英语四级作文14.12

大学英语四级考试在 2014 年 12 月 20 日上午已经结束了，小编第一时间为大家提供英语 四级作文的解析，供大家参考。 由于考试是以花卷的形式来考查的，今年主要有三个话题: 分别是A course that has impressed you most in college (大学中给你印象最深的一门课）；A campus activity that has benefited most (使你受益最深的一项校园活动) A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college (大学中对你影响最深的一位同学)。 这三个话题均为我们所熟悉的话题性作文，写作手法可以采用叙议结合的方式，完成难度 相对较低。考生可以很灵活的套用考前文都老师给大家准备的相关模板句。对于下面的功 能句，如果能收放自如的灵活应用，考取高分绝对是轻而易举的事情。 一、开头句： 主题词 has been playing an increasingly important role in individuals growth. It has brought a lot of benefits. (.已在个人的成长中，扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处。) 这里的主题词可以换成我们这次的“有意义的课程/活动”（the meaningful course/activity）、 “深厚的友谊”(the deep friendship)直接替换即可。 二、中间段： 在具体展开原因时，可以从主次的角度来展开： mainly owing to the fact that .and partly due to the fact that .（主要原因是.次要原因是. ） 例如，这次题目二就可以直接套用： The activity organized by the campus is the most meaningful for me mainly owing to the fact that it can strengthen our body and partly due to the fact that it makes me realize the spirit of teamwork.（由学校组织的体育比赛对我来讲是非常有意义的，主要原因是由于它 有助于增强我们的身体素质，次要原因是由于它让我们意识到了团队精神。） 作文中能写出这样的句子，无疑属于高分亮点句。 三、结尾段： 至于结尾部分可以直接套用下列句型，简洁收尾。 Taking all these factors into consideration, I naturally come to the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我自然会得出结论 Taking into account all these factors, I may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素, 我可能会得出合理的结论 Hence/Therefore, I d better come to the conclusion that 因此,我最好得出这样的结论 There is no doubt that. 毫无疑问的是. 对你影响最大的同学 A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college Rose is my roommate, classmate and my best friend in my college. She has a round face and a little plump. One can always find a nice smile on her face, which reflects her amiable and pleasant character. Our friendship attributes to her great influence on me. In terms of study, she is good at English, while English is not my cup of tea. When I am confused about teachers explanation of texts, she always interprets them to me in an explicit way. I really appreciate her help. Besides, she also imparts me a few language learning tips and recommendations which arouse my learning interest. In addition, in the leisure time, she helps me a lot as well. Because I am not the local student and my hometown is far away from here, sometimes I feel homesick. However, I always have Rose on my side. Her accompany gives me great comfort. I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, who teaches me and help me in my study and leisure life, so she is the classmate that has influenced me most in college. Two I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming. In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row. The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words) 【参考译文】 在我的大学生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他们对我的人生产生了重大的影响。然而，我印象 最深的朋友是我的室友李明。 在开学第一天的入学班会上，他没有给全班同学留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他， 是因为他总是上课迟到，同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。因为我们是室友，平时的交往比较 多，后来我才慢慢了解到他的情况：原来他的母亲罹患重病，长期卧床，父亲残忍地离开 他们而去，照顾生病的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。令人惊讶的是，在重压之下， 他将自己的生活和学业平衡地很好：他不再总是迟到，将妈妈照顾的很好并且连续几年获 得奖学金。 李明的经历是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭， 他对我造成的影响持续深远。的确，这样的朋友被视为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有 权利选择自己的朋友，然而交友的过程中，我都应该足够理智和谨慎，选择那些能够给我 们带来正能量的真正的朋友。 最深刻的一门课 A course that has impressed you most in college There are many courses in each college year. But the course which impressed me most in college is Advanced English Audio-Visual & Speaking. The reasons why I like this course are as follows. The first reason is that I have learnt a lot from this course. My listening ability, speaking ability as well as translation ability has improved greatly after taking this course. The second reason is that I like the teacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very much. He is a charming gentleman with great patience. His oral English is perfect, sounding like American speakers. He treated us very strict but we still like him extremely. Just as the proverb goes, “A strict teacher produces outstanding students.” Thanks to Mr. Qins guidance and teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great progress in English learning. 【参考译文】 大学中给你印象最深的一门课 大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程，但给我印象最深的一门课是“高级视听说”。之所以喜欢 这门课，有很多原因，现将原因列举如下。 喜欢这门课的第一个原因是我在这门课上学到了很多东西。我的英语听力水平、口语水平 和翻译水平都得到了很大提升。喜欢这个课程的第二个原因是我很喜欢教我们这门课的老 师秦老师。他是一个既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英语口语很棒。乍一听，完全就是 美国本土人在讲英语。他对我们要求很严格，但我们依然很喜欢他。 正如谚语所说：“严师出高徒”。多亏秦老师在这门课上的悉心指导和教诲，我们班同学的 英语水平都得到了空前的提升。 【写作知识点写作知识点】 形容形容“记忆很深刻记忆很深刻”，英语怎么说？，英语怎么说？ 简单句的类型：简单句的类型： （1）肯定陈述句：Somebody remember something forever. （2）否定陈述句：Somebody never forget something. （3）隐否定陈述句：Something be unforgettable. （4）改述陈述句：Something give somebody deep impression. Better choice: 某事深深植根于某人的记忆当中。 Something be deeply rooted in ones memory/mind. 主语 系语 状语 表语 主语补足语 例如：童年时代，我有过一次永生难忘的痛苦经历。 The horrible experience in my childhood is deeply rooted in my memory. 万能万能“亮点亮点”句：句： 我敢说这段美好的经历我永生难忘。 I am sure that this great experience+非谓语动词作后置定语+ will be deeply rooted in my/your memory. 【2014【2014 年年 1212 月真题月真题】 【题目一】A course that has impressed you most in college. （大学中给你印象 最深的一门课） 例子：I am sure that this great experience taking this course will be deeply rooted in my/your memory. 【题目二】A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college.（大 学中对你影响最深的一位同学） 例子：I am sure that this great experience making friends with him/her will be deeply rooted in my/your memory. 【题目三】A campus activity that has benefited most.（使你受益最深的一项校 园活动） 例子：I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in my/your memory. 运用技巧：运用技巧： （1）欢迎信 欢迎留学生 题目要求以学生会的名义给即将到来的外国留学生写一封欢迎信，并为他们的校园生 活提出一些建议。 【例句】I would like to extend my warmest welcome to all of you. I am sure that this great experience visiting our university will be deeply rooted in your memory. （2）推荐信推荐电影 题目要求给好友推荐一部自己喜欢的电影。 【例句】I would like to recommend an American movie, Titanic, to you. I am sure that this great experience seeing this film will be deeply rooted in your memory. （3）告示 招募志愿者 题目要求要为一个全球化国际会议招募志愿者。 【例句】We would like to extend the information that we will recruit 100 volunteers for the coming international conference on globalization on March 20,2010 in our college. I am sure that this great experience participating this activity will be deeply rooted in your memory. （4）申请信 资助希望工程 题目要求希望参与希望工程，表达资助欲望及捐赠计划。 【例句】I would like to request your assistance to find a child in a remote area as the beneficiary of my financial aid. I am sure that this great experience supporting a child in poverty will be deeply rooted in my memory. （5）辞职信 题目要求告诉老板辞职的决定，对公司提供的机会，领导的认可和同事的帮助表示感 谢，对给公司造成的不便表示歉意。 【例句】I d