高中英语Module6WarandPeaceSectionⅤWriting_如何写影评教学案外研版.docx

Module 6 War and Peace Section Writing如何写影评一般来说，影评属于夹叙夹议文。这种文体主要用一般现在时介绍剧情内容及发表自己的看法。当叙述什么时候观看或电影曾获得什么奖项时可采用过去时态。一、基本结构影评适宜用“三段式”写法。第一段：简介背景。对电影的名称、特点、导演等作简单介绍。第二段：情节概述。包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影简介不宜太长，只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。第三段：观后感受，发表评论。可以选择性地从不同角度对电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、环境、颜色的搭配及拍摄理念的使用等方面有针对性地发表个人看法，但不要面面俱到。最后对电影总体评价。如果认为有必要，也可鼓励其他人观看。二、增分佳句1影片概述The main characters are .The film tells us a real story.The film . directed by . is a story about .The film . is set in .The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.2好的评价This is a very touching film/a mustsee. gives an amazing performance in the film.My favourite part of the film is .Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it!3不好的评价However, many people have complained that the film is too .Another common complaint is that the film .Im disappointed with the film because .题目要求电影哈利波特与魔法石是根据英国作家J.K.Rowling的小说改编而成的。请根据下表中的提示写一篇影评。片名HarryPotterandtheSorcerersStone导演Chris Columbus主演Daniel Radcliffe, Rupert Grint, Emma Watson故事梗概小哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受到虐待。11岁生日时，他被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。在Hogwarts, 哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事情，也交了一些好朋友，同时还学会了怎样获得真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。我的评价这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡了全世界。通过这部电影，我们应该学会信任自己和帮助别人。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为议论文影评；2确定中心人称：本文人称主要为第三人称；3确定主体时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时。二、构思第一部分：简介背景。对电影的名称、特点、导演等作简单介绍。第二部分：情节概述。第三部分：作出评论。第二步：核心词汇想周全1fortunately/luckily幸运的是2be_based_on/upon根据，以为基础3be_badly_treated受到虐待4be_popular_with受到的欢迎5all_over_the_world全世界6worthwhile值得做的第三步：由词扩句雏形现1哈利波特与魔法石是一部幻想影片。(fantasy film)Harry_Potter_and_the_Sorcerers_Stone_is_a_fantasy_film.2影片基于英国小说作家J.K罗琳的小说，是由克里斯哥伦布执导的。(and并列句)The_film_is_based_on_the_novel_of_the_English_writer_JK.Rowling_and_directed_by_Chris_Columbus.3哈利失去了双亲，在姨母家受到虐待。Harrys_parents_were_dead._He_was_badly_treated_at_his_aunts_house.4但幸运的是，11岁生日时，他被邀请去霍格沃茨，一所魔术学校，在那里他学会了魔术。(被动语态；where定语从句)But_fortunately,_on_his_birthday_of_eleven,_he_was_invited_to_go_to_Hogwarts,_a_magic_school_where_he_learned_magic.5哈利在那里经历了很多冒险和神奇的事情，学会了如何获得真正的友谊，也学会了勇敢。(“疑问词不定式”结构作宾语)Harry_experienced_many_adventurous_and_wonderful_things_there._He_learned_how_to_get_true_friendship_and_how_to_be_brave.6他的老师和同学都彼此很友好，互相帮助。His_teachers_and_classmates_were_all_quite_friendly_to_each_other_and_helped_each_other.7哈利波特与魔法石是一个巨大的成功，它受到世界各地的人们的欢迎。(and并列句)Harry_Potter_and_the_Sorcerers_Stone_is_a_great_success_and_its_popular_with_people_all_over_the_world.8这部电影值得看。通过它，我们要学会相信自己和帮助别人。(believe in)Its_worthwhile_to_see_the_film._Through_it,_we_learn_to_believe_in_ourselves_and_help_others.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句1和句2HarryPotterandtheSorcerersStone is a fantasy film, which is based on the novel of the English writer JK. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. 2.用whose引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3Harry,_whose_parents_were_dead,_was_badly_treated_at_his_aunts_house.3用after引导时间状语从句改写句5After_Harry_experienced_many_adventurous_and_wonderful_things_there,_he_learned_how_to_get_true_friendship_and_how_to_be_brave.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇HarryPotterandtheSorcerersStone is a fantasy film, which is based on the novel of the English writer JK. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. In the film, there are three main actors with the names of Daniel Radcliffe, Rupert Grint and Emma Watson.In the movie, Harry, whose parents were dead, was badly treated at his aunts home. But fortunately, on his birthday of eleven, he was invited to go to Hogwarts, a magic school where he learned magic. It was a world full of magic and wonders. After Harry experienced many adventurous and wonderful things there, he learned how to get true friendship and how to be brave. His teachers and classmates were all quite friendly to each other and helped each other. They finally became good friends. Harry Potter became a selfconfident and brave b