初三中考writing.ppt

Writing,中考英语作文评分标准,Standard,1.包含所有要点（人物，时间，地点，内容，目的等等） 2.不能逐字翻译中文提示，适当发挥，内容具体，丰富 3.词汇，句型丰富，行文流畅，几乎没有语法错误 4.字迹清晰，整洁，大小写分明，标点符号使用正确。,英语写作必备 九字真言,整洁 三段论 套话 翻译,整洁、干净,fall in love at first sight 阅卷老师一天要批阅 ？份试卷 印象分数很重要 如果你写的作文整洁、干净， 你的英语书法又很漂亮，即使有一些语法错误也会得到不错的分数。,三段论,中考最流行的结构就是三段式 记叙文：背景起因、经过、结果启发、感悟 议论文：观点分析总结 说明文：提及事物描述事物总结 书信：提及话题讨论话题结语 看图作文：背景起因、经过结果,套话:通常指逻辑词和习惯表达。,WHY 帮助拓展思维，让逻辑清晰 又能增加写作字数，简化英语写作 first，second，third，finally first of all, in the second place, what is more 书信中常用的“glad to receive you letter.I am looking forward to hearing from you”等等。,假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果： 1.节水节电； 2.垃圾分类； 3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕； 4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。 参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue 手帕handkerchiefs,参考范文： Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it. We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.,翻译,实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译! 任何题型的英语作文都可以用翻译技巧整理出要表达的要点，然后填充到三段论和套话组成的模式中去。 理解要点翻译要点扩充句子写作整理，就是内容不丢分的四大步骤。,假如你是Tony Li ，在英国一所中学就读大约一年，需要找一位家庭教师，条件要求如下表所示，请你像你的老师Mr.Roger Fike写一份邮件，请他帮忙。,要求：1.文体格式正确，信息完成，内容合理2.句子结构准确，篇章结构连贯， 字数不少于80个单词。3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 提示语：家庭教师：tutor 标准英语：standard English,Dear Mr. Fike, Ive been here for almost a year and I find the life is not easy for me. I think I need a tutor. Would you please help me fine one? First, the tutor should be a beautiful girl or woman, 20-25 years old. She can be either a college student or an English teacher from middle school or primary school. Second, I hope the tutor is patient and helpful, who loves reading and tavelling.Third, most importantly, she should be able to speak standard English and be familiar with the English history and geography. With best regards, Tony Li,内功修炼,一、善于思考 勤于积累 要想在中考作文中拿到高分，这需要考生在日常生活中善于观察，不能两耳不闻窗外事，而应积极关注当今社会热点，如人口问题、污染问题、世界和平等一系列现象；要善于思考，勤于把自己的思想用英语正确地表达和记录下来，只有通过不断的积累和磨练，才能练就良好的写作基本功。建议大家在考前把今年的相关重点问题，热点问题回顾一下。积累一些相关词汇，有备无患。 二、认真审题 写好提纲 考生在拿到试卷之后，当听力题做完，可以先看一看作文的题目与类型，对它有一个大致的印象和准备，在做语法和阅读题时对自己的作文能有一个初步的构思。应尽可能地留出20分钟的时间来写作文。在正式写作文时，可参照以下步骤： 1、认真审题，确定题目中的关键词。 2、展开一次“Brain Storm”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。 3、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。 4、确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时。（时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因。） 5、对于有能力的同学，注意不能通篇均用简单句型，可适当引入初中的语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。 6、当整篇作文写完，一定要进行仔细的检查，注意使句子流畅，时态运用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词运用正确，名词的大小写正确。 。,审题,Before outline you need to know whats the purpose you are writing Explaining Persuading Telling a story Describe 明确写作目的，确定文章体裁，人称，时态,outline,Brainstorming Think in English 三段论,随堂练习outline,许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life“为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括: 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 我的压力是什么； 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。,Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!,(二)应用文写作,应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式，它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容，还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写，这也是考生对于英语传统文化了解多少的反映。因此，考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及规范用语，以做到处变不惊、百战百胜。,书信套话 开头部分：,How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. Im glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. Im pleased to hear that youre coming to China for a visit. Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.,结尾部分：,With best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply. Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.,NOTICE,开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and dont be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank you.,举例:,Q1: What are the important things in your life?,Q2: Which one do you think is the most important thing?,Q3: Why do you think so?,learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life.,I think learning to share is the most important.,It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others.It also shows that we have the abil