重庆市高三一诊英语科试题第二卷答题错误分析及应对策略.ppt

2005届重庆市高三一诊英语科试题第二卷 答题错误分析及应对策略 重庆育才中学 何文 1文库专用 附：短文改错（原题）： One morning I got up early, so I went to outdoors for a 76. to change. It was so early when I left home thatstreets were 77. the_ deserted.Without the usual crowds and traffics , everything was 78. traffic quiet. I made my way for the park ,and found, to my surprise, 79. totowards that there were such many people there. Some were doing morning 80. so_ exercises, some were sitting peacefully on the benches , some 81.and were feeding pigeons .One or two hours late, I left the park and 82. later walked home, feel much refreshed and very energetic. An old 83.feeling English saying suddenly comes into my mind, “early to bed and early 84.came to rise makes a man healthy ,wealthy and and wise,” I do believe it. 85. 2文库专用 题号76777879808182838485 得分人 数 158108792162124427 8 14422610 0 得分率44 % 30 % 22 % 60 % 59 % 12 % 78 % 40 % 63 % 28 % 平均分4.45 3文库专用 该试题的“短文改错”题得分率仅为44%，考生作得并不 理想。主要原因有以下四点： 一：英语语言积累不够，尤其是语言的准确性不够。 二：英语语感不强，尤其是识别语言中的错误的意识 和能力不强。 三：对“短文改错”题型的特征认识不够，缺乏一定的 解题技巧。 四：答题不够规范，不能对答题符号进行正确使用。 4文库专用 四点建议： 一: 平时教学或复习中强化对固定词组（尤其是含有冠词或介词 的固定词组）和常见表达准确性的记忆和学习。 二：总结学生习作中常犯的典型语法错误 (如：名词单复数错误 ， 动词形式错误等)和表达错误（如：汉语式英语，人称混乱 等）并进行归类讲解和练习。 三：分析“短文改错”题型的命题内容和特征，讲授一些解题的 基本原则和技巧，授人以渔。 四：进行一些分解“短文改错”难度的练习和讲授一些化解难度 的技巧。如：采用“分割包围，各个击破”的“句子成分改错法” ，由易到难的逐个搜索句子成分中可能存在的错误。 五：进行适当的集中和强化训练，培养学生的搜索错误和改正 错误的意识和能力。 5文库专用 第五档 （21-25 ） 第四档 （16-20 ） 第三档 （11-15 ） 第二档 （6-10 ） 第一档 （0-5） 156人199人10人2人8人 43.32%53.12%3%0.5%2.2% 平均分20.12分 6文库专用 “书面表达”典型错误主要集中在以下四类： 一：审题不够仔细，遗漏要点。 二：语法结构较单一，用词不够准确。 三：语法和拼写（尤其是不规则动词的过 去式和过去分词的拼写）错误较多。 四：行文顺序和逻辑不够清晰，句子与 句子之间缺乏衔接。 7文库专用 “三审三思三查”的思路在提高学生的写作意识和 能力上的应用。 一：三审： “审人称、审体裁和审时态”。 二：三思： “思考词汇（尤其是动词及其短语） 的选择、句型的应用和上下句连接词的使用”。 三：三查：“检查词汇（尤其是动词和名词）的 拼写是否正确，语法（尤其是动词时态、语态和 名词单复数及冠词）是否使用正确，以及文章要 点和结构是否完整。 8文库专用 加强“书面表达”训练的四点建议： 一：加强平时“书面表达”的训练力度，逐渐培养学生 写作中的步骤意识、思考意识和提高意识。 二：采用灵活多样的形式加强对学生写作的基本知识 和基本技能的训练。 三：切实加强对学生习作的总结和评讲，通过模仿提 高学生写作质量。 四：培养学生养成有意识地积累一些非常地道的、非 常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型 的习惯并有意 识地用于自己的习作中。 9文库专用 The Last Apple One day on our way home, Dad and I happened to find a tree with only one apple on it and tried to get it off. At first, Dad tried to shake the tree and I watched eagerly. However, frustrating as it was, the apple didnt move. Then I suggested a “smarter” way. I threw the umbrella handle towards the apple in the hope of hitting it. The handle missed its target, then, unfortunately but accurately, hit Dad nose. I guessed he was a little annoyed as he even climbed on to the tree and attempted to seize the apple with the handle, but failed again. Then, He tool off his boot and wielded it to the apple. Once again, the apple survived. To make things worse, the boot was on a branch. With great effort, he was eventually able to get it back. Though Dad was a pertinacious person, he could only lead me away. Just a few seconds later the apple fell to the ground Life is interesting. Sometimes you try a little more , failure may be replaced by success. 10文库专用 The Last Apple One day on our way home, Dad and I happened to find a tree with only one apple on it and tried to get it off. Dad first shook the tree fiercely, but the apple didnt move. Then I had an idea. I took out the umbrella handle I had carried with and threw it right to the apple. But I missed it! The handle flew over the apple and hit dad on the head. Dad decided to climb in the tree and get the apple off. However, the tree was too weak to afford his heavy body. The apple was still on the tree. Dad was a bit angry and he took off his right shoes and threw it to the apple. He failed! The shoe belt tied to a branch, so dad had to get it off with the umbrella handle. At last we gave up and left. Then, I looked back by chance, believe it or not, The apple fell down! I was astonished. After that I realized that we cant force things to go as our wish,but have to wait until the right time has come. 11文库专用 The Last Apple One day on our way home, Dad and I happened to find a tree with only one apple on it and tried to get it off. At first, Dad tried his best to shake the tree, but it was no use. Then, as I just had an umbrella handle in my hand, I threw it up, hoping to hit the apple down. Unluckily, I failed, and What was worse, the handle fell down on Dads head and hurt him. We didnt give up. Dad climbed up the tree and held out his right hand which was holding the handle, trying to approach the apple. However, it was out of his reach. Then, he took off his right shoe, aimed at the apple and threw it up. This time, the shoe hung up in the tree so that Dad has to get it down with the umbrella handle. It was when we were leaving disappointedly that the last apple fell down itself, and at that time, I realized that things didnt always go just as what we wanted them to! 12文库专用 The Last Apple One day on our way home, Dad and I happened to find a tree with only one apple on it and tried to get it off. He shook the tree fiercely, but the apple didnt move a little. So I threw an umbrella handle at it, which missed the apple and hit Dad instead. Then Dad thought of his shoe. But unfortunately, he failed again, making the shoe