Unit4单元话题满分范文必背-七年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津上海版）

Unit4Let’sgoshopping单元话题总分值范文必背1．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Goingshopping〞.(以“去购物〞为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(留意：短文中不得消失考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分)Suggestedquestions:I.Whodoyouusuallygoshoppingwith?2.Wheredoyouusuallygo?3.Whatdoyouusuallybuy?4.Whatdoyouusuallydobeforeyoudosomeshopping?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Iusuallygoshoppingwithmyparentsonweekends.Weusuallygotobigshoppingmallbecausethereareallkindsofthings.Iusuallygotothebookstoretobuythelatestbooksbecausereadingmakesmehappy.BeforeIgoshopping,IwillmakeashoppinglistwithmymothertoavoidforgettingtobuythethingsIneedtobuy.【详解】1.

题干解读：此题属于话题作文，依据题目要求写自己一般和谁购物，去哪，买哪些东西，并且一般购物前做些什么。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，削减语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2.

例文点评：这是一篇比拟优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了自己和父母周末去商场购物，一般买一些新书，购物前会做购物清单。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增加了整篇文章的规律关系。3.高分亮点：词组：goshopping；onweekends；bigshoppingmalls；allkindsof；ashoppinglist等；句型：Iusuallygoshoppingwithmyparentsonweekends./Iusuallygotothebookstoretobuythelatestbooksbecausereadingmakesmehappy./BeforeIgoshopping,IwillmakeashoppinglistwithmymothertoavoidforgettingtobuythethingsIneedtobuy.【点睛】书面表达：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后依据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如goshopping；onweekends；bigshoppingmalls；allkindsof；ashoppinglist等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要留意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比拟等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最终，要认真检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。2．Writing〔写话)Writeatleast50wordsonthetopic“Ashoppingexperience〞(以“一次购物经受〞为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文)提示：你是否有过和家人或伴侣一起购物的经受？请描述一下你当时购物的过程，并谈一下购物感受。【答案】AnUnforgettableShoppingExperienceOnasunnyafternoonlastsummervacation,mymotherandIwentshoppingtogether.ThereweresomanythingsonsalethatIdidn’tknowwhattobuy.Suddenly,Isawtwostatueswhichlookedsobeautiful.Idecidedtobuythem.SoIaskedtheprice.It’stwentyyuaneach.Itriedtomakeabargainwithin.Thebossrefusedatfirst,butwhenwewasgoingtoleave,hestoppedusandsaid,“OK,youcanhavebothofthemattenyuan.〞Therefore,Iboughtbothofthemandwewenthomeatlast.Iwasveryhappyonthatday,becauseitwasthefirsttimethatIhadmadeabargainwithabusinessmansosuccessfully.【详解】题干分析：这是一篇话题型作文，以“一次购物经受〞为题，实际就是一篇记叙文，要包括事情的时间，地点，人物，大事等，这里主要描述购物的过程并且要写购物感受。既然是经受，所以应当用一般过去式。例文分析：例文实行三段式，运用第一人称和一般过去时。第一段交代了时间，人物及大事；其次段具体的写出了购物的过程；第三段写出了此次购物的感受。高分亮点：

短语：Onasunnyafternoon一个阳光明媚的下午；goshopping购物；onsale减价出售；decidetodosth打算做某事；trytodosth努力做某事；makeabargain讨价还价。

