英语记叙文的写作(匡世怡).ppt

英语记叙文的写作,记叙文,记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。 这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。 记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。,记叙文写作的注意事项,一、交代背景 文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的 时间、地点、人物以及事件等 二、详略得当 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关 的内容，从而点明文章中心。 三、条理清晰 记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述， 要求层次清晰、条理清楚。,记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题,It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced. All through my senior high school, I couldnt forget In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me. Last week, when I was on my way home something terrible happened. I quickly turned around, just in time to see the whole process of the accident.,记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题,补充交代时间 The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning. The whole story happened the (first) day I entered the senior high school.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（一）作者心理活动的描写 I could hardly believe my eyes. I felt as if I were on top of the world. I was completely shocked. I was bursting with joy.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（二）人物外貌和性格的描写 He is of medium height. He is good-looking/ordinary-looking. She is plump/slim, with fair skin and curly hair. He looks handsome in a sports suit/blue jeans. He is of mild/bad temper. At first glance, you would say he is the perfect image of an obedient boy, but deep down, he is not that way at all.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（三）物体的描写 It comes in a variety of colors/shapes. It consists of several integrated parts. It is shaped like a circle. It is flat in shape and small in size. Attached to the bottom is,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（四）景物的描写 There is a wonderful array of flowers along the street. The air is filled with the scent of roses. The trees stood there on guard for generations, with branches reaching out like a canopy over the road. I feel miserably insignificant approaching the mountain. Even judging by modern standards, the town was large in population. The campus has a unique atmosphere.,例文 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).,实战演练 2003年9月英语四级作文及其范文 Part Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况 2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的 3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,词汇拓展,扭伤 twist ones ankle / give a wrench to ones ankle / sprain ones ankle ones sprained ankle 喉咙疼痛 have a sore throat 痛苦的表情 an expression of pain Her face was contorted with pain. 她痛得脸都变了样。 量体温 take ones temperature 轮流照顾某人 take care of sb. by turns / take turns at caring sb. 发高烧 have/run a high fever 健康状况 health / condition 请假 ask for a (sick) leave / ask for a four-day leave / be on sick leave,例文 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).,写作模板：架构阶段 第一段： 开篇句：about _ oclock one evening in _, _. 扩展句：_. (展开描述一下事件) 第二段：主题句：without hesitation, _. it wasnt long before _. 扩展句：1、one _. 2、another _. 3、our teacher _. 第三段： 结尾句：is _? who can tell ? but _. 扩展句： 1、when _ , people showed _ spirit regardless of _. 2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,例文 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).,写作模板：填充阶段 第一段： 开篇句：about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. 扩展句：his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5. 第二段： 主题句：without hesitation, i dialed “120“. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. 扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him. 2、another supported him in the ambulance. 3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money. 第三段： 结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we didt retreat. 扩展句： 1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. 2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,例文 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).,范文 About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5. Without hesitation，I dialed “120”. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money. Is he a suspected SARS patient？Who can tell ？But we didnt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,学生作品中的常见问题,在叙事时，一般用过去时，但在表述个人观点时可以用现在时。 在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果。 Last week, my classmate had a bad cold. 不要用或A,B,C来表示人，可以取一个恰当的名字，或是用John Doe或Jane Doe来表示“某人”。,记叙文练习题目,） Directions: Now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title My Best Friend. You should write at least 100-120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。 2.你们之间的