2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练十演讲稿.docx

书面表达针对练(十)演讲稿题目要求(2017沈阳高三质检)在和谐社会里，人际关系中的互帮互助已成为我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以李华的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下：1帮助同学加深友谊；2帮助老人幸福；3帮助病人快乐；4帮助别人的体会和感悟。注意：词数100左右。_四步作文法第一步审题谋篇1体裁演讲稿2时态一般现在时3人称第一人称为主第二步要点要全1我们都知道，互帮互助是我们生活的重要组成部分。We_all_know_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.2我们可以从帮助别人中获得更多。We_can_gain_more_from_helping_others.3当我们帮助我们的同学时，我们可以加深我们的友谊。We_can_strengthen_our_friendship_when_we_help_our_classmates.4帮助别人可以提升我们自己。Helping_others_can_promote_ourselves.5我乐于帮助有困难的人。我坚信这对于构建一个和谐美好的世界将非常有用。Im_ready_to_help_others_in_need,_and_I_strongly_believe_that_it_will_be_of_great_use_to_build_a_harmonious_and_wonderful_world.第三步句式要美句1升级为定语从句或主语从句As_we_all_know,_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.It_is_known_to_us_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.What_is_known_to_us_is_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.第四步衔接要顺用for example，and，in a word，so等衔接词串句成文Helping Each Other Makes the World WonderfulHello, everyone. Im Li Hua. Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic.As we all know, helping each other is an important part of our life. We can gain more from helping others. For example, we can strengthen our friendship when we help our classmates. We can feel happy when we help old people. And we take great pleasure when we help patients in hospital.In a word, helping others can promote ourselves. So Im ready to help others in need, and I strongly believe that it will be of great use to build a harmonious and wonderful world. Lets take action to achieve the good wishes.Thank you for your listening.改写两用这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。Helping Each Other Makes the World WonderfulLadies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. I am so honoured to be here today with all of you to talk of helping each other.In our life we often help others and also gets help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and others things, we can developed our friendship. If we give hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of happy. We can also give our helping hands to those who is suffering from illness, which it can give us much pleasure. I think we can get much when helped the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much best than receiving.”答案：Helping Each Other Makes the World WonderfulLadies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. I am so honoured to be here today with all of you to talk helping each other.In our life we often help others and also help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and things, we can our friendship. If we give hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of . We can also give our helping hands to those who suffering from i