高考英语书面表达的最后冲刺.ppt

首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。 列题纲使用要点条理化，序化，统筹安排布局。 勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。 要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。,解书面表达题的基本技巧,遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。 注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多，应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。 注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。 最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。,学会使用较高级的词汇 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,学会使用较丰富的句式 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,学会使用恰当的连接词 使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。,书信格式示例 ： 25 Tianshui Road Lanzhou, China January 3rd, 2003 208 Hope Road Sydney, Australia Dear_Laura, _How_are_you_getting_on_now?_ Yours sincerely, Zhou Lan,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.,I hope you come and see for yourself some day,(97),How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China?(01),Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.,Do you think youd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. (03),Im glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home. Im looking forward very much to meeting you soon.(04全2),I am so sorry that I wont be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon.,Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay in Beijing a pleasant experience.,Id like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. (04福) Welcome to our school if you have any chance.,Im very glad to have received your letter you sent me two weeks ago. Ive been thinking about the question you asked me. Therefore, I think its a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?(05湖),Im writing for more information about the day tour to London.(05全1),经典语句汇编(常用的结束语),Best wishes/regards! Good luck to you! Wishing you success/ good luck! Give my best wishes/regards to you parents! Looking forward to your early reply! Please give my best regards to.,通知格式示例： 书面通知格式示例 NOTICE In order to arouse the students interest in learning English, the Student Union has decided to set up an English Club with the help of the teachers of English. _ _ Student Union November 9, 2004,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,通知格式示例： 口头通知格式示例 Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Students Union is going to hold a party on Sunday evening, November 12th, to welcome our friends from the United States. _ Thats all . Thank you!,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,经典语句汇编(通知),Dr Green, a physicist from England, will be invited to give us a talk on “Science and Future. A friendly basketball match will be held between Class 10 and Class 12 on our school playground. Please get prepared./ Please be there on time. You are welcome to come and help us. Im sure youll have a lot of fun. Im sorry to tell you that the visit to the countryside which we planned for this morning will be put off to tomorrow because of rain.,致词(speech)格式示例： 欢迎词格式示例 Ladies and gentlemen/ Mr President/etc, Welcome to- _Thats all. Thank you. 欢送词格式示例 Dear friends, _ Good luck to -/ Goodbye, dear friends.,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,经典语句汇编(致辞),Im very glad to welcome you to our schooll on behalf of us students. Now let me give you a brief introduction of our class. Its an honor for me to speak for my classmates. First of all. I hope that the friendship between you and us will exist forever. We all hope you will keep in touch with us and we hope you will come to China again. Now lets express our heartfelt thanks to him and wish him a pleasant journey home and good health.,As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out (to be) a failure.,When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,She went to Austria in order to study music.,She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music.,When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,You can find my house easily.,Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.,When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything.,When he was a child, he had a strong appetite / desire for knowledge.,In our school, there are twentysix classrooms.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms. (or:Twentysix classrooms make up our school.),I like sports while my sister likes reading.,I like sports while my sister enjoys reading.,Ill thank you if you think about my application.,Ill appreciate it very much if you can take my application into consideration.,Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.,Well spare no effort to develop the traditional friendship between us.,A new railway is being built in my hometown.,A new railway is under construction in my hometown.,More and more people have bought cars in recent years.,The number of people, who have access to their own cars, have risen sharply in the recent years.,使用非谓语形式,The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and explained. P Well mostly stay at home watchTV, play games, and meet people in the evening ., Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.,Pointing to a policeman not far away, the Young man explained. (97),使用非谓语形式,She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. F I found that a new teacher was sitting at the back of the classroom., I found a new teacher seated at the back of the classroom,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,使用非谓语形式,We will have a discussion about the problem at the meeting that will be held tomorrow. F They sang and laughed as they went back to school.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,合并句子,China is a big country. It has a large population. My brother was riding. I was sitting on the seat behind. All classes are taught by teachers who is experienced in teaching foreign students. ,China is a big country with a large population.,My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.,All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.,合并句子,Its a small flat of 25square meters. There is a bedroom, a bathroom and kitchen in it. The living standard is developing. We get more and more pocket money given by our parents and relatives., With the developing of our living standard, we get more and more pocket money given by our parents and relative.,Its a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.,使用短语,Our city has changed a lot in the past few years. The quality of the car is good. The price of the car is reasonable. It was raining heavily, but they went on with the work. ,Great changes have taken place in our city in.,In addition to the good quality, the price of the car is reasonable as well.,Despite/In spite of the heavy rain, they went on with the work.,使用倒装句,Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. He didnt have supper until his mother came back. When the war was over, he could happily go back to work. But before the completion of the new cabin, a storm came. ,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,Not until his mother came back did he have supper.,Only when the war was over could he happily go back to work.,there came a storm.,使用强调句,It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little.(93),It was what the headmaster said at the meeting that really surprised us.,It was my opinion that students should place study, health and safety before other things. (05江),How was it that the little girl got in touch with her father?,使用感叹句,How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. (98),How time flies! It has been two years since Mr. Green came to our school.,How hard mum was working! (04重),We were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. (98),定语从句,People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.(02) The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.,They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. (05江),Part 2: 时间状语,He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team. A year later in 1990, he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.,时 间 状 语,She was trying to pick a flower when she fell into the river. (93) It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. (00),At a stand, a woman was buying an ice- cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. (04辽),As the snatcher was running past. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. (04重),时间状语,He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. /He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team. /A year later in 1990, he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.,Such as,I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons.(01) Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems, such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. (04南) However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. (04江),使用虚拟语气,I passed the physics exam because of your help. I could not have passed the physics exam but for/without your help. If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam.,改变语态,He has made much progress in his English. We should make efforts to reduce air pollution. Our government should take strong and effective measures to protect our environment.,Strong and effective measures should be taken to protect out environment.,Much progress has been made in his English.,Great efforts should be made to reduce air pollution.,高级词组的使用,Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. We all think he is a great man. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. came upon The students there neednt pay for their books. As a result the plan was a failure. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,We all think highly of him.,A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,The plan turned out (to be) a failure.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,高级词组的使用,She went to Austria in order to study music. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. In our school, there are twentysix classrooms. You can find my house easily.,She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms. /Twentysix classrooms make up our school.,Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.,联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意：（1）要点齐全，前后连贯。 （2）词数：100120之间。,依据要点，草拟提纲，将所需要的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型。暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、单数第三人称等词形变化。 100 families and 500 people/ used to be very poor/ change a lot/ richer than before/ take on a new look was very small/ have been rebuilt newly-built/have 4 storeys/ most beautiful building school-age children/ enjoy free education 扩展成句，连句成篇。本文为一篇发言稿，其格式与口头通知大体相同。因此，短文应有称呼、开场及结束语。既然介绍的是小村，所使用的人称应为it.应注意时态、语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching buildinghas 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.,这篇书面表达要点齐全，表达也