2011考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文汇总.doc

2011考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文汇总2011年考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文：低碳与环保低碳与环保构思点拨图片中一个小男孩，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依然在播放，这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是，我们如果从更宏观，更深层次的角度去思考，这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下：第一段：描述图画;第二段：列举现象，分析影响;第三段：建议措施，展望未来。思维拓展环保话题，例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳的角度入手展开写作。高分范文as is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。this phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. many people are used to doing everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. this deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. according to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。to serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. we must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. all these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。佳作妙译如上图生动地展示，一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视，实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保护环境，实现可持续发展。根据统计数据，如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时，则每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排放量。作为对地球负责任的管理者，我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式，从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展，牺牲长期的环境健康的做法，转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。名师点评 is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表达为 a boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。 a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。该句主干结构是：a boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。这个句型的含义是：一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉)，突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。“with the television on”： with 引导的伴随结构，即a boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语a boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。图画描述这句，写得越精彩越好，这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。 are used to doing: 习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。 to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是2005年真题阅读中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的标准到位。一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，我们一定要充分利用，举一反三。2011年考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文：网络的利与弊 到底听谁的?思路点拨本图中，一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑，“10牛的水是否产生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上网求助于网友，网友的答案更是五花八门，说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可见，这幅图反应了这样一个现实：网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计：第一段：描述图画;第二段：网络的利+举例，网络的弊+举例;第三段：提出建议措施取其精华，去其糟粕。思路拓展所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。高分范文just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow. it is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。the implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. on the one hand, the internet has provided us with great convenience. for example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as baidu and so on. on the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the internet, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad. for example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。in conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. on the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work。佳作妙译如图所示，图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题，来自于网友的答案差异太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显，人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面，因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如，通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标，我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面，由于因特网上有海量的信息，很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的，其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。总之，一方面，充分利用因特网来提高效率，节约时间，这很重要。另一方面，应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据，以免被误导。只有这样，网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。名师点评 so that 句型：如此以至于。 with an explosive amount of information on the internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。 it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见，充分了解真题阅读，对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。 only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒装句。倒装句的写法(部分倒装)：原句：the net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。only放在句首，把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。2011年考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文：醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任思路点拨图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机，车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题：醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述：第一段：描述图画;第二段：分两个分论点进行论述：提高安全意识、提高社会责任感;第三段：建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。只需要把第一段中间那句图画描述替换掉即可。参考下图片：参考图片高分范文what a scary and sensational scene it is! in the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. what is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。the profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. for one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. so life is to be respected and awed. it is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (dui). for another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. we do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. it is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden。in short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. besides, the mass media, such as tv, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。佳作妙译这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊!在这幅图中，烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速行驶，车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的每一位成员，都具有现实和警醒的意义。这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面，安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行：你不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作为这个社会负责任的一员，我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着，我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生命不重要，都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。简言之，官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机，例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。此外，电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全意识和责任感，以降低交通事故的发生率。名师点评 as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动，一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上! life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。 dui: 醉酒驾车，也可以写成：drunk driving。 leaving:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。2011年考研英语作文十大热点预测及范文：大学生就业大学生就业思路点拨在画中，一位正在找工作的年轻女孩，毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作，不屑一顾地说：“伺候人的工作我不干”。这幅图表明，很多年轻人找工作时，眼光过高，不切实际，没有用平常心对待就业问题。实际上，可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可以这样创作：第一段：描述图画;第二段：两个角度分析这种现象的原因：志存高远，不愿意从底层做起;好逸恶劳;第三段：建议措施：教育年轻人要脚踏实地;根除好逸恶劳的思想。思维拓展关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多，例如城市选择问题、院校报考问题、专业选择问题、股市问题，均可以从这个角度出发，进行展开论述。请参考下图：参考图片高分范文as is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others. at the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society。this phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life, especially on campus. on the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success. what is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step. on the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable. this kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development. we should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions。therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation. for one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life. for another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young. only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved。佳作妙译正如上面的漫画所示，这个找工作的女孩毫不犹豫地拒绝了一个服务岗位，她还抱怨一直找不到工作。同时她还纳闷为什么在如今找个有前途的工作这么难。这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见，尤其在校园里更加明显。一方面，很多求职者不愿意从事秘书或助理等工作，他们认为这些是卑微且无足轻重的。他们有更大的抱负，想直接登上成功的顶峰。可是他们没有意识到理想抱负是需要一步一步实现的。另一方面，很多失业者和毕业生都想少劳多得，想得到一份轻松舒适而且薪水不菲的工作。这种“好逸恶劳”的生活态度对个人和社会的发展都是很不利的。我们不应看不起服务业，第三产业，因为它确实为我们提供了很多工作机会和职位。因此，采取一些必要措施来改善这种情况已经是当务之急。一方面，应该发起一场教育运动来普及这种“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和脚踏实地的生活态度。另一方面，要把懒惰的思想从青少年的思想中根除。只有这样人们才能更好地实现自己的人生价值，才能让失业率大幅下降，才能实现社会和谐。名师点评 complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴随状语。 why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 这个句子充当了整个句子的宾语，叫做宾语从句。特殊疑问词why, what, when等引导的宾语从句必须使用正常的陈述语序，不得使用主谓倒装的形式。例如，这句就不能写成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job是主语。is是系动词。再如：i dont know what his name is。绝对不能写成：i dont know what is his name。 2008年真题阅读选项中的句子。原句为：political compromises are easily found throughout the u. s. history。稍加改动，变成了一个个性化的句子引入第二段内容的模板，虽然没有华丽的辞藻，但是非常精彩和纯正。 be conscious that: 意识到，that后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。这个表达等同于be aware that，可以进行同意替换。此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于这两者，表示意识到。但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后边要接单词或者短语，一般不能加句子。 the third industry: 第三产业，是service industry(服务业)的同位语。同位语其实一般都是废话，等同于前面的词。巧妙地使用同位语，可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表强调，翻译成“确实”。 only in this way can realize and can be and thus can be：排比句，短促有力，气势强大，使得对未来的展望显得信心十足!普通的被考生用烂了的这个句型：only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改写成了一个精彩的排比句。这样的作文，怎么能不得高分呢!2011考研英语作文预测一这篇作文可以用于学生就业，学生能力的提高，成长和成功的问题。as is shown in the first picture , on a mountain of university tiredly climbs a college student, almost finishing his journey in the university, and awkwardly and surprisingly finding that he has to climb another much higher mountain-hunting a job, bus as is shown below, in front of a post board for recruiting government officials stand an ocean of people, with only one in front of the board for hiring waiter. there has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper. simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如图第一幅图所示，在求学的大山上，一个学生疲惫的攀爬着，好不容易快到了山的顶峰，却不得不吃惊且尴尬的发现还有一座高很多的山他必须去爬，那就是找到一份工作。但是在另一幅图中我们看到，在招聘公务员的广告牌前面站着一堆人，而在招聘服务员的牌子前却只有一个人。最近报纸上对这样图画的讨论有很多。这些图虽然简单，但是却确实表明了一个发人深思的社会现象。