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Study PlanDear Visa Officer:Its my great honour that Ive been admitted to the University of Toronto in the program of Social Science as a transfer student. (Although the offer letter didnt mention the specific major, an email that sent from U of T later made sure of the program. The copy version of the email is enclosed with the Study Plan.) The program will begin on September 13th, 2010. And U of T marked me as “year:3” student.A brief introduction of my background and my choice of sociologyMy name is Yingchu Mao, born on June 1st, 1989, in Hangzhou, China. Currently, I am a sophomore of Wuhan University，majoring in Editing and Publishing Science. Last semester, Ive got a chance to attend the AIESEC (one of the largest students organization around the world) Youth Leadership Conference in Wuhan. The conference focused on Non-governmental Organization topic with several excellent speeches made by Julie, Wei Zhang and Cong Du who worked in Wall Street for more than 10 years before he quitted and devoted himself to NGO-the Chiheng Foundation have left me a deep impression and arouse my intense interest on NGO.Whats more, I happened to have applied for an internship in Xiaoshan Nanshi Community Center last summer vacation. And I found out that successfully running a NGO is everything but simple. You should be well equipped with a strong knowledge background in social science. I feel Ive got that passion to study this issue. Meanwhile, I was attending a sociology-related course which I found social science a magical field using a variety of unique methods and skills exploring individual and collective ways of thinking, feeling and acting.Since going abroad to study the advanced knowledge is what I always have in mind, I started to browse some famous universities websites and finally made a decision to abandon the major Im not interested and to transfer to Canada given Chinese social science is still in the beginning stage and many theories are introduced from western countries.My Choice of University of Toronto in CanadaFirst, Canada is a peaceful, beautiful and harmonious country which means two things to me. First it means that the country can provide the international students the high-quality education at lower expenses relative to UK and US. And second, those features just well show the sociology theories are closely combined with the practice within this country. Besides, Canadas social science is covering more and more topics and the level of specialization is high, which indicates the highly development of the discipline.Second, University of Toronto is ranked one of the worlds best universities with a long history. UT was established in 1827, one of the oldest universities around North America. The richness embedded in its history nurtures the ground for studying humanities disciplines. Matter of fact, UT has a strong academic background of those social science subjects. And UTs Sociology classes discussed a wide range of social issues which fit my interest a lot and will be quite useful in NGO operation.Plans to achieve my academic goalFirst, because I applied as a transfer student, I must try my best to catch up with the regular students there. So I keep practicing English every day, trying to read some original novels and monographs. Only in this way can I conquer the language barrier as soon as possible when I start my study in UT.Then although Im a transfer student who can receive transfer credits to reduce the length of completing the program, I know my current major is not similar with sociology, so that means I have to work harder and take some first and second level courses to make up the missing credits. If possible I will make use of the summer vacation to take some courses.Simultaneously, I know that the practice related with the program will include some field research. I wish that I can catch the chance to visit some NGOs in Canada, and write some reports about their operation patterns in order to learn the advanced modes.Career opportunity in ChinaUpon my graduation in U of T, I plan to return to China for the following reasons:Firstly, my training in sociology will provide skills for jobs in many fields in China, including government, politics, industry, education, journalism and so on. So there are many job opportunities lying ahead of me. But I am particularly