高中英语 module 1 life in the future section ⅴ writing-想象类作文教学案 外研版必修4

Module 1 Life in the Future Section Writing-想象类作文一、写作要领想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越实际生活来勾画从未见过的或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。写作时应注意以下几点：1采用记叙文或说明文的形式，围绕主题来逐一列举所给要点；2可采用第一人称或第三人称来叙述；3时态以一般将来时为主。二、增分佳句1文章开头常用句式：Sometimes I dream about life in the future.I imagine life in the future from time to time.I am curious about future life.It is fascinating to image life in the future.2表达预测的常用句式：Maybe in the future we can .There is a possibility that human beings will .Perhaps some people will .We will be living . in the future.3文章结尾常用句式：I believe the dream will come true some day.In my opinion, the dream will be turned into reality one day.As far as Im concerned, we will realize the dream sooner or later.题目要求随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象，以“An Outlook on Future”为题，描述一下将来人们工作、学习、生活三个方面的情景。注意： 1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为描写未来的说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要以一般将来时为主。二、构思1首先说明未来生活在各方面都会有很大提高。2然后逐一列出在智能机器人、高科技、环境、教育、旅游等方面具体的变化。3最后总结未来生活难以预测，但对其充满了期待。第二步：核心词汇想周全1with_the_development_of随着的发展2science_and_technology 科技3as_a_result 结果；因此4be_likely_to 有可能5achievement 成就6with_the_help_of 在的帮助下7living_environment 居住环境8scientifically 科学地9get_rid_of 摆脱，去除10be_thirsty_for 渴望，渴求11on_the_whole 总体上，总的来说12lead_a_.life 过着的生活13for_sure 确保，确定14in_space 在太空中第三步：由词扩句雏形现1随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。(简单句)With_the_development_of_science_and_technology,_our_life_has_changed_a_lot.2在电脑、机器人和其他高科技产品的帮助下，人们做的工作将会更少。(将来进行时)People_will_be_working_less_with_the_help_of_computers,_robots_and_other_hitech_products.3人们的居住环境会更干净，因为人们开始科学地处理垃圾。(get rid of)The_living_environment_will_be_cleaner,_because_people_begin_to_get_rid_of_wastes_more_scientifically.4人们重视保护环境。(stress the importance of)People_stress_the_importance_of_protecting_the_environment.5每个渴求知识的人都可以受到高等教育，无论他们年轻还是年老。(whether . or .)Everyone_who_is_thirsty_for_knowledge_can_receive_higher_education,_whether_they_are_young_or_old.6总的来说，人们将过着幸福自由的生活，他们不仅可以在全世界旅游而且可以在宇宙中旅游。(and并列句； not only .but also .)On_the_whole,_people_will_lead_a_happy_and_free_life_and_they_can_travel_not_only_all_over_the_world_but_also_in_space.7未来是难以预测的。(主语be形容词to do)The_future_is_hard_to_predict.8但是我们确切地知道先进的科技一定会给我们创造美好的未来。(advanced)But_we_know_for_sure_advanced_science_and_technology_will_shape_our_bright_future.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用分词作定语合并句3和句4The_living_environment_will_be_cleaner,_because_people，stressing_the_importance_of_protecting_the_environment,_begin_to_get_rid_of_wastes_more_scientifically.2用让步状语从句合并句7和句8Though_the_future_is_hard_to_predict,_we_know_for_sure_advanced_science_and_technology_will_shape_our_bright_future.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇An Outlook on FutureWith_the_development_of_science_and_technology,_our_life_has_changed_a_lot._As_a_result,_I_think_there_are_likely_to_be_great_achievements_in_every_area._People_will_be_working_less_with_the_help_of_computers,_robots_and_other_hitech_products._The_living_environment_will_be_cleaner,_because_people,_stressing_the_importance_of_protecting_the_environment,_begin_to_get_rid_of_wastes_more_scientifically._Everyone_who_is_thirsty_for_knowledge_can_receive_higher_education,_whether_they_are_young_or_old._On_the_whole,_people_will_lead_a_happy_and_free_life_and_they_can_travel_not_only_all_over_the_world_but_also_in_space.Though_the_future_is_hard_to_predict,_we_kno