句型：〔1〕Isawtwostatueswhichlookedsobeautiful.我看到两个雕像，看起来很美丽。Which引导的定语从句；〔2〕itwasthefirsttimethatIhadmadeabargainwithabusinessmansosuccessfully.这是我第一次如此胜利地与一个商人做交易。Itisthefirsttimethat从句。3．随着网络的开展，“网购〞已经特别流行。越来越多的同学也参加到网购的群体中，依据你对网购的看法写一篇英语短文。要求：1.适当增加内容或说明理由。2.字迹工整，书写标准。70词左右。Advantages足不出户不受时间限制，节省时间Disadvantages在网上看不到实物网上支付不平安__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Onlineshoppingisanewwayofshopping.It’sverypopularwiththeyoungpeople.Onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,youcanbuysomethingsathome.Itcansavelotsoftime.Second,youcanparethepricesofthesameproductandsavemoney.Butonlineshoppinghassomedisadvantages,too.Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.Iloveonlineshopping,butIalsogotothesupermarkettobuysomethinginmyfreetime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时〞；③提示：写作要点表格中已给出，考生应留意不要遗漏表格中的信息，可适当添加细节，但要突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，直入主题，简洁介绍网购。其次步，具体介绍网购的利弊。可依据表格中已给信息，从“利〞和“弊〞两个方面客观地介绍网购；第三步，表达对网购的看法。依据自己的状况，表达自己对网购的看法。[亮点词汇]①bepopularwith受……欢送②parethepricesof…比拟……的价格③savemoney省钱④inmyfreetime在我的空闲时间[高分句型]①Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.〔连词but表转折〕②AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.〔动名词短语作主语〕4．下面是春天服装店的商品展销价格。请依据表格内容，以“SpringClothesStore’sSale〞为题写一那么广告。ClothesColorsPriceT—shirtallcolors﹩9sweatersyellow,redandblue﹩12socksblack﹩3bagsforsportsblackandgreen﹩20shorts(forgirls)allcolors﹩25要求：〔1〕把表格中的内容表达在广告中；〔2〕不少于50词。SpringClothesStore’sSale______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：SpringClothesStore’sSaleeandbuyyourclothesatSpringClothesStore.SpringClothesStoreisatagreatsale.Look!WehavemanydifferentkindsofTshirts.ThepriceofTshirtsinallcolorsis9dollarseach.Therearemanybeautifulyellow,redandbluesweatersinourstore.Thepriceofsweatersis12dollarseach.Doyoulikesocks?Wehavesocksinblackforonly3dollars.Doyoulikebagsforsports?Wehavebagsforsportsinblackandgreenforonly20dollars.Doyouneedshorts?Wehavemanydifferentkindsofshortsforgirls.ThepriceofTshirtsinallcolorsforgirlsis25dollarseach.etoSpringClothesStorenow!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，也是一那么广告；②时态：时态为“一般现在时〞；③提示：写作要点已给出，同学应留意不要遗漏“要点提示〞中各种衣服的颜色以及价格的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山用祈使句吸引顾客到春天服装店里来买衣服，并且说明服装店在促销；其次步，具体阐述各种促销衣服的颜色以及价格；第三步，书写结束语。用祈使句和开头照应，招呼顾客来服装店。[亮点词汇]①atagreatsale在大甩卖②manydifferentkindsof很多不同种类的③thepriceof……的价格④bagsforsports运动包⑤inallcolors各种颜色的[高分句型]①Therearemanybeautifulyellow,redandbluesweatersinourstore.〔therebe句型，Therebe+名词+地点，表示某地有……〕②Wehave bags for sportsinblackandgreenforonly20dollars.〔介词短语inblackandgreen作后置定语，for+价钱〕③eandbuyyourclothesatSpringClothesStore.〔把祈使句用于广告词〕5．以“StarShoppingMall〞为题写一篇60词左右的短文。要求句意通顺、语法正确。要点提示：1．你家四周有一家StarShoppingMall。2．购物中心共有六层，里面有很多店铺，如餐馆、书店、服装店、鞋店、体育用品商店等;3．每天都有大批的顾客光临。4．周末你常和父母一起去那里购物。StarShoppingMall__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StarShoppingMallThereisashoppingmallcalledStarShoppingMallnearmyhome.Themallisverybig.Therearesixfloorsinall.Therearemanyshopsinthemall,suchasrestaurants,bookstores,clothingstores,shoestores,sportinggoodsstores,etc.Themallopensat9:00a.m.andclosesat10:00p.m.Manycustomersetodosomeshoppingeveryday.Ioftengoshoppingtherewithmyparentsonweekends.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“StarShoppingMall〞为题，结合提示内容进行写作，留意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍购物中心的位置，布局，顾客状况和自己和父母常常去等状况。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。6．如今，很多人喜爱网上购物，但也有人依旧对超市购物情有独钟。假设你是超市购物爱好者，请依据所给信息，写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.能看到商品，衣物、鞋帽等还可以试穿。2.支付平安。3.购置后可立刻带回家。4.……要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰,书写标准；可适当发挥。Ilikesupermarketshopping.Ithasseveraladvantages._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionIlikesupermarketshopping.Ithasseveraladvantages.First,Icanseetheproducts,suchasshoes,hatsandsoon.lcanalsotrytheclotheson.SoIcanbuytheproperclothes.Second,payingisverysafe.Andafteryoupayforyourthings,youcantakethemhomerightaway.Andlastly,Icanparethepricesofthesameproducts.Icansavealotofmoneyinthisway.Ithinkthisisthemostimportant.Thisismyidea.Whataboutyours?【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作。在写作时，第一段应当说明自己的观点；其次段表达其优点；第三段提出建议。2.写作指导：本文应当用第一人称来表达自己的理由；时态采纳一般现在时；描述优点时，观点要到位，层次清晰；并且文章的结构要严谨，保证条理清晰。7．近几年来，网购越来越受人们欢送，它正静静地转变着人们的生活。请依据要求，以“Onlineshopping〞为题，写一篇70词左右的短文，谈谈网购的优点和缺点。

提示：1〕网购成为一种时尚；2〕优点：不用出门就能买到东西；节省时间；价格低等；3〕缺点：网上的商品与实际不符；网上支付存在平安隐患等。Onlineshopping___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Nowadays,onlineshoppingisbeingmoreandmorepopular.Itischangingourwayoflife.Manypeoplethinkitisafashionablelifestyle.Onlineshoppinghasseveraladvantages.First,youcanbuyanythingyoulikewithoutgoingoutofyourhouse.Ithelpsussavetime.Second,wemayalsosavemoneybecausethethingsonlinearemuchcheaper.Butithassomedisadvantages.First,whenweareshoppingonline,wecan’tseetheproducts.Second,lowerpricesmakepeopleshopforuselessthings.Itwastesmuchmoney.Third,payingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.Allinall,onlineshoppingisfun,butwemustpayattentiontoit.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇英语短文。主要介绍网购的优缺点，写作时可把题目中的内容依据规律进行串联，围绕要点组织材料，然后