高考英语写作高分策略.ppt

Writing,高考英语写作高分策略,高考书面表达题,2010湖南高考 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： 1、简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动； 2、谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意： 1、词数不少于120个； 2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,2009年湖南高考 假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下： 1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情； 2. 介绍你处理该事的方式； 3. 谈谈你的感想。 注意： 1. 词数不少于120个； 2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。,Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?,1.The character of this party is that it relates peoples lives.,2.The most striking feature of this party is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.,3.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.,4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.,_,_,_,_,影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料,A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜. B. 句型结构运用灵活多变.,人靠衣装，文靠词装,Practice,Find some similar words or phrases of the followings,1. think 2.clever,in ones opinion/view Personally On ones part As for sb On a personal note hold the view that As far as sb be concerned,wise bright smart intelligent cute,改变句子结构,与众不同,1.Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.,It was not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began.,2.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.,How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.,3.Our school is very beautiful and there are many trees.It is not far from Wanhua Cave.,Our School is very beautiful with many trees, which is not far from Wanhua Cave.,改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化,1.He got excited when he heard the news. _ the news, he got excited. 2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. _, the girl went home.,Hearing,Hungry and thirsty,Rewrite the sentences,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一: 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,To improve his English, he studies hard.,Journey to the West,方法二:巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”.,方法二: 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句),Poor as/though he was, he was happy.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三：尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,影响给分的因素之三： 行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成 正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,使用恰当的连接词,first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least,and; too; as well as; along with; together with,for example; for instance; like; such as; as to,but; however; while; though; on the contrary,because; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore,in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion,whats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; furthermore,2008年湖南高考 请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容： 1. 对该人物的简单介绍。 2. 喜欢该人物的理由。 3. 从该人物身上得到的启示。,William Shakespeare Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well., _ _,影响给分的因素之四： 文章的思想,独到的见解是写作增分的亮点,In an English speech competition,you are asked to deseribe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.,I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.,小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解,One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded. Suppose you are Li Hua and Wang Ping please tell us what you did with the bird.,Practice,解题步骤：,审语境： 审人称： 审时态： 抓关键词：,一个星期六的下午，李华和王平在树林里玩。他们在地上发现一只受伤的小鸟。 supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping. We Please tell us what you did with the bird. 过去时 What you did,did,细节描写,巧妙构思,took it home,buried it when it was dead,made a nest for it,took it to the hospital,bought some medicine,took care of it,展开细节,范文 Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home. I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat. Some days later, the bird recovered. We took it out and let it return to the woods. I thought we had done so good a thing. We put the bird in my hat and took it to the animal hospital. The doctor said one of its wings was hurt. He gave us some medicine and t