高中英语写作教程-记叙.ppt

高中英语作文教学,教师：梁德义, List the points of the composition Translate the points into English Organise the points to an essay,Three-step Writing Composition,假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经 历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。(日记的开头已写好),今天下午我去看电影.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.,今天下午我去看电影.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,I went to the cinema this afternoon. I went to see a film this afternoon.,On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.,I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,The man was very grateful and took out some money to thank me, but I refused.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.,I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.,1. 举例、举例 for example、such as、 namely、 first、 second 、 finally 2. 总结归纳、发表意见 in a word、in short、 in ones opinion、 personally、 to ones surprise 3. 句与句之间的连贯 whats more、 besides、 and、 then 、 so- that 4. 转折 however、 while、 on the contrary 5. 因果 therefore、 thus、 as a result、 so,May 3rd, Friday Fine One afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man . But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver wouldnt accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did.,一. 合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,二. 合并为复合句,三. 把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,四. 避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,五.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,六. 适当的联想与发挥。,I went to the cinema one afternoon.,On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.,One afternoon, on my way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.,I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.,After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me.,The man was very grateful and he took out some money to thank me, but I refused.,Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely.,May 3rd, Friday Fine One afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man . But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver wouldnt accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did.,May 3rd, Friday Fine One afternoon, on my way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely. With the help of the driver, I went back to the cinema. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the