高三英语基础写作人物描写.ppt

Welcome To Our Class,welcome to our English class,课型:写作课 教学目标:通过这节的讲授,让学生掌握如何用英语介绍人物. 重点:讲授描写人物的常用句型和步骤. 难点:灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文. 教学方法: 顺序法，归纳演绎法 授课时间: 星期一 (1课时) 授课教师：廖夏露 授课班级:高三（8）班,Basic Writing-,Character introduction (人物介绍） - 常用句子结构,人物简介的一般步骤 the right order,(1)概况age, sex, birth-place, background (2)外貌性格appearance ,character (3)教育education (4)生平big events in his or her life ( in the order of time ) (5)评价evaluation,【Useful words and expressions】 年龄、出生 1）二十岁的时候_ 2）于1987年5月生在北京 _,at the age of 20,be born in Beijing in May 1987,【Useful words and expressions】 2. 外貌、性格特征： 1）漂亮_ 2）1.80米高_ 3）勤奋的_,beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking,1.80 meters tall/ in height,diligent/ hardworking,ambitious, competent, confident, considerate, creative, outspoken, devoted, energetic, humorous, independent,3. 教育： 1）努力学习_ 2）获得硕士学位_ 3）毕业_,work hard at his studies,receive/get a masters degree,graduate from,4. 经历： 1）致力于_ 2）有天赋_,devote oneself to,have a gift/ talent for,5. 评价： 做出了贡献_ 对的评价很高_,make great contributions to,speak/think highly of,Lets do a fast reading: Just guess the person who is described by the following sentences.,1.Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 2. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. 3. When his first album(唱片 lbm ） was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. 4. He becomes very popular with the young, and has received many awards for his songs. 5. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled （无法匹敌的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes a chance on trying new things.,Jay Chou(周杰伦),How to translate the sentence,lets analyze the sentences in the passage., Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,分词结构,同位语,身份与概况,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album(唱片） was released（发行） in 2000, he got the worlds attention. He becomes very popular with the young, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.,经历,分词结构,状语从句,定语从句,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句,如定语从句等，润色文章, His own unique（独特的） Chinese R&B style is unparalleled（无法匹敌的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs （突破）as he takes a chance（冒险）on tryinging new things.,评价evaluation,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,A.巧用同位语结构, 使文章简洁，通顺 1)钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。 Zhong Nanshan, , was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 2）为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔, 出生在1983年的上海. Liu Xiang, _ , was born in Shanghai in 1983.,* 语法，句法高分tips,one of the greatest doctors in China,a confident and optimistic boy,B.巧用分词结构，使文章精炼 eg.3岁时，对音乐表现出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹钢琴。 Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the age of 3. He began learning to play the piano. 1）获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国升造。 _ from Zhongshan University, she went abroad to further her study. 2）姚明1980年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。 Yao Ming, _, is a world famous basketball player. (定语),Having received a masters degree,born in Shanghai in 1980,Showing great interest in music, Jay Chou began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.,C 巧用with结构，作定语/状语, with + n. 1)历史老师是个漂亮女人，长着两只大眼睛，留长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman _ . 2)他高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起来像个外国人。 _, he looks like a foreigner. 3) 他带了一个大包，上车很困难。 He had difficulty getting on the bus _. with +O +Oc (非谓语/介短) 1）他看到一个抱着婴儿的女人站在那里。 He saw a woman _ standing there. 2）他双手反绑，被带了进来。 He was brought in, _.,With a big nose and a big mouth,with two big eyes and long hair,with a baby in her arms,with his hands tied behind,with a big bag,D 恰当使用定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润色文章 1）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。 Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Olympic Games , _. 2) 2002年，他去了上海，在那里他赚了一大笔钱。 In 2002, he went to Shanghai, _ _. 3）她决心成为一名歌手，无论遇到什么困难。 She decided to be a singer _ _she might come across.,which made her world-famous,where he made,a lot of money,no matter what difficulty/,whatever difficulty,你是李华， 今年毕业要申请到国外留学，对方要求你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的 基本情况， 请你根据以下情况作自我介绍。只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。内容包括：,牛刀小试: Now its your turn!,个人概括,1. 1993年5月，李华出生于广东省海丰县 2. 她于2000-2006年就读于海城小学，之后2006-2012年就读于彭湃中学。 3. 主要所学课程有语文，数学、英语、物理、化学和电脑。 4. 李华擅长英语和电脑，而且去年在全校电脑竞赛中获得第一名。 5. 在业余时间，喜欢打篮球和游泳。,Person （人称） Tense （时态）,Attention,Your turn!,Finish the composition with the help of the writing tips above.,生词大扫荡,小学 primary school 科目 subject 化学 chemistry 物理 physics 竞赛 competition 一等奖 the first prise,Sample writing,Born in May 1993, I am Li Hua , a student from Haifeng, Guangdong Province. I studied in Haicheng Primary School from 2000 to 2006 and after that, I went to Pengpai Middle School until graduating from it this summer. The main subjects that I studied at school included Chinese, math, English , physics