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2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,CET 4 2009-12,在题材上，依然是所熟悉的校园类话题，而且更为直接，同时兼顾社会的热点，特别关注热点二个字，这也与社会的大背景有关系。 命题重点悄悄的由原来侧重于校园中的学习类话题和校园中的学生的课余娱乐方面的话题向与大学生的社会生活有关的话题转移。 在体裁和内容以及段落构成方面，基本上属于重要性阐述+问题分析阐释+措施的传统三段式段落结构。,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,Create a Green Campus,按照新的阅卷标准和阅卷教师的反馈的信息，模板作文的得分普遍比较低，而且现在的老师有反模板的倾向，这就要求考生在表达上具有多样性，要有闪光点，要求考生在平时备考中注重基本功的培养，摒弃模板，同时增加对各种话题的整理与把握，这样才能在写作这个项目中取得高分。具体来说，体现在主题词的替换和句型的替换上，也就是我们所说的闪光点上。 比如说：green campus = environmental-friendly campus = pollution-free campus create= build up= establish=construct,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,Create a Green Campus,在段落方面，第一段要求写重要性，可以写：sth importance = sth significance 等等都可以，这都比sth more and more impotant 好多了。第二段写绿色校园的内涵，比如说绿色校园不但要求环境要绿色，无污染，而且还要充满着协调、人文关怀、师生关系之间、宿舍同学之间的和谐等等，可以发挥的空间很大，最后一段写构建和谐校园的措施，可以从二个角度二个层面来写，校方应该如何做，师生应该如何做，另外从思想层面和实际措施层面来写,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,Create a Green Campus,Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied. A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere. In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,Create a Green Campus,Nowadays tens of thousands of people are claiming that we should build a green country. As a college student, I think to create a green campus also has great significance. To create a green campus, obviously we have to commit ourselves to protect the environment of our campus first, which is of prime importance. Moreover, in my opinion, green campus not only means the green environment, but also means to create a sustainable developing campus. To create a sustainable developing campus, each university student should have the sense of being masters, which means they should apply themselves to not only improve themselves from all kinds of aspects, but also help universities to improve management, help teachers to improve the quality of teaching, and help schoolmates to improve college life. As long as every college student can do like that, university life will be their great memory in life.,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,Creating a Green Campus,Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied. A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere. In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year. “Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it. Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource. As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home. We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us. We can stop cars running through our campus streets. And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using. We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong. These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school. So, lets begin to act! Dont talk loudly in public places. Turn off the water tap after using it. After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car. Save your pocket moneynd contribute to environmental protection organizations. Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling. Plant more trees and flowers. We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus. Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation. This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.,Creating a Green Campus,2010年4月8日晚、602、孙,It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society. The idea of “a green campu