高中英语 module 2 traffic jam section ⅴ writing-问题与现象类作文教学案 外研版必修4

Module 2 Traffic Jam Section Writing-问题与现象类作文一、基本结构问题与现象类作文属于议论文，常见的考查形式有：根据图片描述问题或现象；根据所给材料进行描述；写一封信陈述某种问题或现象。写作时应注意以下几点：1首先提出问题或现象。如果想要更加引起读者的兴趣，还可以多费一些笔墨写出这个问题或现象给我们带来的不良影响，激起读者想方设法解决这个问题的决心。2分析产生这种问题或现象的原因。可用First . Then . Finally .进行分层次介绍。要注意，如果原因很明显或简单的话，也可省略这一步骤。3提出解决方法。在这一层次中，又可分为两个子层次：第一个子层次是介绍别人已采用或提出的方法并分析其效果；第二个子层次提出自己的解决方法，并用有力的证据支持。4预测在今后的发展中情况可能会怎样。5由于所写的一般是现在存在的社会现象，所以时态以一般现在时为主。6在写作过程中，要注意表达简练、清晰、生动。二、增分佳句1提出某一社会现象或问题：As we all know . has become more and more serious.Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem . (. has increasingly become a common concern of the public.)According to a survey . has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the chart, it can be seen that .2表述该现象产生的原因：There are a couple of reasons for this problem/phenomenon. First . Second . Besides/Whats more .3陈述自己的看法及建议：Its time we did something to .Some measures are supposed to be taken to prevent . from bringing us more harm.题目要求最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。建议：1.建设更多宽阔的道路，开辟更多的公交线路；2减少使用私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具，提倡步行或骑自行车；3遵守交通规则，不乱穿马路。注意：1.词数100左右(首段已给出，不计入总词数)；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to solve the problem of heavy trafficAlmost every city has a big traffic problem. Today, our class have a debate about how to solve it._第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题 1确定体裁：本文为议论文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第二步：核心词汇想周全1have_a_debate_about就展开讨论2traffic_jam 交通阻塞3to_start_with 首先4lead_to 导致5the_last_but_not_least 最后同样重要的是6respect/obey_traffic_rules 遵守交通规则7deal_with 处理，对付8insist_on 建议9pedestrian 行人；步行者第三步：由词扩句雏形现1首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)To_start_with,_a_vast_population_leads_to_heavy_traffic.2最后一个原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that引导表语从句)The_last_but_not_least_reason_is_that_some_people_dont_realize_the_importance_of_respecting_traffic_rules.3为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)To_deal_with_this_problem,_some_students_suggest_that_we_(should)_build_more_wide_roads.4有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)Someone_else_thinks_we_should_walk_and_ride_the_bike_more.5减少私家车的使用。(private cars)We_should_drive_private_cars_less.6行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)Pedestrians_should_obey_traffic_rules.7行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)Pedestrians_shouldnt_cross_the_road_at_a_red_light.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用instead of合并句4和句5Someone_else_thinks_we_should_walk_or_ride_the_bike_more_instead_of_driving_private_cars.2用and并列句合并句6和句7Pedestrians_should_obey_traffic_rules_and_not_cross_the_road_at_a_red_light.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇How to solve the problem of heavy trafficAlmost every city has a big traffic problem. Today, our class have a debate about how to solve it.There_are_many_reasons_for_traffic_jams._To_start_with,_a_vast_population_leads_to_heavy_traffic._The_second_reason_is_the_increasing_number_of_vehicles,_especially_private_cars._The_last_but_not_least_reason_is_that_some_people_dont_realize_the_importance_of_respecting_traffic_rules.To_deal_with_this_problem,_some_students_suggest_that_we_(should)_build_more_wide_roads._Others_insist_on_offering_many_more_bus_routines_to_improve_transport._Someone_else_thinks_we_should_walk_or_ride_the_bike_more_instead_of