionssmalloldhouses…Transportonfootorbybicycle…注意:1.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。3.短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。

Changesinmyhometown

MyhometownXuzhouhaschangedalotovertheyears._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ithinkinsomewayslifeisbetternow.However,

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Samplepassages

Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundthecityonfootorbybicycle,butnowtheycangoaroundbybusorundergroumd.Mostfamilieshavetheirowncars.

Ithinkinsomewayslifeisbetternow.However,toomanycarsleadtoairpollutioninourcity.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecanrealizetheproblemandacttoprotecttheenvironment.Anyway,it'sgoodtoseetheamazingchangesinourhometownSamplepassages1.Inthepast,wehavefreshair,cleanrivesandahugearmyoftrees.2.Inthepast,theairwasfresh,theriverwasclear.3.Howeverbringsomepollution.4.Peopleliveaverymordenlife.时态错误拼写错误大小写错误谓语动词错误缺少标点和主语标点错误Correction拼写错误1.Youcanalsobyunderground.2.Thereareveryfast.缺少谓语take