高一英语公开课----短文改错课件----灵璧中学-李朝章

How to correct a composition 短文改错 解题技巧 灵璧中学高一年级 李朝章 2015.12. 2 教 学 目 标 1）了解高考短文改错题的错误设置规律 2）掌握短文改错的改正方法 3）提高篇章结构分析和语言纠错的能力 4）培养学生的规范答题习惯 考纲解读 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合 测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综 合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、 篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错 题设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多 ，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文 逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高 层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和 语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 高考短文改错的短文通常只有 110个词左右，文体 多为第一 /三人称记叙文、应用文 (以书信为主 )。所选 取的语言材料贴近实际生活，多为考生所熟知，且话题 贴近学生，有的带点幽默，有的包含教育意义。文字浅 显易懂，材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇；句子结构简单 ，基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句；语言地道，符 合英语语言习惯。各种错误所占比例为 1： 1： 8 多 缺 错 命题特点 Is it difficult for you to correct errors in a sentence? Practice Rules uTry to find the mistakes in each sentence. uYou may discuss with your deskmates. 1. It is difficultly for me to write in English. 2. When the air move, we have wind. 3. Ill get good marks in all my subject. 4. I have made great progressse in my study. 5.Unfortunate, she was ill yesterday . 6. I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term. 7.There are a blackboard and some deskes in the classroom. moves is subjects progress difficult Unfortunately us 主谓不一致 名词单复数 名词单复数 系动词后用形容词 修饰整个句子用副词 代词格 主谓不一致 8. Neither you nor I is wrong. 9. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. 10. He was very happy because of he passed the driving exam. am a 就近原则 固定搭配 连词介词缺或误 1. I can go to home now. 2. I like playing piano. 3. I am fond at English. the Wrong word Missing word of Unnecessary word 高考短文改错的考察方式（格式要规范 ） 设疑方式 错词（ 8）、漏词（ 1）、多词（ 1） 助记口诀 ： 动词 形 ， 名词 数 。 形副 级别 和 转换 。 代词 格 ， 细领悟 。 介词短语 须关注 。 习惯用法 要记住 。 冠词连词 缺 或 误 。 sentences passages 考什么？ 词法： 句法： 主谓语在数上的一致；名词性从句、定语从句、强调句型、句 子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 e.g. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. 语篇（行文逻辑） : (难点 ) 1.上下文的 时态是否一致 e.g. I was only four when she passes away. 2.上下文中的 代词是否一致 ，主要是代词的格与数的错误。 e.g. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. 3. 上下文中的 逻辑是否一致 e.g. ： Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I learned that I had to be more patient and little aggressive（有进取心 的 ） . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修 改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中 共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处 。 每处错误 仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ )，并在其下面写 出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线 划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后 的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。 高考具体要求 Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2013. She had taught English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much. Were sure well get in well with each other. began has years us with beautiful a on 动词形 名词数 代词格 介词短语要牢记 还要注意形和副 冠词连词常光顾 Practice 1. 浏览全文，掌握大意 。 Go through the whole passage to get a general idea . 2.先易后难 , 找出明错 。 Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. 3对照考点 , 深入审读 . Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. 新高考短文改错 应试 策略 及 答题原则 三步走三步走 新高考短文改错 应试 策略 及 答题原则 四不改四不改 1.标点符号不改。 2.大小写不改。 3.词序错误不改。 4.单词拼写不改 。 文中出现带汉语注释的词 ， 在句中不可能用错。 （ 1）忠实原文原则（不改原文的原 意） （ 2）一对一原则（一错一词） （ 3）错误以改动最少原则 （ 4）虚词 （ 冠词、介词、连词和感叹词 ） 以添 加或者删除为原则 （ 5）实词 （ 名词、代词、形容词、副词、动 词和数词 ） 以改变形式为原则 “五不动原则 ” 新高考短文改错 应试 策略 及 答题原则 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately（不幸地） , on the development of industrialization(工业化 ), the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming（全球变暖） has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ll live to regret it. 2015全国高考试题英语卷 I (略有改动 ) When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately （不幸地） , on the development of industrialization（工业化） , the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming（全球变暖） has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ll live to regret it. 2015高考英语卷 I （为降低难度，请把以下划红线部分改正） thought the with serious air Many find our/the and 动 冠 连 介 动 形 /副 名 形 /副 动 代 范 围 全国 课标 卷 I近两年考点 2015 2014 动词 1) think thought 2) must found find 3) Studies have been shown that Since then, we had (been doing ) have 名 词 airs air these year years 代 词 your our /the There are so much (that )many 形容 词 / 副 词 1)a seriously problem serious 2)much rare animals many 1)grow wonderfully tomatoes 2)(The fruits are) juicy and taste tasty 3)five years beforeago 冠 词 in the countryside (加 the) As a result (加 a) 介 词 on with (the development of ) With the help by of 连词 or and Although but yet 逻辑 关系 (The plants are growing) somewhereeverywhere The more we practise, the easier it will be! 拿世界上最好的 “短文改错 ” 题来 练 学生自己的 习作 全国高考卷、 各地模拟卷 Homework 1. Review what we have learnt today 2. Finish a proofreading exercise 请批评指正！ 谢谢！ 2015.12. 2于灵璧中学 试试看 高考真题 (2014新课标 ) Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果 ) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed （自身传种） where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!