英语写作如何写建议信.ppt

A letter of giving advice 亳州市十八中 杨秀英,写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,写作模式(三段式) 1.首段（beginning)：开门见山，表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。 2.主体段落（body）：对所提问题进行分析，针对问题提出建议并阐述理由(suggestions-reasons/evidence)。 3.结尾段(ending)：呼应开头，重申观点并礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建议的愿望。,建议信写作的注意事项： a开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。 b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,写作语料库：英语建议信的常用语句,A建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1.I am sorry to know that 2.I am writing to you for/with the purpose of 3.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter. 4.Im writing to express my views about/concerning. 4. Thanks for trusting me. Its my great pleasure to give you some suggestions /advice/tips,B.建议信第二段常用句式。(提出建议，阐述理由。） I.标准整套句式 In the first place/To begin with/First of all, why not? If you do this Whats more/Furthermore/Besides, you should /are supposed to do/are expected to do Then/ That way, Last but not least, it would be a good idea if By doing this, ,II.升级加分句式 1.If I were you, I would 2.I would like to suggest that. 3 .I think it would be more helpful /beneficial/of greater help/benefit if you could . 4.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.,建议信结尾常用句式,I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. I believe if you follow my advice, youll 3.I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips. 4.I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish,写作训练： 假设你是李华， 你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。 1.制定复习计划，树立信心 2.坚持锻炼身体。 3.保持良好睡眠 注意：词数100词左右 可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯 energetic,Dear Jack: I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. Id like to give you some advice. First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second , take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, dont stay up late studying. It is very important /would be a good idea to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day. I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.,范文讲解： 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的开头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。,Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that (-ing现在分词用法) our library is going to buy books, Id like to give you some suggestions.（写作意图） What we need most (主语从句) are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.,In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is (表语从句) why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters (-ed过去分词用法), present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. No