难忘的经历英语作.ppt

中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分） 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档（10-12分） 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务的要求；句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书写工整；字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。,中考作文评分标准,第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构单一；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多；书写不够工整，字数较少。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（0-6分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；应用的语言结构单一且不规范；句子不通顺，行文不连贯；语言错误多；书写潦草，字数不足50。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,五、书面表达(共15分) 还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience”为题进行征文活动。 请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。 参考词语： remember, help, wonderful, feel, think An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences._,Possible version 1： An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates. From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.,Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. 一般过去时；被动； 副词；情态动词 While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. 过去进行时；一般过去时态；非谓语动词 He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. 一般过去时；宾语从句,(P V 2) An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work. Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy. By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.,Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. 总起 First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly.,Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy. By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving.,跑题篇 An unforgettable person An unforgettable present An u