读后续写指导讲义.ppt

Step 3: Prediction 课后续写（25分） 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生 依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示 关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成 一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完 整的短文。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容： 1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； 2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况 ； 3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； 4.上下文的连贯性。 Step 3: Prediction 评分原则：1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 21-25, 16-20, 11-15, 6-10, 1-5, 0 2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定 其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或 调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评 分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次 Step 3: Prediction STEPS: 1.通读全文，把握文本的脉络和串起文本的关键词， 在此基础上确定故事情节发展的方向。 2.判断划线的关键词语与主题内容的关联程度，然后 确定要选用的词语，以及所在的段落位置（1,2）。 如果是意林体的文章，还要考虑取舍表达message的 句子。 3.阅读每一段中的首句，进行布局、解读。在布局第 一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的首句：第二段的首句 决定着第一段的走向。 The street began to attract a lot of attention. Step 3: Prediction STEPS: 4. 在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。 Then one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. one by one + late at night - cant wait to make. change his mind see Why did they go there? What did they see/do there? Whats the turning point? effect Step 3: Prediction STEPS: 4. 在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。 The street began to attract a lot of attention. attract - focus of attention attention Whose attention? Focus on what? Whats the turning point? effect /result /ending Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度 (内容+逻辑） 4.上下文的连贯性。 Then one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. The next day, different people made their house different. For example, The street began to attract a lot of attention. Driven by curiosity many journalists came and asked “What have you done to your houses” The street began to attract a lot of attention. Driven by curiosity, many journalists came and asked, “What have you done to your houses?” Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度 4.上下文的连贯性。 Which one do you favor? - therefore, besides/plus/additionally/furthermore, however, on the contrary, - Luckily/fortunately, unexpectedly, surprisingly, happily for him, Inspired by, Out of curiosity/ Driven by curiosity, Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况； 丰富性：关注故事情节的跌宕起伏 The street began to attract a lot of attention. Whenever a stranger came to the street, he would say, “This is not a neat street.” They felt puzzled about what the people had done to their houses. Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street is where we like to be, and it looks like all our dreams.” up down- up Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long . And anyone who had visited the house set about changing his own house to fit his dreams the next day. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Sitting under the palm trees, they drank lemonade and talked about their dreams all night long . And anyone who had visited the house set about changing his own house to fit his dreams the next day. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they were treated to lemonade and shared their long- lost dreams all night long. The next day, Inspired by Mr. Plumbean, anyone who had visited the house changed his mind and started to paint his own house, based on his dream. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house and let their dreams fly. Several months later, with so many amazing houses lining the street, it took on a new look, as if by magic. Step 3: Prediction They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they were treated to lemonade and shared their long- lost dreams all night long . The next day, Inspired by Mr. Plumbean, anyone who had visited the house changed his mind and started to paint his own house, based on his dream. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house and let their dreams fly. Several months later, with so many amazing houses lining the street, the street took on a new look, as if by magic. (83words) no wonder the street became a 长短句交错 Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； very good - amazingly good badly ill- critically ill work hard at - apply oneself to Step 3: Prediction 5.Polish the style. 3. 两段相对平衡 4. 不可滥用直接引语 5.字数严格控制 110-150 Step 3: Prediction Then one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Step 3: Prediction The street began to attract a lot of attention. Whenever a stranger came to the street, he would say, “This is not a neat street.” They felt puzzled about what the people had done to their houses. Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street