the pictures tell us the issue of hunting jobs for college students is increasingly and seriously important in current days. whats more , individuals, organizations and even the whole society have been attaching due attention to this issue. on one hand, when facing the pressure of finding a job, students are struggling painfully. the burden can cause not only depression but also anxiety and such problems as isolation and solitude. ones thought , creative thinking and exploration spirit, therefore, have been stifled by pursing measurable high scores and various certificates when confronting this harsh reality. on the other hand , that college students fail to change the conventional view on jobs and to adapt their goals to the reality deepens this problem. were there no prompt and proper solution to this problem, never would we taste the happiness of the harmonious society.图画告诉我们大学生就业的问题在当今越来越重要了。个人，团体，政府甚至是整个社会都很关注这个问题。一方面，当面对找工作的压力时，学生们痛苦的挣扎着。这样的负担不仅给他们带来了抑郁和焦虑的问题，还带来了像孤单，孤僻这样的问题。这样一来，面对这样的残酷现实，一个人的思考，创造性的思维，开拓的精神很可能因为追求可被量化的分数和证书的而被遏制了。另一方面，大学生没有能改变传统的就业观念让自己的目标更贴近现实也进一步的加重了这个问题。如果不能及时和恰当的解决这个问题，我们将不可能实现体会到和谐社会的幸福感。第三段，同学们可以对照讲义自己组织共性的第三段，我写一个比较个性化的第三段给大家。what should be done to reverse this situation ? for one thing ,instead of just earning their degrees and high exam scores ,college students are expected to cultivate their potentials such as creation, imagination and coordination . such qualities , though cannot be measured by their college certificates, really matter in their prospective career. for another thing , the educational institutions are supposed to integrate more practical training in their programs so that more competent college graduates can be produced for our society. above all ,the new awareness that all jobs are equal in dignity and that fame and excellence can be reached at any occupation should be promoted in the whole society .如何改变这样的现状呢，一方面学生不只是要注重文凭和分数，学生们还需要培养自己的创造性，想象力和协调能力。这样的素质虽然不能用证书来衡量却在以后工作中非常重要。另一方面，教育机构应该整合课程加入一些实用课程，让学生成为这个社会需要的一员。最重要的是，整个社会都应该认识到：任何工作都是有尊严的，优秀和卓越在任何工作中都能成就。2011考研英语作文预测二这篇作文可以用在科技一类的话题。现代生活的改变，如何去面对科技的作用。as is shown above , in front of a computer happily sits a teenager ,attempting to work on his homework effortlessly , with the help from the internet finishing the job for him. there has been a heated discussion about this picture in the news paper recently. simple as the picture is , it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如图所示，在电脑前坐着一个年轻人呢，正准备着不花力气就把作业给完成，来自网络的帮助很快就完成了所有的学习任务。最近报纸上对这样图画的讨论有很多。图虽然简单，但是却确实表明了一个发人深思的社会现象。the picture tells us that our life has been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances, an integral part to every aspect of modern life. whats more, individuals , organizations and governments attach due attention to this phenomenon. on the one hand, the progress can enhance peoples understanding on a subject, improve peoples learning capacity and skills, shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people. technical advances offer all people in the world a quality of life what was unimaginable when personal computer first appeared 60 years ago. our factory hum to the rhythm of robot assembly arms. our banking is done at automated teller terminals that thank us with mechanical politeness for transaction. our subway trains are controlled by tireless robot drivers. on the other hand, while computers , as have been mentioned above, help students finish the academic job, but this technology ,at the same time , kills their creative thinking and exploration spirit. the effect of board-dependence brought by it causes the young, nowadays, even can seldom spell correctly, let alone the negative effects triggered by porn movies , violent video clips and their like.这幅图告诉我们，我们的生活已经被科技的进步极大地影响了我们的生活，科技是现代生活中重要的一部分。个人，组织，政府都很关注这一现象。一方面科技的进步提高了人们对事物的认识，提高了人们的学习能力和技能，缩短了城市和城市之间，甚至各大洲之间的距离。使人和人之间的沟通更加的顺畅。科技的进步给世界人民带来的生活在60年前第一台个人电脑出现的时候是不可想象的。我们的工厂里轰鸣着机器人组装臂的节奏声;我们的银行业务在自动柜员机完成，他们用礼貌的语言感谢我们办理业务;我们的地铁由不知疲倦的机器人司机驾驶。(来自考研文章真题)但是另一方面，虽然计算机在帮着孩子们完成作业，但是与此同时也在扼杀着他们的创造思维和探索精神。多于键盘的依赖使得很多孩子很少能正确的拼写和书写。就更不提由于色情电影和暴力视频带来的负面影响了。解释：这段写的很长，是作文论据让同学们熟悉和运用的。在考场上不必全写上去。加油背吧!in my view , while we are enjoying the conveniences of the science and technology, we should keep a watching eyes on those negative practice, and aim to reduce the problems it has caused. then the benefits of these advances will out weigh the serious problems.在我看来，我们在享受科技的便利的时候，一定要小心负面的应用。并且想办法去克服这些问题，这样才能利大于弊。2011考研英语作文预测三as is shown above , on the sky fly a group of doves symbolizing the volunteers who are deeply involved in the shanghai world exposition. in the middle of another picture happily walks a young volunteer, holding a heart shape symbol representing the spirit of volunteer. just as a proverb says, the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. there has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper. simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如图所示，一群象征着志愿者的白鸽正在飞想上海世博会。在另一幅图中，一位志愿者正高举着象征着志愿者精神的标志。下面有一行谚语：送人玫瑰，手有余香。the picture tells us that volunteer spirit is flourishing in china. nearly 30 million registered volunteers in china have made the outstanding contributions to the relief for the may 12 earthquake ,the success of the 2008 beijing olympic games ,and the wonder of shanghai world exposition ,which has left a deep impression on the world. after the devastating earthquake hit southwest chinas sichuan