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书面表达训练7 建议信书面表达训练7建议信(问题和建议信)建议信句式：段首1. Im writing to express my views on/concerning2. You have asked for some advice concerningand I will try to give you my suggestions.3. I would like to suggest that4. I am writing in reply to 5. In my opinion, I would say提出建议中1. I think/believe it would be better/very helpful/beneficial if you2. It is desirable that 是可取的。3. I would like to suggest/recommend that Why not4. It would help to This would5. Perhaps there could be6. I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken.7. As for my advice for you. First, Second, Third,段尾1. I hope that you may consider doing2. I would be ready to further discuss this decision.3. I trust you will take my suggestions into account.关于批评的句式：1. I am writing to draw your attention to 2. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this.3. It is clearly not appropriate for sb. to do sth.4. Today, ，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ；Second,；what makes things worse is that写作模板1.Dear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于) _, and I will try to make some practical suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _(建议内容).I hope you will find these proposals(建议) useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Yours sincerely _2.Dear _,I am writing to make some suggestions as to _ /I am writing to express my views concerning _ /You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to _(第一条建议). /I would like to suggest first that_(第一条建议). With the help of_, you can _. Besides/In addition/Whats more/Furthermore, if you _, you would be able to _ (第二条建议). Finally/Last but not least, you may consider_(第三条建议). This way_.写作范文1(问题和建议)Teenagers 杂志Conversation With Brad 栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议。Dear Brad,Im a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied. So I feel lonely sometimes.I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Yours Li HuaDear Li Hua,I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents. Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence. Therefore, its a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”.As for my advice for you. First, dont hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, convince them you have tried your best. It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard.Anyway, there is no one who loves you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you. Love them, and love can heal everything. Yours sincerely Brad写作范文2（批评和建议）加入你是李明，看到学校门口以及附近在上学或放学时交通拥挤问题愈来愈严重。 这给学生、教师、家长和其他市民带来许多不便。尤其是学校附近的交通堵塞也存在不可忽略的隐患。为此，你决定写一封英语信，向本校英语报投稿。内容包括：1. 为什么要写这封英语信。2. 你们学校门口及附近交通拥挤的原因。3. 提出两至三条建议。4. 注意：1. 词数不少于120个。 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Editor,Im Li Ming, a student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequents near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by. Many people have been worrying about hidden traffic problems. So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken. First, we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars, which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students health as well. It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others. Besides, cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate. I do hope my suggestions can be considered