interested in working at NGOs. There are more and more NGOs established in China, such as Chiheng, Narada, Greenpeace(China) and Action Aid(China). However they just need some more advanced ideas and talents to support the institution. With a degree from world-famous university and my skill in thinking and research that Ive been taught when I study in UT, I am confident that I can find a place in Chinese NGO that fit me the best.Secondly, sociology is about the way of thinking and acting which is penetrated into the local culture. I was born and living here, so it will be more confident and comfortable for me to apply the theory to Chinese conditions than any other countries.Last but not the least, I wish to go back to my hometown Hangzhou, which is a metropolitan city with many great job opportunities and a very beautiful and comfortable city for living. Besides I love my parents very much. For I am the only child of them, I wish to go back and take good care of them.Yours sincerely,DateSignature of Applicant有关学习计划！4 O7 O/ c7 H4 e 感觉这个相当相当滴重要感觉VO拒你滴什么学习能力移民倾向这些原因，很大程度上需要你SP来打消人家滴怀疑！即使你找中介也要自己搞定SP/ o6 Y. j; E# G, 3 v: s2 N4 B$ L& W& a1 L呵呵 把偶自己滴SP贴出来讨论一下。专家高手无视就好 1 v) V6 % k! x& D+ x7 T* k- E6 W4 o2 |! _ w: _! j, v# g8 / I/ E9 EStudy Plan0 q9 mR2 p2 & i1 b* JDear visa officer：. . P& G$ t3 r; D6 v0 eMy name is *, female, born on 27th of Feb * in Qingdao, Shandong province, China. I received my admission to Qingdao University in 2007, majoring in English. After much calculation, I believe that studying abroad to broaden my horizon is a better choice for me. Therefore, Im applying a further study in Canada. In this case, I can not only improve my English, but also have a more challenging and promising major that Im interested in -Accounting and Finance.（第一段主要是把自己滴情况主要表述了一下，以及这个出国打算）% Y1 . n, j1 n i0 z: R- a, j8 o/ 4 e# o+ K9 PIn my view, Canada has a more peaceful and harmonious environment for studying and it is rich in educational resources comparing to other countries.（加拿大方面滴优秀之处一笔带过） The reason that I choose Seneca is for its true knowledge learning and real experience gaining. Unlike Chinese universities or colleges, Seneca offers co-operative education programs that allow students to gain real work experience and apply what they have learned in the workplace. A more attractive factor is Seneca offers many different opportunities for students success. Students are able to transfer credits from some of its diploma programs to its degree programs, and Seneca has transfer agreements with educational institutions across Canada and even around the globe. （介绍seneca，说实在，偶真不知道怎么说，然后就到它滴网站上看人家怎么说滴，然后自己再写滴。感觉要写优点。更要写对你有用滴优点，因为我在下面提出seneca只是一个桥梁，过渡期后会再转学滴。所以说了seneca滴转学校方面。说了这个学校实践性比较强，是国内大学不可比滴。这样才体现了放弃原有大学去学个这个college滴必要性么。）Thus, with those opportunities, I am sure I will at a higher level after I complete my study in Canada.* N* h: E4 # V0 B6 D4 K% I* j$ ?, + wxThe program of Accounting and Finance offered by Seneca College attracts me just like a bridge to a higher education. In this program, many important subjects are provided, such as Accounting Basics,Business Statistics,Mathematics of Finance,Organizational Behaviour,% y ( a* U q9 f& n) _Co-op Professional Theory, and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Making4 I6 D) B( r, Q$ F5 * retc. As far as Im concerned, those subject regarding accounting and finance are quite necessary to me. I can get a better understanding on accounting knowledge and get closer to a true accountant through them. Moreover, Im quite interested in the Organizational Behaviour and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Making which can give me a chance to be wiser and of great executive ability. （你必须说清楚你将要学习的专业，大家最好说一下自己的课程，其中具体课程的名字，例如第一学期有些什么重要的课程，第二学期有什么，你感兴趣的，等等，必须写清楚，这样签证官就会觉得你很认真，是过去学习的！课程你自己从学校网站上找，都找得到。）8 j: d9 ! y A8 j, N) 5 o& F9 M, K6 What I have planned is that after a period of adaptive phase, I will go to a university for a degree and then one-years master.matter what, I want to pass CA (chartered accountant) exam during my study in Canada, and then back to China to apply myself into accounting and finance.（提到自己滴目标和打算，让人家感觉你是个很有计划有目标滴好孩子！而且说了自己会回国）$ d; y( d) Z: u% t% 7 4 X* a+ Z1 F& v* RMy parents have sufficient money to supply me to study abroad and steady income. They are definitely willing and able to afford my education.