漫画作文书面表达六部曲.ppt

书面表达六部曲,书面表达六部曲,1. 认真审题。审题是写作的第一步，它包括审题意，审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态。 2. 组织要点。根据题意, 将情景中所给要点逐条列出, 注意做到要点齐全。 3. 地道成句。将所列要点用完整地道的英语句子表达出来。,4. 连句成篇。在连句成篇时，同学们首先要理清句子之间的关系，选用适当的表示并列、递进、转折、因果、条件、时间顺序等意义的连词或词组，把有关要点或句子连接成文。其次，要避免句子结构的单调重复。最重要的是，如果发现上下句之间跳跃性太大，没有逻辑关系时，要根据自己的生活经验，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅。,5. 查漏勘误。在草稿上写好全文后，同学们要通读全文，查漏勘误。主要注意以下三点：（1）查人称、体裁、动词形式是否正确，特别注意主语如果是第三人称单数，其后的动词千万不能用动词原形，这是学生写作中最常见的错误。（2）查句式，看句子结构是否完整，语序是否正确，习语搭配是否无误，短文中是否使用了一到两个结构较为复杂的句子。（3）查字数是否符合要求，标点符号是否正确。,6. 规范誊写。书面表达是主观题，给分标准有主观性，规范、工整的书写会给阅卷老师留下好印象，无意中老师会给出高出你文章实际水平的分数。,下面4幅图反映出你们村庄附近一片山林的变化及其后果。请你写一篇120词左右的短文反映图中所示内容，并发表一点你个人的看法。,One possible version There used to be a large woods on the mountain near my village. Often we could hear birds singing beautifully in it. But ten years ago, people cut down all the trees in order to build a big factory so that birds lost their homes. Without trees keeping the water, torrents of water will rush down the mountain and flood both the factory and the whole village whenever it rains heavily. At this time, the homeless villagers will cry out sadly: “Return our homeland to us!” In my opinion, trees are our friends. If we cut down too many trees, we will destroy the homes of birds and animals. Whats worse, we will also destroy our own homes.,下图是某天上英语课时的情景。张老师会怎样处理学生李明上课睡觉一事？请你根据你的经验或想象，写二篇短文，分别说明张老师可能采取的两种办法及其后果，每篇短文不少于60词。,One possible version A One day Li Ming fell asleep again in the English class. As he had been criticized many times for sleeping in class before, Ms. Zhang decided that he had to think up a good way to help him. So after class, she had a long talk with Li Ming. At last, she said, “Im sorry. My lecture was so boring as to make you sleep”. Hearing this, Li Ming felt ashamed. He said sorry to Ms. Zhang and promised to study hard from then on.,B One day Li Ming fell asleep again in the English class. As Ms. Zhang thought it useless to criticize him, she decided to tell the whole thing to his parents. Li Mings parents got so angry that they gave him a good beating that evening. Then the next morning, Li Ming left home, leaving his parents a note saying, “I will never go to school and I will not tell you where Im going.” How regretful they were!,阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（100词左右）,Words for possible use: 西瓜：water-melon 清洁工人：dustman 垃圾箱：dustbin,The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon. When they went away they left the melons skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They didnt want to take any trouble throwing it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting. Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish. However, what they did violate public morality. If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with files flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides, dustmen will have a very very hard job to clean the world we live in.,下面4幅图描述的是Tom和Mike的一次经历，请你根据图画内容和文字提示写一篇100字左右的短文。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。,At present, playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people, especially with school students. Take Tom and Mike for example. Every day,At present, playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people, especially with school students. Take Tom and Mike for example. Every day after school, they go to the computer bar to play games till late at night, and they often have a competition to see who wins more scores. Once, Tom didnt go home until eleven oclock at night. When he got home, he told his mother that he had been going over his lessons. Poor mom！She believed hi