高中英语基础写作指导.ppt

时间分配 题型题量赋分时间（分钟） 基础写作11510 基础写作的命题特点： 考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所 给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。 简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。 对于书面表达的要求： 1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆盖所有的语言要点 2. Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 应用词汇和语法 结构的数量和准确性 3.coherent, tight 上下文的连贯性 即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4.use the words properly 语言的得体性 5. Write your article clearly. 6. Mind the number of your sentences. 月考 基础写作 评讲总结 Studying Goals Learn to combine sentences and write complex sentences in writing: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 2)借助介词短语做定语 3)借助介词短语做状语 4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句 III. 用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、 状语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句 ： Combine the two sentences into one 1. My history teacher is a beautiful woman. 2. She has two big eyes and long hair. 名词短语做同位语 My history teacher , a beautiful woman , has two big eyes and long hair. with介词短语做定语 My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair. 定语从句 My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair. Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is located in the smallest continent Oceania. 2.Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. 名词性短语做同位语 Australia, the sixth largest country in the world, is located in the smallest continent. 非谓语动词做状语 Located in the smallest continentOceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is made up of 6 states . 2.Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities in the six states. 定语从句 Australia is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers. 2.Australia has a population of 20 million. Australia covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. and引导的并列句 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers and it has a population of 20 million. Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife. 2.The tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery . 状语从句 Because Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery. 背景：草原上狼群和羊群之间 的故事 主要角色喜羊羊:聪明伶俐， 乐观勇敢，是羊族的小英雄 主要角色灰太狼：带着一顶带 补丁的黄帽子，它贪婪但无论 怎样总抓不住羊 评价：童趣但不幼稚，启智却 不枯燥 成绩：迄今推出了玩偶，图书 ，游戏等相关产品；获得很多 奖项 写作要求 1.使用5个句子表达全部 的内容。 2.句子结构准确，信息内 容完整，篇章结构连贯 。 写作内容： Lets make preparations. . Useful words and expressions:Useful words and expressions: 以为背景 草原 主要角色 羊族 乐观 童趣 启智 迄今 推出 奖项 相关的 be set in/on grasslands main/leading character goat family optimistic/hold a positive attitude toward life funny inspiring up to now put forward award relevant Lets translate the simple sentences! . . Translate the following sentences:Translate the following sentences: 这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背 景。 故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。 喜羊羊是主要角色之一。 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。 贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。 无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。 由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖 项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。 这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背 景。 1.This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. 故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。 2.The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring. 喜羊羊是主要角色之一。 One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat. 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 Pleasant Goat is a little hero in the goat family. 喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。 Pleasant Goat is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. 合并句子（同位语，定语从句） 3.One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. 贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。（with介词短 语做定语） The greedy Big Big Wolf always wears a yellow hat with patches. 无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。 （状语从句） No matter how hard he tries ,he can never catch any goats. 合并句子（非谓语动词做定语） 4.The greedy Big Big Wolf ,always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries. 由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项， 并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。 （状语从句） 5.Because it has made a great success, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games. 介词短语做状语(because of) Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games. This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring. One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. By contrast, the greedy Big Big Wolf ，always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries. Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games. Appreciation Appreciate some compositions of your classmates, and try to find out some complex sentences. .巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 2)借助介词短语做定语 3)借助介词短语做状语 4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句 III. 用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句 ）和引导词，写出规范的复合句： Homework 用5个规范的句子写一则日记， 内容如下： 我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责 骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏.我心情很 沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边 漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上 有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只 有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切 都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做 了。 我又一次考试不及格。 回家 遭到父亲的责骂（scold）。 他说我沉溺于(be addicted to)电脑游戏。 我心情很沮丧。 (depressed) 不知道该干什么。 独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛(wander) 。 突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢(nest)。 鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。 只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一 切都是为了我好。 我知道我以后我该怎么做了。 1.I failed in the exam again. 2.I came back home. 3.My father scolded me . 4.because I was addicted to playing computer games. 5.I was depressed. 6.I didnt know what to do. 7. I wandered out