句子平行结构课件

ParallelStructure平行结构Itisimportantforengineerstothinklogically,toanalyzecarefully,andtomakedecisionsrealistically.Ifyouwanttogetasatisfactorygradeinthetrainingprogram,youmustbepunctual,courteous,andconscientious.1ppt课件.ParallelStructureItisimportantforengineerstothink

logically,

toanalyze

carefully,andtomakedecisions

realistically.Ifyouwanttogetasatisfactorygradeinthetrainingprogram,youmustbepunctual,courteous,andconscientious.2ppt课件.ParallelStructure平行结构Besureitemsareparallel.Ordinarily,‘and’and‘but’connectsamegrammaticalelements,forexample,twoormorenouns,verbs,adjectives,phrases,orclauses.NOTPARALLEL:Atcamp,wemostenjoyedswimming,hiking,andhowtoplayvolleyball.PARALLEL:Atcamp,wemostenjoyedswimming,hiking,andplayingvolleyball.NOTPARALLEL:OurdogJollyistiny,arichbrowncoat,andaperky(自信的，得意洋洋的)disposition（性情）.PARALLEL:OurdogJollyistiny,wearsarichbrowncoat,andhasaperkydisposition.NOTPARALLEL:Agooddriverobeysthespeedlimit,isalert（警惕的）,andshetakesnorisksontheroad.PARALLEL:Agooddriverobeysthespeedlimit,isalert,andtakesnorisksontheroad.3ppt课件.1.a.ThepathtothesummitofMt.Taiisrough,steep,andchallenging.b.ThepathtothesummitofMt.Taiisrough,steep,anditischallenging.2.a.Theidealdogisloyal,friendly,andisingoodhealth.b.Theidealdogisloyal,friendly,andhealthy.4ppt课件.WritingTip:并列结构中的成分必须结构相同Pleaserevisethefollowingsentences:1.Thedutiesofthejobincludebaby-sitting,house-cleaning,andpreparationofmeals.2.Jamesisamanofgreatcreativityandwhoisconsiderate.3.Janeisyoung,enthusiasticandshehastalent.5ppt课件.SentenceStructureProblems1.SentenceFragments残缺句2.Run-OnSentence接排句3.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语4.DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语6ppt课件.句子的基本特点：在语法和逻辑上是一个完整的意义表达单位。有完整的主谓结构（至少有一个主语和谓语）1.Sincethereisalackofinterest.Thereisagreatlackofinformation.2.Ilookforwardtoholidays.Forexample,ThanksgivingandChristmas.3.Havingnomoneyandbeinglonelyinthebigcity.4.Thetablewascoveredwithfreshvegetables.Suchaslettuce,carrots,andspinach.7ppt课件.句子的基本特点：在语法和逻辑上是一个完整的意义表达单位。有完整的主谓结构（至少有一个主语和谓语）1.Sincethereisalackofinterest，thereisagreatlackofinformation.2.Ilookforwardtoholidays,forexample,ThanksgivingandChristmas.3.Havingnomoneyandbeinglonelyinthebigcity,thewomancommittedsuicide.4.Thetablewascoveredwithfreshvegetablessuchaslettuce,carrots,andspinach.8ppt课件.Run-OnSentence接排句：没有标点符合，也没有连接词；或者是用逗号连接两个完整的句子。1.Theboysscoredhigherinmathsthegirlsscoredhigherinverbalskills.2.Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath,theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.3.Educationisanelusive（令人困惑的）word,itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.9ppt课件.用句号分隔；用分号分隔；用并列连词连接；用连接副词连接；使用从句。Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath.Theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath;theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath,and/buttheboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath;however,theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath,whiletheboysscoredhigherinverbalskills.10ppt课件.用句号分隔；用分号分隔；用并列连词连接；用连接副词连接；使用从句。Educationisanelusiveword.Itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Educationisanelusiveword;itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Educationisanelusiveword,foritoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Educationisanelusiveword;indeed,itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Educationisanelusivewordwhichoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.11ppt课件.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.12ppt课件.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover.13ppt课件.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover.Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood.14ppt课件.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover.Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood.Heonlysuggestedthreerulesforustofollow.15ppt课件.MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats.Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover.Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood.Heonlysuggestedthreerulesforustofollow.Hesuggestedonlythreerulesforustofollow.Heonlysuggestedthem,hedidn’tinsistonthem.16ppt课件.DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语

要注意悬垂修饰语要与主语有逻辑关系Lookingupatthesky,thesunwentunderacloud.Towritewell,goodbooksmustberead.Whileclimbingthehill,therainbegantofall.17ppt课件.DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语

要注意悬垂修饰语要与主语有逻辑关系Lookingupatthesky,Isawthesunwentunderacloud.Towritewell,Imustreadgoodbooks.Whileclimbingthehill,Ifelttherainbeginningtofall.18ppt课件.Exercises:correctthefollowingsentences1.Joetriestocallhomeonceaweek.Tobeintouchwithhisfamily.2.Ericwaslatetoworkheranalltheway.3.Withouttellinganyone,evenhersister,Mary,goingtothepark,meetingherfriends.4.Gettingmarriediseasy,stayingmarriedisadiffe