又困电梯了（T8联考）读后续写解析讲义-高三英语二轮复习

又困电梯了T8联考续写解析Whenwewerefinallydismissedfromthelastclassoftheday,thestudentsstreamedoutoftheclassrooms.Itwasanotherboringdayafterschool.IdraggedmyfeethomeasIsighed.Yetanotheruneventfulday,Ithought.LittledidIknowthatthedaywouldtakeaturnfortheworse.Theliftlobby（电梯间）ofmyflatwasoldanddirty.Thewalls,whichwerepaintedwhite,hadbeendirtiedovermanyyears.Ireachedmyflat’slobby,andpressedtheliftbuttonandwentin.Justthen,MrsLim,myelderlyneighbour,hobbled（蹒跚）in.Shelookedancientwithtissuepaperwhitehair,wearingafadedoldfashioneddress.Iheldtheliftdooropen,flashingafriendlysmile,andpolitelygreetedher.Iaskedherhowshefeltthatdayandpressedthebuttons.Shethankedmeforbeingsopolite,thenweweresilentfortherestoftheride.Theliftfelldownincreasinglyfast.Therewereloudclankingsoundshereandtherewhiletheliftgrewslowerandslower.Myheartbeathardandfastasmyhandsturnedcoldandwetwithsweat.Unfortunately,theliftcametoanabruptstopatthefifthfloor.Ipressedthebuttonshardseveraltimes,butitwasofnohelp.Thelightsonthebuttonshadgoneout.Itsoondawnedonmethatweweretrapped.Anicyfearcreptupmyspine.MrsLimwashysterical（歇斯底里）.“Wewillnevergetout!”shecriedwithherfacepale.Ithadbeeacolourlessmask.Ihadnotimetolose.Ipressedthebellintheliftimmediately.Thesoundwassurelydeafening,butwhatotherchoicedidIhave?MrsLimburstintotears.Itriedmyverybesttoforther,tellingherthateverythingwouldbeallrightandthatweneededtofindouthowtogetoutsafely.MrsLimbeganhavingtroublebreathing,andIimmediatelyhelpedhersitdownandloosenedhercollar.Paragraph1:Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.Paragraph2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.续写作文：Paragraph1:Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.Eachminutewitnessedthedeadsilenceinthelift,brokenonlybyMrs.Lim’ssniffles.ThenInoticedtheemergencycallbutton,somethingthatusuallyappearedasameredecoration,yetitheldmylastglimmerofhopeatthatverymoment.Afterpressingit,Iwassomewhatrelievedwhenthefaintcrackleoftheconnectionsignaledthathelpwasontheway.Ileanedagainstthedirtywall,puttingonabravefaceandchattingaboutourneighborsandourdailyroutineswithMrs.Lim,hopingtodistractherfromtheunease,aswellasmine.ButittooksolongthatIwasabouttosinkintodespairagainwhentherefinallycamesomevoice.(122words)Paragraph2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.Theydidetoourrescue!Itwasmyturntoburstintotears,tearsofrelief,forInolongerneededtopretendtobestrong.Thedooropened,thelightofduskwasn'toverpowering,butaswesteppedoutofthecrampedlift,itstillmomentarilydazzledoureyes.Itwasabeaconoflife,agentleyetprofoundreminderofoursurvival.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadathoroughunderstandingofthesignificanceofcherishingtheuneventfuldays,forintheirsimplicityliesapreciousnessweoftenoverlook.Ipromisedmyself,Iwouldneveragainfailtofindjoyintheordinary.(126words)与原文协同的表达思路：Itwasanotherboringdayafterschool.IdraggedmyfeethomeasIsighed.Yetanotheruneventfulday,Ithought.➡1.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadathoroughunderstandingofthesignificanceofcherishingtheuneventfuldays,forintheirsimplicityliesapreciousnessweoftenoverlook.2.ItdawnedonmethatIshouldnevertakemyblesseduneventfullifeforgranted,andImustcherishwhatIhavewithaheartfullofgratitude.Theliftlobbyofmyflatwasoldanddirty.Thewalls,whichwerepaintedwhite,hadbeendirtiedovermanyyears.➡AsIleanedagainstthegrimy/dirtywallsofthelift,thepeelingpaintmirroringthechaosofmymind,Ifeltanoppressiveweightclosinginaroundme,makingitdifficulttobreathe.Shethankedmeforbeingsopolite,thenweweresilentfortherestoftheride.➡Iguessourbondswouldneverbelimitedtomerepolitenessagain.MrsLimburstintotears.➡1.Heroncepanickedtearsfinallygavewaytotearsofrelief.2.Itwasmyturntoburstintotears,tearsofrelief,forInolongerneededtopretendtobestrong.Weweretrulygoingtoberescued.原文协同按紧急求救Iturnedtotheemergencycallbutton,somethingthatusuallyappearedasameredecoration,yetitheldmylastglimmerofhopeatthatverymoment,myhopehingingonthepossibilityofsomeone'sresponse.如果没用——However,despitemyrepeatedefforts,thelineremainedstubbornlysilent,onlyservingtoincreaseoursenseofisolation.如果有用——Afterpressingtheemergencycallbutton,Iwassomewhatrelievedwhenthefaintcrackleoftheconnectionsignaledthathelpwasontheway.对MrsLim的帮助社牛倾情暖场型：IputonabravefaceforMrs.Lim,chattingaboutourneighborsandthesmalljoysofourdailyroutines,hopingtodistractherfromthegrowingunease.社恐调息静等型：Iencouragedhertotakeslow,steadybreaths,andweleanedagainstthewallforsupport,waitingfortherescuethatseemedtotakeaneternitytoarrive.电梯被困合理自救Ifeltamassiveweightoffmyshoulder.Ibreathedasighofrelief,feelingasthoughaweightyrockhadfinallyhittheground.Thelightofduskwasn'toverpowering,butasIsteppedoutofthecrampedlift,itstillmomentarilydazzledmyeyes.Itwasabeaconoflife,agentleyetprofoundreminderofoursurvival.续写亮点：Eachminutewitnessedthedeadsilenceinthelift,brokenonlybyMrs.Lim’ssniffles.运用了分词短语作状语。ThenInoticedtheemergencycallbutton,somethingthatusuallyappearedasameredecoration,yetitheldmylastglimmerofhopeatthatverymoment.运用了转折连词以及定语从句。Afterpressingit,Iwassomewhatrelievedwhenthefaintcrackleoftheconnectionsignaledthathelpwasontheway.运用了主从复合句。Ileanedagainstthedirtywall,puttingonabravefaceandchattingaboutourneighborsandourdailyroutineswithMrs.Lim,hopingtodistr