《英语专四写作》PPT课件.ppt

TEM-4 Writing a)作文 要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也 附有写作提纲) 写一篇200词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条 理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。 作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟。 b)便条 要求根据提示写大约5060词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格 式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。 作文评分标准 满分15， 分项可以打0.5分。 1. 思想与表达 2. 语言运用能力 3. 写作规范 1. 思想与表达（Ideas and Arguments）： n满分为7分，其中1-2分较差，3分一般，4-5分良好，6-7分优秀。 n思想内容：（idea want应改为wants. n改为：Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do). 英语写作中典型的病句实例 2 Sentence Fragments 句子不完整 nThere are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on. n剖析：本句后半部分“For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不 连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 n改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper. nThere are many interesting performances in the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. For example, cross talk, short sketch,Peking Opera and so on. n改为：There are many interesting performances in the CCTV Spring Festival Gala，for example, cross talk 英语写作中典型的病句实例 3 Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语 n所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混 乱不清。例如： At the age of ten, my grandfather died. n剖析：句子中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说 明“谁”十岁时。 n改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died. To do well in college, good grades are essential. n剖析：句子中不定式短语“to do well in college” 的逻辑主 语不清楚。 n改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 3 Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语 nAs the most important festival, people always have a lot of ways to celebrate the Spring Festival. n改为：As the most important festival, the Spring Festival can be celebrated in a lot of ways. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 4 Run-on Sentences 不间断句子 nThere are many ways we get to know the outside world. n剖析：这个句子包含两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the outside world.”。简单地 把它们连在一起很不妥当。 n改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world./ There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world. nThere are many people show no interest in the Gala. n改为：There are many people that show no interest in the Gala. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 5 Redundancy 累赘 n写作时避免多余的词和不必要的句子。例如： For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. n剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。 n改为：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need. nIt has been over a month since the Spring Festival ended. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 6 Incoherence 不连贯 n句子前言不搭后语，或是结构上不畅通。例如： The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. n剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在 数方面不一致。 n改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world. nThe short sketch performed by Zhao Benshan, it is always I expect most. n改为：The short sketch performed by Zhao Benshan is always what I expect most. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 7 Trouble in Diction 措词毛病 nDiction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题。学 生应养成良好的推敲斟酌的习惯，避免随心所欲，拿来就用。 8 Misuse of Parts of Speech词性误用 TEM-4 Practice nSome people prefer activities that mainly involve working with people. Others choose activities that mainly deal with objects or mach