（小提一下父母提供了资金） In fact, Im an easily homesick girl. Whats more, I always put my family, my parents first. From the date of my birth, my parents spare most of their love, time and money on me. Im so grateful for having such parents. However, my parents are not young and healthy as before any more. Going back to China and take good care of them after finishing my study is my responsibility.（说出父母滴原因偶必须回国） In additional, Chinas governmental policy is more attractive to me. 1 g/ C0 e m+ y% BThe government values the returned students more and more highly. With the development of China, large amounts of qualified people are in great demand. Accordingly, there are sufficient job opportunities for returned students, and suitable conditions supplied for their personal and professional development. I believe that if I go back to China, I will have a brighter employment prospect. （说出外部条件，偶回国会很好）- k2 R$ e5 m/ J; f1 Q$ v8 D0 k. B* k: C* i应该说，偶滴SP也改了很多遍。一开始滴时候有将近两页捏。而且还弄了outline，写滴相当详细。后来经过不少人指点尤其一个在多college念硕士文凭滴哥哥给了最大滴帮助他就是自己DIY而且只是个college人家20多天就来体检表了。唉其实偶米寄掉体检表滴话，也差不多挺快滴。 9 y: ?3 2 1 L一些小建议0 u + 8 Z$ A: ! p1，出去念书，以及去这个学校念书，要说出你自己滴意愿！你自己滴原因。千万别说你父母希望你出去。你父母感觉怎么样。而且我觉滴，说自己从小梦想出国也挺牵强。6 F8 L4 Z4 F% G0 2，SP一定要拒绝模板每个人滴情况各有不同！而且你需要SP去体现你自己滴想法坚决不要雷同！雷同卷万一碰上了那就是咔嚓了+ u d- H& l9 9 j* h3，SP不是要求你写作文华丽滴句子，优美滴词藻这些都不是必须滴。花里胡哨滴。大汗捏 你只要说得明白，讲得清楚，说得让人信服那就是王道！9 w: x. H* Q1 $ G W* W4，SP最好是一页纸，不要多了，但也不能少，400词左右。偶写滴就有点多，虽然也是一页但是500多字了。$ C/ z& ! / b关于签证时的Study Plan问题 (包含4个Study Plan范例)寄托天下2007年03月26日我要说两句近来签证时不断有VO问及Study Plan,我收集了一些类似的,仅供大家参考.美国签证, 这是沈阳领事馆网页上个人简历中对学习计划的要求！学习计划 :简洁并详细地描述有关计划学习的领域，包括研究方法，和研究的应用范围。说明主管教授的名字和他/她的专业领域说明即将进行此项研究的学院名称和系部名称在申请留学及签证的过程中，经常会被要求写学习计划书（study plan）,本文作者长期从事留学文书写作，因此结合自己的工作经验，介绍一下学习计划书的写作。一般来说学习计划书可以按照提交目的分成两类，给大使馆申请签证用的，或是给学校申请录取用的。用来申请学校的学习计划从本质上讲和个人陈述是同一类型的文书，关于学校申请类的学习计划书可以参考个人陈述方面的文章，本文主要介绍提交大使馆签证用的学习计划书。欧美国家，特别是移民国家，如法国，澳大利亚，新西兰，加拿大等国针对留学生签证的时候往往要求提供学习计划书，通过学习计划书使签证官了解您的背景，选择留学专业的动机条件，选择该国留学的理由，和清晰的未来留学时间安排，职业目标和回国理由，配合审核您的其它材料决定是否给您发放留学签证，因此学习计划书是一份很关键的文件。总的来说，学习计划书需要包括以下几方面内容。1、 简单说明自己的学习经历，专业背景及工作经历；2、 说明自己进一步求学的动机及为什么选择该国、该大学与该专业；3、 详细的留学时间安排；4、介绍留学所需资金及来源；5、 对未来职业目标的阐述，留学后回国的理由。学习计划书的行文风格和文章结构与个人陈述有很大不同，不需要太多个性化和感性的描述，而应该是结构清晰简单，逻辑严密，阐述的事实明确，相关论据有力可信，学成回国的理由要非常充分，并且绝对不能和申请人的其他材料发生矛盾。由于使馆的工作人员每天要处理大量的文件，因此学习计划书切不可写的太长，一般不应超过800字，并且说明一个问题最好只用一个段落，段落前加上标题，如 My Choice of University of Toronto in Canada ,My career objective 等，以便使馆的工作人员对您一段内容的中心思想一目了然。您的阐述应该非常清晰易读，不能希望让使馆的工作人员从您的文字中“挖掘”您“潜在”内容。学习计划书的重点部分是未来的职业计划和留学后回国的理由，通过这一部分来告诉大使馆您到该国留学后，确实能够对您的职业发展有良好的帮助，并且有可信有力的理由学成归国。虽然要求学习计划书的国家往往是移民国家，但是由于您申请签证的理由是留学，因此通过学习计划书一定要消除您任何移民倾向。回国理由要结合您个人的背景经历和家庭情况给出很合理的解释，如一位拥有多年商业经历的经理获得去新西兰读商业管理硕士课程的机会，那么阐明他的职业目标是回到中国成为一名跨国公司的高级经理人，而他在中国多年积累的客户资源和社交圈是一笔非常宝贵的财富，这就是非常强硬并合理的一条回国理由。特别需要注意的是，学习计划书中关于回国理由等涉及事实论据的地方，不能任意编造。最后需要强调的是，由于学习计划书在表达上要求非常有条理，逻辑严密，简洁有力，这是大多数中国申请人所难以达到的，由于语法错误和逻辑关系的失误往往会导致理解的偏差。因此请专门的机构由外籍专家进行语言上的修改是避免上述弊端的好办法。注：应网友要求，特附一篇英文版的学习计划书学习计划书样文Introduction of my background :My training was in the area of Chinese Education in XXX University for Nationalities. The education I received there trained my basic abilities of learning and made me capable of independent working. Because of my interest,and curiosity in the new field of Marketing,I participated in the business directly related with market after my graduation from university.My first job was Manager Assistant in XXX Supermarket. I learned a lot of experience from manager and co-workers, which added to my talent and efforts made me very successful in daily work. For example, I made our supermarket the Supermarket without fake commodities and instituted rigid regulations for supplier selection. Moreover, I bought large amount of goods with cash and quickly sold them at low price, which accelerated the turnover of money and increased our bargain power to suppliers. In 1996, I was promoted to be the Operation Executive. I audaciously built up three chain supermarkets in Shenzhen and established strong competitive advantages among our industry.In 1998,I joined the Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co.Ltd.