托福作文：Playing sports teaches people more lessons about life. Agree or disagree

Playing sports teaches people more lessons about life. Agree or disagree?Nowadays, many parents tend to encourage their kids to take part in some sports training or join their friends with some ball games because sports not only help children keep healthy but also teach them more lessons about life. Quite a few adults who are passionate about sports and physical exercise also admit that they always draw their inspiration from playing sports. So I cant agree more that people can learn more lessons about life from sports.非常不错的开头()/First of all, playing sports teaches people how to be optimistic in keen competition. The most significant feature that most of the sports possess is competitiveness. Each side of the team has a strong will to win in the game, and but only one side can be the last winner. So if someone eager to beat the competitor, he or she should be keep optimistic no matter he or she is in the lead or falling behind. Usually the competitions in the real life are as intense as in the sport games, just have a look at todays computer marketing,. as As the technology updates at a fantastic speed, the manufactories of computers try hard to attract consumers by varied of means such as cutting down the price, new design of the appearance and advertisements. It is no doubt that to the employees of this kind of realms, keeping optimistic in any situation attaches much importance to the success of their career. 说实话，这段写的很不错。但是在二爸看来，还是有个缺陷的：乖这段的语言很不错，很流畅，我几乎是一气儿读下来的。语言虽然很顺，但是逻辑上二爸跟不上你。For example, why “if someone eager to beat the competitor”, then” he or she should be keep optimistic。 ”这里面缺少一个 ”connected bridge”。 其实这个毛病在与乖平时的交流中二爸有时也会发现，就是逻辑上的跳线。换句话讲，直到你讲到 optimistic，之前的内容我完全想不出你后面是讲 optimistic 的。论证有两种形式：要么先是 evidence 然后结论；要么先给出观点，随后 explain。但是不管怎么样，都必须有 evidence。也许乖以为这是理所当然的成立，不需要那么啰嗦的陈述。但是，所谓的“理所当然”是因人而异的。所以.这个问题昨天早上在一楼讨论过了，但是乖貌似不是很认同二爸，没关系，我也只是二爸，不是专家。乖再琢磨琢磨吧Whats more, playing sports teaches people to work as a team. It is all known that many popular games are team sport, such as football and basketball. In a football team, there are defenders, attackers, mid-fields, and goal keeper; all the eleven players should collaborate together. Even one among them are excellent, he cant win a game all by his own. When we are young, we have been taught to work as a team through playing games. Along with our growing up, we always encounter with problems which are supposed to be solved together like doing research, working out a project with colleagues. We learned how to divide the task according to every ones feature as well as communicate with each other during the process. In fact, cooperation is one of the most fundamental skills of people. Thanks to the sports, we all know a lot about it.All in all, I can safely draw the conclusion that what the sports bring us is far more than healthy body; it teaches us more lessons about the life.恩，总体来讲这篇文章还是很成功的。唯一的问题在第二段我已经提出来了，乖斟酌斟酌吧。加油，作文水平提升的不错了！Nowadays, many parents tend to encourage their kids to take part in some sports training or join their friends with some ball games because sports not only help children keep healthy but also teach them more lessons about life. Quite a few adults who are passionate about sports and physical exercise also admit that they always draw their inspiration from playing sports. So I cant agree more that people can learn more lessons about life from sports.First of all, playing sports teaches people how to be optimistic in keen competition. The most significant feature that most of the sports possess is competitiveness. Each side of the team has a strong will to will in the game, but only one side can be the last winner. So if someone eager to beat the competitor, he or she should be keep optimistic no matter he or she is in the lead or falling behind. Usually the competitions in the real life are as intense as in the sport game, just have a look at todays computer marketing. Since the technology updates at a fantastic speed, the manufactories of computers try hard to attract consumers by varied of means such as cutting down the price, new design of the appearance and advertisements. It is no doubt that to the employees of this kind of realms, keeping optimistic in any situation attaches much importance to the success of their career. Whats more, playing sports teaches people to work as a team. It is all known that many popular games are team sport, such as football and basketball. In a football team, there are defenders, attackers, mid-fields, and goal keeper; all the eleven players should collaborate together. Even one among them are excellent, he cant win a game all by his own. When we are young, we have been taught to work as a team through playing games. Along with growing up, we always encounter with problems which are supposed to be solved together like doing research, working out a project with colleagues. We learned how to divide the task according to every ones feature as well as communicate with each other during the process. In f