2013-2014高考英语写作使用.ppt

词汇能力 书面表达能力 3500个左右 转述、表达 开放 不少于120词 假如你是张华，你所在的学校将建 一个学生活动中心，请给校长写一封信 ，建议可在该中心举行的两种活动。 注意： 1、词数：不少于120； 2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 体裁 人称 时态 要点 建议信 第一人称 一般现在时和一般将来时 3W what/who why how 1、建议可在该中心举行的两种活动 2、推荐两种活动的原因 3、开展两种活动的方式 4、合适的开头和结尾(书信 ) 格式 Para1- 引出主题 Para2-表述要点 Para3-发表感想 总 分 总 spirit Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to hear that our school will build an activity centre of students. So I want to give some advice about it. First, I think we should have enough place to take exercise.We can run and play basketball.Every day,we study hard and have no time to do exercise. I think if we do more exercise, we will become healthier and healthier. We can also build a big room for the speech. We can invite famous people to our school to give a speech. Then, we can learn knowledge out of class. We will have a beautiful school life and have a good time. I hope you can think about my advice. Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 1 第四档（1620 ） 虽漏掉1，2个次重点，但覆盖所有 主要内容 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确，可 有些许错误 应用了简单的连接成分 完全完成试题规定的任务 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重 要，能使文章上下衔接自 然、紧凑。 2. 使用较丰富的句式 Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to hear that our school will build an activity centre of students. So I want to give some advice about it. First, I think we should have enough place to take exercise.We can run and play basketball.Every day,we study hard and have no time to do exercise. I think if we do more exercise, we will become healthier and healthier. We can also build a big room for the speech. We can invite famous people to our school to give a speech. Then, we can learn knowledge out of class. We will have a beautiful school life and have a good time. I hope you can think about my advice. Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 1 覆盖所有内容要点 运用较多的语法结构和词汇，有些 许错误 有效地运用了连接成分 完全完成试题规定的任务 虽漏掉1，2个次重点，但覆盖所 有主要内容 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确，可 有些许错误 应用了简单的连接成分 完全完成试题规定的任务 Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua Students Sample 2 第五档（2125 ） Students Sample 2 Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English