-whose main business is the sales of single chip and relevant software. I suggested the company enter the market of single chips emluator which contained more technology and had more profit vacuum. I also enhanced the technology development and after-sales service; held technology lectures focused on potential clients and published technical introductory articles. Within only 2 years our emluator business became a well-known brand in our industry and became our companys core business and main resource of profit.Why choose to study inand Throughout my past experience, however, I realized that I need more than my talent and successful records to achieve my higher goals, especially as China joined the WTO and plays an active role in the global economy. An advanced education in marketing in a western country is necessary for me to have an international perspective of marketing and gain valuable knowledge of marketing theories and practices. The advanced Education system in can provide high quality graduated program for me , the reasonable tuition and high standard living condition also attracted me deeply . The University ofis one of eight University which authorized by the government of China , all these are reasons for me to determine to go to, a country which has the highly developed business system and first-class education quality, for my further education.Study plan :I plan to study for the Mater Degree of Marketing in the University of xxx which last for two years. Because I believe my condition and qualification are suitable for the courses requirements. Matriculated in The University of XXX smoothly has proved the university also believes in my ability of completing my study without difficulties. Moreover, all of my accomplishments in the field of marketing within 10 year would be my good preparation for my further study. I am very confident that my experience would help me succeed in my post-graduate study. To study marketing needs solid English foundation. Although I have been keeping learning English these years and already have a very good English foundation, I still reckon that my English will be improved if I pay much attention to learn it in an English speaking country. Therefore, I prepare to complete half a years English courses before my study of master courses and take IELTS in New Zealand as well.When I received my master degree, I will get systematic Marketing knowledge and understanding of the running of business in New Zealand, a developed Western country .My 10 years saving which is *RMB in *Bank, my real estate which worth *RMB (estimated my *Bank) and my stock which worth * RMB (calculated in present market price) in stock market would be my firm foundation of studying in New Zealand. The study fee in *university is * and the living cost is *. Therefore, my financial status is sufficient to afford my study and living cost in New Zealand.Career objectiveAs soon as I finish my master degree in Marketing, Id like to return back to China directly. First, it simply because I love my motherland very much and I believe my further education in New Zealand could help me to make greater contributions to the people and economy that I have a passion for.The second reason is I feel lucky that I live in an era when China is undergoing rapid economic and political reforms. I witnessed with my own eyes its transition from a society of monotony and low productivity to one that is much more open, prosperous, and full of momentum for growth. As a result this transition has created plenty of opportunities in Chinese economy.Since I have always dreamed of being a successful international marketer in China, I would like to utilize the knowledge that I will acquire in New Zealand and abundant experience accumulated in Chinas domestic market to extend my own career as an international marketer who concerns the marketing in global scale.More than ten years domestic experience is extremely valuable for a successful marketer. However, in New Zealand-a country which has a totally different language and culture, there is few advantage for me, so coming back to China after learning is my best choice.Finally, nearly all of my public relationship is based in China. During my ten years work, I have already accumulated plenty of clients and relationship; those are very important foundation not only for my career but also for my daily life. I would never give them up. Furthermore my former company-Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co., Ltd. agreed with my decision of studying in New Zealand and they will keep my position and welfare while I am in New Zealand and look forward to my return. I would never like to miss this opportunitystudy plan 1I knew the information about ST.ANDREWS CAMBRIDGE in Beijing International Edu