2016考研英语书信作文：这里有你努力的方向!

2016 考研英语书信作文：这里有你努力 的方向！ 0-4 分 第一篇 Dear Elle, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party. Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 修改意见： Dear Elle, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子，可 改为 your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend(改为 lending) me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would (加 not)have been appearing (appeared)in(改为 at) once a year (可以用一个定语从句来修饰，此处删掉)campus dancing party(加上 ,which is held only once every year ). Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered(加 the ) dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2 分 微点评：第一段的最后一句话中，由于没有写 not，使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一 定要好好研究一下虚拟语气的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。 第二篇 Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help. Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. 修改意见： Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(删除) help(改为 helping) me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek(改为 seeking) to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(删除 ) Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely(likely 是很可能的意思)to help others without the pay(it was who是强调句，此句可以改为，it was you who are so warmly to help others for free). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. 4 分 微点评：写完书信要有 yours sincerely 和你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一 下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。 第三篇 Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it. Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 修改意见： Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give(改为 gave) me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in (in 后面要加 doing sth.)a variety of activities including(删除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,(加 and) playing simple English games, and so on(删除), I fear that I would have been searching(改为 going) a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it(删除 ). Every one agrees that it was you who give(改为 gave) me many opportunities to speak English loudly, (改为.because 首字母大写)beacuse(拼写错误，改为 because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改为 in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英 语) in English, and now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改为 great)interst(拼写错误 interest) in English both listening and writing. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 凯程考研辅导班，中国最强的考研辅导机构， 考研就找凯程考研，学生满意，家长放心，社会认可！ 凯程考研，考研机构，10 年高质量辅导，值得信赖！ 以学员的前途为已任，为学员提 供高效、专业的服务，团队合作,为学员服务，为学员引路。 3 分 微点评：标点符号与后面的单词之间空一格。叹号后面的第一个单词首字母也要大写。 单词拼写的错误尽量避免。建议你好好学习一下有关虚拟语气的知识点，多读一些英语文 章，可有效杜绝中式英语。 第四篇 Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i graduated from peking university. If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation to the prestigious company in China. i fear that i would have been on the job road back and forth .i really appreciate this precious opportunity ,which you offered. every one agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company boss, regarding as my qualifications ,education back ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude. 修改意见： Dear Bob, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my(删除 my) seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i(大写)graduated from peking university(两个单词的首字母大写). If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation (改为 recommending)to the prestigious company in China. i(大写)fear that i would have been on the job road (中式英语)back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppotunity(拼写错误 opportunity) which you offered. every one(首字母大写) agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company(删除) boss, regarding as(删除) my qualifications ,education back ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in(删除). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please(首字母大写 )accept my gratitude. My sincerely, Li Ming 4 分 微点评：作文内容很丰富，但是你的表达能力还有待提高，而且要注意书信的写作格 式，以及大小写的问题。 第五篇 Dear teacher, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement. Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty.It seems that you dont feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 修改意见： Dear teacher, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 后面应该加动名词，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用词不当), I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.(这句话是 虚拟语气，意思是如果不是你的帮助，我恐怕将会) Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty(it waswho是个强调句，这 句话的意思是每个人都说是你例如帮助我)It seems that you dont feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2 分 微点评：英语的句号是.你的英语基础比较薄弱，建议你多看看英语范文，背一些模版。 凯程教育： 凯程考研成立于 2005 年，国内首家全日制集训机构考研，一直从事高端全日制辅导，由李 海洋教授、张鑫教授、卢营教授、王洋教授、杨武金教授、张释然教授、索玉柱教授、方 浩教授等一批高级考研教研队伍组成，为学员全程高质量授课、答疑、测试、督导、报考 指导、方法指导、联系导师、复试等全方位的考研服务。 凯程考研的宗旨：让学习成为一种习惯； 凯程考研的价值观口号：凯旋归来，前程万里； 信念：让每个学员都有好最好的归宿； 使命：完善全新的教育模式，做中国最专业的考研辅导机构； 激情：永不言弃，乐观向上； 敬业：以专业的态度做非凡的事业； 服务：以学员的前途为已任，为学员提供高效、专业的服务，团队合作，为学员服务，为 学员引路。 如何选择考研辅导班： 在考研准备的过程中，会遇到不少困难，尤其对于跨专业考生的专业课来说，通过报辅导 班来弥补自己复习的不足，可以大大提高复习效率，节省复习时间，大家可以通过以下几 个方面来考察辅导班，或许能帮你找到适合你的辅导班。 师资力量：师资力量是考察辅导班的首要因素，考生可以针对辅导名师的辅导年限、辅导 经验、历年辅导效果、学员评价等因素进行综合评价，询问往届学长然后选择。判断师资 力量关键在于综合实力，因为任何一门课程，都不是由一、两个教师包到底的，是一批教 师配合的结果。还要深入了解教师的学术背景、资料著述成就、辅导成就等。凯程考研名 师云集，李海洋、张鑫教授、方浩教授、卢营教授、孙浩教授等一大批名师在凯程授课。 而有的机构只是很普通的老师授课，对知识点把握和命题方向，欠缺火候。 对该专业有辅导