英语高考(NMET)专题复习.ppt

How to correct a composition 英语高考(NMET)专题复习 -短文改错 金乡高级中学 魏洁 1. 看不出句子有错。 2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。 3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。 Which is your main trouble? 2002年全国高考试题中的短文改错 Last week my parents and I took a twoday trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan As everyone knows， its famous 76 mountain with all kinds of plants and animals The weather 77 was fine It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. the mountain， the three of them were very excited As we 79 climbed the mountain， we fed monkeys， visiting temples 80 and told stories On the way up I was busy taking picture 81 since the scenery was so beautiful The time passes quickly. 82 Evening came down We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83 of the mountain The food was expensive and the service was 84 good I was so tiredly that I fell asleep the moment my 85 head touched the pillow Practice 2002年全国高考试题中的短文改错题。 Last week my parents and I took a twoday trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan As everyone knows， its famous 76 mountain with all kinds of plants and animals The weather 77 was fine It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. the mountain， the three of them were very excited As we 79 climbed the mountain， we fed monkeys， visiting temples 80 a when us visited _ Practice _ （冠词） （句子成分分析） （逻辑错误） （非谓语动词） and told stories On the way up I was busy taking picture 81 since the scenery was so beautiful The time passes quickly. 82 Evening came down We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83 of the mountain The food was expensive and the service was 84 good I was so tiredly that I fell asleep the moment my head touched the pillow 85 pictures passed down but tired _ _ _ （名词数） （动词形） （习惯用法） （连词） _ （形容词,副词 ） 年度 谓语谓语 动词动词 名 词词 连连 词词 冠 词词 形容 词词或 副词词 代 词词 非谓谓 语动语动 词词 介 词词 2000221112 200131113 2002221112 200322212 20042131111 20051211111 2006112221 表 NMET错误类型统计 测试点 错误所占比例大多为: 1：3：6 即: 1行正确； 3行缺词或多词； 6行需要找出错误并改正。 错误形式与改法 1 改词（56个）：在文中该词下面划横线 ( _ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。 2 添词（12个）：在文中标上添词符号（） ；在题号后横线上写出要添的词。 3 去掉（12个）：在文中用斜线( )划掉该词； 在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉。 4 正确（1个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号() 。 答题规范 常见的不规范答题： (1). a a (2). a a (3). a a (4). catch sight him of (5). catches catches (6). a 去掉a (7) . A the (8). A A The (9). him hev Tips: 标点符号不改。 大小写不改。 词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改)。 单词拼写不改。 做做短文该错应采取三个步骤短文该错应采取三个步骤 1.通读短文，掌握大意 2.细读全文，逐一作答 3.复读全文，验证答案 We had guests last night who have not stayed 76 in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 77 because that they were going out early in the 78 morning. They came back lately and had some 79 tea. I came into the living room and saw one of 80 them just go through the kitchen door but turn 81 on the light. He was looking for a glass the 82 cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 83 not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought,84 “What can I do? We are guests after all.” 85 2006高考全国卷 We had guests last night who have not stayed 76_ in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 77_ because that they were going out early in the 78_ morning. They came back lately and had some 79_ tea. I came into the living room and saw one of 80_ had before late that them just go through the kitchen door but turn 81_ on the light. He was looking for a glass the 82_ cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 83_ not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought 84_ “What can I do? We are guests after all.” 85_ and idea myself They in Practice makes perfect. Nothing is impossible. Homework Finish the mistake correcting exercises on the papers. 常考的错误形式有：the, a, an 的用法错误，以及 冠词的多用或少用等。 NMET2001： Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher. NMET2001： We may be one family and live under a same roof. a the 冠词 句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的 语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成 分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。 NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China. why which 逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于 逻辑性错误，如指代上的不一致。例如： NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. NMET 2003: The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. everything their 非谓语，细辨别 这是考查较多的错误形式之一。主要有现 在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。 NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper NMET 2004: I saw grandma in the kitchen looked at me. NMET2001： My parents love me and will do all they can make sure that I can get a good education. to looking talking 习惯用法要记住 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其 错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭 配错误。例如： catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon express us such many people a on ourselves so 名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表 现为将名词复数写成单数。例如： NMET2001： so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. NMET2003: Their word were a great encouragement to me. subjects words 动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态 错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如： NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it to the class. NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. read are 常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用 法。例如： NMET2000： She was smiling but nodding at me NMET2001： It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. and or 连词 注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用 法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。例如： NMET 2005 : He asked angry if we had finished the work. NMET 2004 : I would describe myself as shy and quietly. quiet angrily Then, I put my book under my desk, opened it and started looking for the answer. I like making friend and being ready to help others. answers friends