2018.6月浙江英语续写李华原创.pptx

2018 .6月续写,浙江兰溪兰荫中学 李华,第二节 读后续写 (满分25分) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.,His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.,In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,Basic information:,Dad,Writer,A vocation like never before,A trip to the Wild West,Late afternoon,night,Morning,Afternoon,Settings:,1. listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby,3. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees , and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene .,4. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,2. headed slowly towards the mountains.,Description of the rabbit:,The little Rabbit has a coat of white/brown hair. The two ears are long and prick up on its head. It is furry, soft and white/brown with two red eyes glaring above the chin. Its eyes are like a pair of small red bulbs. Exposed to sunlight, they become little pieces of red thread. Its ears are straight and long and they can turn and move slightly. How cute it is! 小白兔全身盖一层雪白的毛。两只耳朵很长，直立在头上。它长着一身柔软的毛，瞪着一双红眼睛.眼睛像一对红色的小灯泡，见到阳光时就微微眯起；耳朵长而直竖，有时还会微微转动,它多可爱啊,agile （动作）敏捷的，灵活的 able to move quickly and easily,At 20 years old he was not as agile as he is now. 20岁时他并不如现在这般矫健。,scurry VERB (尤指受惊吓时)急奔，乱窜 When people or small animals scurry somewhere, they move there quickly and hurriedly, especially because they are frightened.,The attack began, sending residents scurrying for cover. 袭击发动后，居民们纷纷奔逃躲避。,Bushy-tailed squirrels scurry to find acorns and nuts to hide. 大尾巴的松鼠忙着搜寻和贮藏橡果和松子,gallop n. 疾驰；飞奔 v. 飞驰；急速进行,whinny n. 马嘶声；嘶声 v. 嘶；以嘶声表示,用作名词 (n.) The horse went off at a gallop across the field. 那匹马疾驰起来跑过田野。 All the horses broke into a gallop. 所有的马突然飞奔起来。,用作动词 (v.) Two people gallop whip and spur, do not come in the city a little while. 两人快马加鞭飞驰，不一会儿就来到城里。 When running free, the Afghan Hound moves at a gallop, showing great elasticity and spring in his smooth, powerful stride. 自由奔跑时，阿富汗猎犬是飞驰的，它平稳有力的步幅显示出极大的弹力和跳跃力。,用作动词 (v.) The horse whinnied with pleasure. 那匹马舒服的嘶叫著。 It is an ill horse can neither whinny nor wag his tail. 这匹马病了,它不会嘶鸣,也不会摆尾。,Problems and solutions,plot,Writing purpose,characters,feelings,Writing purpose:,分享作者年轻时的和父亲的一次冒险行动，以及从父亲那学到了一些东西。,Feelings：,从兴奋，开心到害怕，吃惊，再到放松，开心的过程,Characters：,文章没有明显的显示出来，但父亲应该是很有经验的样子。,Problems and resolutions：,第一段是problem的产生。第二段是resolution 的过程。,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.,It was very cute. We tried to hunt for it , walking through forests and hills without any rest. We finally got into the deep of a forest.,Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,We got lost . Through some difficulties, we got back safe with our efforts.,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was furry with a coat of gorgeous brown hair. After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs , it began to scurry ahead. “ Why not catch it and bring it back to Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.”With this thought, I rode hard to hunt for it. Dad saw it and had to follow me. The rabbit was very agile, soon entering a mountain forest . We had to get down the horses, continuing the chase and totally forgetting the track back. Even though we tried desperately, the rabbit was out of sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part of an forest.,Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. And dark clouds seemed to be gathering in the sky. Taking out the cell phone, we soon found something was wrong: no signal. And no compass. Frightened, I stared at Dad , trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him. “Maybe what you have learned in geography class works,“ he said, pointing to the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the North Star. Soon we found the right direction. We hurried back finding the horses . And the river was in sight again. The family was worried and about to call the police. At the sight of us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nothing more memorable than this rabbit hunting in my life!,第一篇 Cherie 老师 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road. Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!,第二篇：Katie 老师 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly, “Dad! Look!” Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep. (86 words) We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out theres always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm. (114 words),第三篇： Oz老师 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initial track Uncle Paul has warned us to keep. My dad held the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didnt work. Our cowboy hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away leaving me and my dad lying on the ground. Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the back. “We get lost, right?” I asked my dad, “Yes. But dont worry, well find the way back home.” We slowly walked towards the luminous direction.“I guess were late for supper.” Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad tried to make me laugh. At that time, we saw the river in front of us. “Dad, this is the river next to our farm house. We can follow the river to find our way home.” “Exactly! How clever you are!” Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came into our sight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.,第四篇：Niehai 老师 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It got such a fright that it rushed at a high speed. I, frightened too, grabbed the rein tightly. Minutes later, the horse was off the track and I found that there was no sign of my dad. In the middle of nowhere, I felt a wave of fear wrap around me .Worse still, the rain came pouring down and I was wet through. After seemingly long hours, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response , I shouted in a loud voice.“Dad, Im here!“ Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me and we got reunited. We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The moon burst through the clouds and cast its silver light all over the wet land. We wandered slowly on our horses, feeling at a loss what to do. Suddenly, the sound of a floating river caught my attention.“Dad, maybe we can find the farm house down the river.“ Dad nodded with approval. With great care, we rode our horses along the river. Shortly afterwards, the Uncle Pauls farm, sure enough ,came into our sight. Finally, we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before!,第五篇： Tanya 老师 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I knew we had gotten hopelessly lost. I called; the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. At last I heard the welcome sound of rushing water - the river! Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and eventually heard the familiar frogs, and saw the comforting sight of the old farm house, my dad shining a huge lamp from the porch, guiding our way home.,Molly Dorighi 3/6/2017 07:52:35 pm Lost in The Wild, Wild West It was the summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the wild, wild west. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his ranch in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room listening to the crickets, owls, and coyotes. Very early in the morning, uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my ranch“ he said. After breakfast, I went to help aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze. I was impressed to see my dad and uncle Paul riding horses, they looked really cool.,In the afternoon, I asked uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper“ uncle Paul cried “and keep to the trail so that you don't get lost“. “OK“ my dad cried back. After a while we could hardly see uncle Paul and his farm house. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun blended to create a majestic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,原文地址：http:/holdenfourthgrade.weebly.com/reading-log-blog/writing-log-blog-due-friday-march-10th,coyote英 ka't,Suddenly a little coyote jumped out in front of my horse and startled him. He was so startled, he took off running faster than I imagined he could. I was holding on as hard as I could and my dad was trying to keep up with me. My horse got off the trail and kept running, and only stopped once it reached the river. It seems the water must have calmed him down a bit. It was a beautiful spot and as frightened as I was just a few minutes earlier, I was happy that I got a chance to see such a place. My dad thought it was gorgeous too, but he said that we had to leave because the sun was setting and he did not want us to get lost. We had left the trail and we did not have a compass. The last thing we wanted was to try to find our way home in the dark. We turned around to start back but the trail was nowhere in sight. The frightened horse had run so fast and so far that we had no idea where we were. By now the sun had almost dipped behind the horizon and we had to think fast, so we tried to find our footprints in the dusty sand. But as we looked we got even more lost and then it grew dark. My dad had a great idea to follow the stars back to the ranch. I remembered that the big dipper was right above my uncle's ranch.,We made sure that our horses were calm before we set off on the long journey home. With doubtful thoughts going through my head, I hoped that we wouldnt see hungry coyotes. We headed toward a high rock to see where the big dipper was in the sky. “I see it Dad, I see it,” I said excitedly. My horse gave a little snort and as we set off to find our way back home. We galloped along the dirt. “Honey, stop,” my dad said with a shaky voice. I stopped with astonishment because I have never seen my dad so frightened in my entire life. “I think that's another coyote. It's about dinner time for them. “GO. RUN,” my dad shouted! We galloped like the wind. At last we were at the ranch. I hugged my uncle as tight as a mama bear hugging her cubs. I snuggled their dog Baxter and kissed my dad good night. As I got into my pajamas, I was relieved to be safe in my bed. I yawned as my eyes slowly closed and I drifted off to sleep.,n. 喷鼻息,紧抱；偎依,