写作常见语法错误分析VI.ppt

College Students Job Hunting 大 学生就业问题 In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon? There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs. 表示列举的连词： ufirst, second, third; ufirstly, secondly, thirdly; ufirst, next, then; uin the first place, in the second place; ufor one thing, for another thing; uto begin with, whats more, to conclude/To sum up 表示原因的连词： because, since, as, now that 表示结果的连词： so, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a result 表示对照的连词： on the contrary, in contrast, by contrast, in comparison, by comparison, conversely 表示让步和转折的连词： however, nevertheless, nonetheless, still, though, yet, in spite of, at any rate, in any case, whoever, whatever 表示时间顺序的连词： when, while, as, after, before, since, until, as soon as, once 表示目的的连词： so that, in order that 表示总结的连词： In a word, In sum, In conclusion Education Pays （2012.12真题） l The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%. （图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表 主题，第二句说明数据所呈现的特点/趋势，第3 ，4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点，切勿将所 用数据例出，且数据表达方法正确） l The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs. l This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment. l交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。 1990年6月考查过How to solve the problem of Heavy Traffic,1994年1月考题 The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家 车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行 难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。 l As we know, traffic accidents are becoming more and more serious in Changsha. Every year an increasing number of people involved in them are injured, and even killed, which, of course, has aroused widespread concern of the public. l Take the above chart as an example. In 2010, from July to January, 183 people were injured in traffic accidents and 41 people lost their lives in them. Taking a careful look at them, youll find that traffic accidents in Changsha have been increasing all the time. In July, there were only 20 people injured, while in December, the injured went up to 49. As for the dead, in July, there were only 3, but in December, there were 14. This is a 367% increase. Traffic Accidents In Changsha l The increase of traffic accidents is not only a threat to peoples life, but also shows the traffic system problems in Changsha. It is urgent for the authorities related to bring it under control. traffic Problems 交通问题 There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Every day, especially in rush hours, the roads are crowded with vehicles. People have to spend much time on their way home or to work and even might get involved in an accident. This problem has caused much trouble in many big cities. l The main causes for the traffic problems can be attributed to the following factors. First, with the explosion/growth of the population in the cities, more and more people have to commute by bus or car, while the transport facilities cant meet the needs of the increasing population. For example, many roads and streets are old and narrow. Besides, some drivers and pedestrians do not obey the traffic regulations, which adds to the seriousness of the traffic problems. l One solution to the traffic problem is to construct more roads and traffic bridges and open up more bus lines. But considering the intensive land use in downtown areas, the government should further develop the suburb and the countryside especially for the new industrial enterprises and living quarters so as to reduce the dense population and consequently the heavy traffic in the cities. Motorcycles and City Traffic 1近年来中国城市中的摩托车 2摩托车的优点和缺点 3我对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法 l Nowadays, motorcycles are popular around us. They have become an important means of transport in Chinese cities. Compared with the bike and the car, the motorcycle has its own advantages. First, it is quite flexible. When there is a traffic jam, it can go through the cars that are held up in the street. Besides, it doesnt consume much petrol. Most important of all, it can carry another person at the back. l But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, its very complicated to get qualified fur riding a motorcycle. Youll have to go through a series of procedures to get a riding license. Furthermore, the maintenance is expensive. Worst of all, it costs a big sum of money to pay fur the license plate, especially in big cities. In conclusion, it has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. However, if the authorities concerned simplify the procedures and reduce the cost of the license plate, the motorcycle will be accepted by more people. How to Deal with Sub-health? l With the modernization of the world, peoples standard of living has improved a lot. Then there appears a state of sub-health among people which pose a new threat to them. l There are some typical symptoms for people who are in a state of sub-health. First of all, those who suffer from it often have a headache or backache. Secondly, they feel like having a rest frequently. What upsets us most is that, the situation is spreading countrywide. As a result, more and more workers in big cities are harassed by it, with a percentage of 75 in Beijing, 72 in Shanghai and 70 in Guangzhou respectively. l Then how can we solve this problem effectively? Experts suggest that the best way to keep us healthy is to do exercises. It is also very important that people should form a good living habit, for example, getting up early and going to sleep early. Only doing so can we keep us healthy. Advertisements 广告 l With the development of material prosperity, advertisements have become more and more important in our daily life. Advertisements give l